for The Incredible Flutterhulk6/28/2012 c2 Guest
Awesome job! I always wanted to see something where Fluttershy becomes a Hulk-like character. I hope you produce more chapters very soon!
Awesome job! I always wanted to see something where Fluttershy becomes a Hulk-like character. I hope you produce more chapters very soon!
3/21/2012 c2
18He Who See's
How this story hasn't gotten more reviews ad why you haven't updated in so long is beyond me!
18He Who See'sHow this story hasn't gotten more reviews ad why you haven't updated in so long is beyond me!
12/12/2011 c2
9avatoa
Aw damn it, I hate the back-story behind the Hulk. Especially when it happens to a sweetheart like Fluttershy.
9avatoaAw damn it, I hate the back-story behind the Hulk. Especially when it happens to a sweetheart like Fluttershy.
11/30/2011 c2 Flutterhulkbuster1
please update! thanks, and awesome story!
please update! thanks, and awesome story!
9/4/2011 c2
37Wolvmbm
As a fan of the Incredible Hulk, I really love this story so far. Especially the little easter eggs callbacks to the old Hulk Franchise...I mean with Fluttershy's new name and old Stan the pony. :D
I almost am curious to ask if we will be meeting any other Marvel heroes in this tale of yours ? :D
I mean it just too good to pass up with the cast of My little Pony Friendship is Magic.
As even I wonder if anyone of Fluttershy's friends knows of her condition ? :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one. :)
37WolvmbmAs a fan of the Incredible Hulk, I really love this story so far. Especially the little easter eggs callbacks to the old Hulk Franchise...I mean with Fluttershy's new name and old Stan the pony. :D
I almost am curious to ask if we will be meeting any other Marvel heroes in this tale of yours ? :D
I mean it just too good to pass up with the cast of My little Pony Friendship is Magic.
As even I wonder if anyone of Fluttershy's friends knows of her condition ? :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one. :)
9/4/2011 c1 Wolvmbm
Now THIS is a story. :D
Combining two of my most favorite things in the world: The Incredible Hulk and Fluttershy into one tale. :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great idea like this one, as I cannot wait to see what you come up within this story of yours. ;)
Now THIS is a story. :D
Combining two of my most favorite things in the world: The Incredible Hulk and Fluttershy into one tale. :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great idea like this one, as I cannot wait to see what you come up within this story of yours. ;)
7/9/2011 c1 RHJunior
All you've done here is copy the script from the Incredible Hulk movie and write ponies into the roles! If you really want to impress us, do something ORIGINAL with this concept.
All you've done here is copy the script from the Incredible Hulk movie and write ponies into the roles! If you really want to impress us, do something ORIGINAL with this concept.
7/9/2011 c2 Woog
I'm loving this fic, it's well written and humorous and a joy to read.
And I love those little references too.
I look forward to more, thanks for writing!
I'm loving this fic, it's well written and humorous and a joy to read.
And I love those little references too.
I look forward to more, thanks for writing!
7/7/2011 c2 DreadedCandiru2
So Miss Blue lives at "1961 DITZY Avenue"; that can mean only one thing...she has a nickname based on the amblyopia she's cursed with.
So Miss Blue lives at "1961 DITZY Avenue"; that can mean only one thing...she has a nickname based on the amblyopia she's cursed with.
7/6/2011 c2
1MorenoX25
I don't like this chapter. I love it*Rarity face*
I spot a few errors like You're=your but nothing that get in the way of the story.
MMM...Louise Ferrigno and Stan... *I see what you did there*
About the spanish dialog; When the filly cry: "¡Madre! ¡Madre!" that sound wierd, kids don't call their mom with the equivalent of *mother* they usually call them *Mamá* or *Mami* (Mom and Mommy respectively.)
Also with: ¡Eso era asombroso,.. It should be "fue" instead of "era" a commoun mistake when using translators.
¿Usted me piensa podría conseguir una entrevista de usted? the mistake here is that is phrased strangely. this question can be written in A LOT of different ways, here just some examples:
¿Puedo hacerle una entrevista?
¿Cree que podría darnos/darme una entrevista?
¿Sería posible que nos diera una entrevista?
All of these work fine.
Sorry if I come off as a Grammar Nazi. But I love my language so much and mistakes like these bother me (just a tiny pinch). Thats one of the reasons I don't read Fanfic in Spanish, nobody can write correctly in Spanish.Ever. (Got a little off track, didn't I)
Long story short. I love this fic and I just wanted to help.
I hope you find my suggestions useful.
Until next time.
1MorenoX25I don't like this chapter. I love it*Rarity face*
I spot a few errors like You're=your but nothing that get in the way of the story.
MMM...Louise Ferrigno and Stan... *I see what you did there*
About the spanish dialog; When the filly cry: "¡Madre! ¡Madre!" that sound wierd, kids don't call their mom with the equivalent of *mother* they usually call them *Mamá* or *Mami* (Mom and Mommy respectively.)
Also with: ¡Eso era asombroso,.. It should be "fue" instead of "era" a commoun mistake when using translators.
¿Usted me piensa podría conseguir una entrevista de usted? the mistake here is that is phrased strangely. this question can be written in A LOT of different ways, here just some examples:
¿Puedo hacerle una entrevista?
¿Cree que podría darnos/darme una entrevista?
¿Sería posible que nos diera una entrevista?
All of these work fine.
Sorry if I come off as a Grammar Nazi. But I love my language so much and mistakes like these bother me (just a tiny pinch). Thats one of the reasons I don't read Fanfic in Spanish, nobody can write correctly in Spanish.Ever. (Got a little off track, didn't I)
Long story short. I love this fic and I just wanted to help.
I hope you find my suggestions useful.
Until next time.
7/6/2011 c1 MorenoX25
Finally! A Flutterhulk story, I've been waiting ages for it.
So far it's great. But I got to ask. Why is fluttershy in Argentina(can't think in a pony pun) she should be in Brazil(Las favelas in Rio de Janeiro) but that just nitpicking.
This fic is *so awesome*(RD face)
Finally! A Flutterhulk story, I've been waiting ages for it.
So far it's great. But I got to ask. Why is fluttershy in Argentina(can't think in a pony pun) she should be in Brazil(Las favelas in Rio de Janeiro) but that just nitpicking.
This fic is *so awesome*(RD face)
7/6/2011 c1
13largefish8
read the current chapters. Nice to see you went with the better version of the movie. Hope to see more soon.
13largefish8read the current chapters. Nice to see you went with the better version of the movie. Hope to see more soon.
