for Life Goes On11/8/2012 c1 Floatfoot
Hmm.. Quite good, for someone younger than fourteen at the time? How old were you? I couldn't write something like this even now XD
Hmm.. Quite good, for someone younger than fourteen at the time? How old were you? I couldn't write something like this even now XD
7/12/2011 c1 xxx
I like it, interesting look into the future of those two. Wish it was longer. :-)
I like it, interesting look into the future of those two. Wish it was longer. :-)
7/11/2011 c1 Molly
It wasn't actually that bad. Could use some polishing, but overall, it wasn't bad.
It wasn't actually that bad. Could use some polishing, but overall, it wasn't bad.
7/11/2011 c1 Unique Fantasiser
This is surprisingly good. Perhaps you should edit and polish a little, then continue the story line...Will Arya continue after Eragon?
This is surprisingly good. Perhaps you should edit and polish a little, then continue the story line...Will Arya continue after Eragon?