for In The Name4/29 c5 Susan L. Grabon
Great story!
Great story!
3/17 c5 
1katesari
I like this! This was really well written. I enjoyed reading it. And a nice name Gabriel and also nice to find him a brother in Tony. Wouldnt mind reading a sequel or an epilogue! Bye
1katesariI like this! This was really well written. I enjoyed reading it. And a nice name Gabriel and also nice to find him a brother in Tony. Wouldnt mind reading a sequel or an epilogue! Bye
12/30/2012 c5 39McCountryGirl
What's with Tony and bad guys in limos? La Grenouille, Walter, who's next?
39McCountryGirlWhat's with Tony and bad guys in limos? La Grenouille, Walter, who's next?
12/30/2012 c4 McCountryGirl
Callen's mother's name was Clara, she was killed by a Comescu on a Romanian beach while Callen was building sand castles. And oh snap! Gibbs must be shocked!
Callen's mother's name was Clara, she was killed by a Comescu on a Romanian beach while Callen was building sand castles. And oh snap! Gibbs must be shocked!
12/30/2012 c3 McCountryGirl
90 year old black male in a Pennsylvania retirement home - my reaction 'Oh my God, LJ?' would the mystery caller's phone belong to Leroy Jethro Moore?
90 year old black male in a Pennsylvania retirement home - my reaction 'Oh my God, LJ?' would the mystery caller's phone belong to Leroy Jethro Moore?
12/19/2012 c5 11AquaRias
Well that was an extremely anti-climatic ending to a story that seemed like it was heading in a much more intricate direction regarding the plot line. There was a heap of lead up, only to resolve the conflict in a matter of seconds, and end the story? Ruined it.
11AquaRiasWell that was an extremely anti-climatic ending to a story that seemed like it was heading in a much more intricate direction regarding the plot line. There was a heap of lead up, only to resolve the conflict in a matter of seconds, and end the story? Ruined it.
11/9/2012 c5 Guest
oohhh pls pls think about a squeaquel, about how they get to know each other or maybe months down the track when they known each other, maybe get them to work a case together where both teams came together, maybe get tony and g kidnapped together and see how the go, but pls do a squeakquel of same cramd
oohhh pls pls think about a squeaquel, about how they get to know each other or maybe months down the track when they known each other, maybe get them to work a case together where both teams came together, maybe get tony and g kidnapped together and see how the go, but pls do a squeakquel of same cramd
9/27/2012 c5 Troyella-Tiva 4ever
This is an awesome story. I would love to know what happens next. A sequel would be fun. You should write a sequel.
This is an awesome story. I would love to know what happens next. A sequel would be fun. You should write a sequel.
9/10/2012 c5 hypersreak
I liked it:) You should do a sequal since they know that they are brothers now, if not this was stil a good ending for them I think.
I liked it:) You should do a sequal since they know that they are brothers now, if not this was stil a good ending for them I think.
8/13/2012 c5 megamom2
What a great story! Creative plot, terrific dialog, spot-on characterization and fast-paced action! I really enjoyed it!
Feels a bit incomplete not to know why Walter wanted Callen and Tony dead and what they ended up with from their mom's will...
What a great story! Creative plot, terrific dialog, spot-on characterization and fast-paced action! I really enjoyed it!
Feels a bit incomplete not to know why Walter wanted Callen and Tony dead and what they ended up with from their mom's will...
7/29/2012 c5 5sarah999
I love the story, though there were some confusing parts. Or part. Only one. I'd hoped there would have been more of the reunion between Tony and G, but...it is an alright ending without it. I admit to liking it; the ending.
5sarah999I love the story, though there were some confusing parts. Or part. Only one. I'd hoped there would have been more of the reunion between Tony and G, but...it is an alright ending without it. I admit to liking it; the ending.
7/21/2012 c5 Netchka3
Love the story. Will there be a sequel at some point? I want to read more of the brothers and their adventures at work and off duty. :-)
Love the story. Will there be a sequel at some point? I want to read more of the brothers and their adventures at work and off duty. :-)
4/17/2012 c5 18Silver Ame Tsukino
I enjoyed this story. Callen and Tony being related? Yay! DiNozzo Sr being an **? Yay!
18Silver Ame TsukinoI enjoyed this story. Callen and Tony being related? Yay! DiNozzo Sr being an **? Yay!
2/6/2012 c5 3coloradospace
I loved this fic! I hope you'll write a sequel cause I'd really like to see how Tony and Callen interact now that they know they are brothers.
3coloradospaceI loved this fic! I hope you'll write a sequel cause I'd really like to see how Tony and Callen interact now that they know they are brothers.
2/5/2012 c5 witchy78
Great story. I've never read a crossover with these two shows before but i must say that i really enjoyed it. The end was indeed well done too, pointing to something we're looking for in NCIS LA. Of course i would love to read a sequel, i would love to read how tony and Gabriel will deal with this relationship as its new for both of them : in one word i want more :-)
Great story. I've never read a crossover with these two shows before but i must say that i really enjoyed it. The end was indeed well done too, pointing to something we're looking for in NCIS LA. Of course i would love to read a sequel, i would love to read how tony and Gabriel will deal with this relationship as its new for both of them : in one word i want more :-)