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1QueenAphrodite
This story was amazing. I loved the character development, and how you brought Dany in at the end. Also, I love Jaime, but not in this story. He met a fitting end!
1QueenAphroditeThis story was amazing. I loved the character development, and how you brought Dany in at the end. Also, I love Jaime, but not in this story. He met a fitting end!
11/15/2012 c29
1tiibouchina
Jaime finally got what was coming for him :) I have a soft spot for him in some other fics but this was the only way to go in this one. A brilliant story and I've enjoyed reading it so much so far!
1tiibouchinaJaime finally got what was coming for him :) I have a soft spot for him in some other fics but this was the only way to go in this one. A brilliant story and I've enjoyed reading it so much so far!
7/27/2012 c4
5Bess Woodville
Evie shouldn't have judged Viserys so early... Such a shame that we will not see more of the targayens
5Bess WoodvilleEvie shouldn't have judged Viserys so early... Such a shame that we will not see more of the targayens
7/27/2012 c1 Bess Woodville
A very good start! I hope that she'll fall in love with VISERYS at the end :))
A very good start! I hope that she'll fall in love with VISERYS at the end :))
7/18/2012 c2 Guest
I love this story, I was happy when I found it because I am really interested in the series and when it ended the second season I was sad. The third season will be coming too far along and I can't get enough of it.
I love this story, I was happy when I found it because I am really interested in the series and when it ended the second season I was sad. The third season will be coming too far along and I can't get enough of it.
6/28/2012 c30 Guest
the eighth month is August though... October is the 10th...
the eighth month is August though... October is the 10th...
6/9/2012 c30
2ForeverMrs.Padfoot
Great story 3 Even though I haven't watched much of The Game of Thrones I still enjoyed reading this fic. Spent my time on this instead of studying for exams..ah well it was good :) maybe you could write an epilogue?
2ForeverMrs.PadfootGreat story 3 Even though I haven't watched much of The Game of Thrones I still enjoyed reading this fic. Spent my time on this instead of studying for exams..ah well it was good :) maybe you could write an epilogue?
4/13/2012 c30 sunnygirl5786
I just found this story...it was wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
I just found this story...it was wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
3/11/2012 c30
6taytayfanatical
This is by far one of the best things I've ever read. You portrayed the entire idea of 'A Song of Fire and Ice', or rather, 'Game of Thrones' perfectly. The themes, symbolism and characters were beautifully captured. Seriously, it was beautifully written. I'm glad you went into detail with the sex and rape scenes, only because it exposed the already original sexual exploits of the actual series. I know some readers who don't really mention the carnal desires of man and what it means for the women. But reading the way you wrote it gave me some hope that some writers still understand certain themes of the series instead of pushing it aside because they deem it crude. But I believe it's still important, no matter how embarrassing it maybe to write it.
And I absolutely loved Evie. I believe she was well though out and her actions were normal for a 16-17 year-old girl going through those dark times. As a woman, she would of course be attracted to a dashing man like Robb, but she's still too young to further it by much and still bound by familial expectations. And I loved her friendship with Dany. I feel like she doesn't get enough attention from authors because they're so focused on a romantic aspect with other characters and have nothing to do with the Targaeryans. But the link between Dany, Robb and Evie was very creative.
All in all, I think you did a fantastic job. In other cases, I feel Evie might be portrayed as a Mary Sue, but because it IS Game of Thrones, certain qualities of a character and aspects of a plot are necessary because of the way it was originally written. So...you're awesome and I love your other work. :)
6taytayfanaticalThis is by far one of the best things I've ever read. You portrayed the entire idea of 'A Song of Fire and Ice', or rather, 'Game of Thrones' perfectly. The themes, symbolism and characters were beautifully captured. Seriously, it was beautifully written. I'm glad you went into detail with the sex and rape scenes, only because it exposed the already original sexual exploits of the actual series. I know some readers who don't really mention the carnal desires of man and what it means for the women. But reading the way you wrote it gave me some hope that some writers still understand certain themes of the series instead of pushing it aside because they deem it crude. But I believe it's still important, no matter how embarrassing it maybe to write it.
And I absolutely loved Evie. I believe she was well though out and her actions were normal for a 16-17 year-old girl going through those dark times. As a woman, she would of course be attracted to a dashing man like Robb, but she's still too young to further it by much and still bound by familial expectations. And I loved her friendship with Dany. I feel like she doesn't get enough attention from authors because they're so focused on a romantic aspect with other characters and have nothing to do with the Targaeryans. But the link between Dany, Robb and Evie was very creative.
All in all, I think you did a fantastic job. In other cases, I feel Evie might be portrayed as a Mary Sue, but because it IS Game of Thrones, certain qualities of a character and aspects of a plot are necessary because of the way it was originally written. So...you're awesome and I love your other work. :)
2/5/2012 c30
2Darth Rapture
What a lovely way to end the story, with a sweet moment between Evianlyn and Robb. I liked how you went through what happened to all the characters. It's sweet that Margaery and Mullion have a son now as well...little Octobron. How cute :)
2Darth RaptureWhat a lovely way to end the story, with a sweet moment between Evianlyn and Robb. I liked how you went through what happened to all the characters. It's sweet that Margaery and Mullion have a son now as well...little Octobron. How cute :)
2/5/2012 c29 Darth Rapture
Oh wow. What an intense chapter! Finally Evianlyn managed to kill Jaime - and I was definitely not expecting that Mullion would swear fealty to Robb.
Oh wow. What an intense chapter! Finally Evianlyn managed to kill Jaime - and I was definitely not expecting that Mullion would swear fealty to Robb.
1/24/2012 c30 I and Leo
I really enjoyed reading your story I am definetly going to read your others ones!
I really enjoyed reading your story I am definetly going to read your others ones!
