for About Face1/14/2012 c5 
11Grape Icies
It's only just begun? I'm intrigued. The experience is getting better and I'm seeing a better pacing. Way to put my foot in my mouth. XD I'm enjoying this. :'D thank you for that.
11Grape IciesIt's only just begun? I'm intrigued. The experience is getting better and I'm seeing a better pacing. Way to put my foot in my mouth. XD I'm enjoying this. :'D thank you for that.
1/14/2012 c4 Grape Icies
Pacing was prestine in this chapter. Omi and master fung's roles were definitely fitting. And the fact that Rai insists on treating Omi like an equal makes me satisfied. Onward to the next chapter!
Pacing was prestine in this chapter. Omi and master fung's roles were definitely fitting. And the fact that Rai insists on treating Omi like an equal makes me satisfied. Onward to the next chapter!
1/14/2012 c3 Grape Icies
I love that you know how to keep everyone on their toes. I love that Kim is so stubborn. I love that Rai cares. I love that she argues with clay. I love that I can believe her father.
But alas. I do have a piece of minor critism. I do it too, so I can easily recognize it. The plot feels pushed and forced. It's. Moving too fast and there's just a little too much hurt. If clay really knew her like he implies, it's slightly intuitive that he'd know to give her space until she wants to speak. He's very patient and it simply struck me as odd.
I love that you know how to keep everyone on their toes. I love that Kim is so stubborn. I love that Rai cares. I love that she argues with clay. I love that I can believe her father.
But alas. I do have a piece of minor critism. I do it too, so I can easily recognize it. The plot feels pushed and forced. It's. Moving too fast and there's just a little too much hurt. If clay really knew her like he implies, it's slightly intuitive that he'd know to give her space until she wants to speak. He's very patient and it simply struck me as odd.
1/14/2012 c2 Grape Icies
I love how you kept things light, but reminded us that she's still hurt and that Rai is still a stranger to her. The shower scene was especially funny. :3 your portrayls are reaching goddess status and I love you for it. So glad I found the story.
I love how you kept things light, but reminded us that she's still hurt and that Rai is still a stranger to her. The shower scene was especially funny. :3 your portrayls are reaching goddess status and I love you for it. So glad I found the story.
1/14/2012 c1 Grape Icies
I.like your story. :x so much so, I will review every single chapter and tell you what I love and my honest opinion about every single one. I love your flowing, descriptive writing style. I love how everyone's so in character. I love that you made Kimiko strong. I love that you're breaking the status quo. So looking forward to the rest! :D
I.like your story. :x so much so, I will review every single chapter and tell you what I love and my honest opinion about every single one. I love your flowing, descriptive writing style. I love how everyone's so in character. I love that you made Kimiko strong. I love that you're breaking the status quo. So looking forward to the rest! :D
9/18/2011 c7 Winter
please update soon! I really love this story, and the chemistry between Kimiko and Raimundo.
please update soon! I really love this story, and the chemistry between Kimiko and Raimundo.
8/31/2011 c7 zoe
Please update right now
Please update right now
8/28/2011 c7 8tennisgurl13
This story is so interesting! Its AU but still completely in character! I really find Raimundo to be exactly the same even though he's in a different environment. A lot of times when people write a story with him in it, they get him down for the most part but they tend to type cast him a little too much where as you get him down perfectly with little actions like not letting Omi win. It really makes a difference! I can't wait to read the next chapter please update soon!
8tennisgurl13This story is so interesting! Its AU but still completely in character! I really find Raimundo to be exactly the same even though he's in a different environment. A lot of times when people write a story with him in it, they get him down for the most part but they tend to type cast him a little too much where as you get him down perfectly with little actions like not letting Omi win. It really makes a difference! I can't wait to read the next chapter please update soon!
8/24/2011 c7 2fedoraStorm
Oh, Kimiko, you can't fool the Fungster. Master Fung is all-knowing, even in AU fanfics.
2fedoraStormOh, Kimiko, you can't fool the Fungster. Master Fung is all-knowing, even in AU fanfics.
8/24/2011 c7 12Raikimluva22
I always /thought/ Master Fung was pretty bad ass lol. Go him for being all like "Do I know u, punk?"
Jk jk lol. ;P But seriously. I wish I was related to him. (If he were even real..)
Any who really good chapter! It just keeps getting better :D
Can't wait for ur next update!
-RKL22
12Raikimluva22I always /thought/ Master Fung was pretty bad ass lol. Go him for being all like "Do I know u, punk?"
Jk jk lol. ;P But seriously. I wish I was related to him. (If he were even real..)
Any who really good chapter! It just keeps getting better :D
Can't wait for ur next update!
-RKL22
8/23/2011 c7 1XemlovezyouX11233
This was another great chapter.please update soon I'm constantly checking for updates on this story I love it so much
1XemlovezyouX11233This was another great chapter.please update soon I'm constantly checking for updates on this story I love it so much