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You never disappoint =) I need to know who did that to her car, but...I have a hunch...=)
You never disappoint =) I need to know who did that to her car, but...I have a hunch...=)
8/23/2011 c7 f3296
Grrrr I just wanna punch makuto is the freaking face! But anyways I liked how you made it so that Rai is a really good guy and im wondering what is he keeping from kim o.o YOU SHOULD TOTALLY DO A FIGHT SCENE WITH RAI AND MAPUTO! Just sayen :p
Grrrr I just wanna punch makuto is the freaking face! But anyways I liked how you made it so that Rai is a really good guy and im wondering what is he keeping from kim o.o YOU SHOULD TOTALLY DO A FIGHT SCENE WITH RAI AND MAPUTO! Just sayen :p
8/23/2011 c7 SunDragon27
you are an amazing writer. im just gonna state that. update soon!
you are an amazing writer. im just gonna state that. update soon!
8/16/2011 c6 
19TheXGrayXLady
I adore this. Absolutely adore this. Kimiko is very much in charater and so is everyone else. There have been a lot of AUs -like a lot of AUs- floating around here recently and most of them haven't been that good. The authors think that AU means that they can change the personalities around however they so please, and they typically make Kimiko a weak, weepy girl who needs Raimundo to sweep in and save her.
Anywho, I sort of agree with you about the sports bits. Very hard to write and make interesting (I've run into the same problem with showdowns), but you do it wonderfully. Personally, I've always been a soccer girl myself, but I know the softball people you're talking about. Kim seems like that type of person.
Nice job. I eagerly await your next update.
19TheXGrayXLadyI adore this. Absolutely adore this. Kimiko is very much in charater and so is everyone else. There have been a lot of AUs -like a lot of AUs- floating around here recently and most of them haven't been that good. The authors think that AU means that they can change the personalities around however they so please, and they typically make Kimiko a weak, weepy girl who needs Raimundo to sweep in and save her.
Anywho, I sort of agree with you about the sports bits. Very hard to write and make interesting (I've run into the same problem with showdowns), but you do it wonderfully. Personally, I've always been a soccer girl myself, but I know the softball people you're talking about. Kim seems like that type of person.
Nice job. I eagerly await your next update.
8/14/2011 c6 Secretiveninjathingy101
This has to be one of the best fanfictions I've ever read ! I normally hate AU's too but this one is very well written while still staying true to all the XS characters personalities. Well done =)
This has to be one of the best fanfictions I've ever read ! I normally hate AU's too but this one is very well written while still staying true to all the XS characters personalities. Well done =)
8/14/2011 c6 SunDragon27
Okay I really enjoyed this chapter. The basketball game was epic and really did show the competition between the two. I really like the way you wrote it. And I also think that Kims ex is a total freak. He's seriously freaking me out! But its all good cause thats a good story. And I just love Rai and Kim I really hope there is something developing there. :)
Okay I really enjoyed this chapter. The basketball game was epic and really did show the competition between the two. I really like the way you wrote it. And I also think that Kims ex is a total freak. He's seriously freaking me out! But its all good cause thats a good story. And I just love Rai and Kim I really hope there is something developing there. :)
8/14/2011 c6 Zoe
This is a really good story. please update soon.
This is a really good story. please update soon.
8/13/2011 c6 Xiaolin Fan
I'm pretty tough and I play softball but I dance so I'm graceful as well this was an amazing chapter as always update soon
I'm pretty tough and I play softball but I dance so I'm graceful as well this was an amazing chapter as always update soon
8/13/2011 c6 18xXRandomnessXx
For some one who doesnt like sports that was pretty amazingly written, yeah updates sooner! Cant wait for you to update! ^-^
18xXRandomnessXxFor some one who doesnt like sports that was pretty amazingly written, yeah updates sooner! Cant wait for you to update! ^-^
8/13/2011 c6 kaylee216
a great story! pls update soon!
a great story! pls update soon!
8/13/2011 c6 1XemlovezyouX11233
This.was.an.amazing.chapter. It was worth the wait even tho i hate waiting. i'm liking the competing between rai/kim. Please update soon I love this story.
1XemlovezyouX11233This.was.an.amazing.chapter. It was worth the wait even tho i hate waiting. i'm liking the competing between rai/kim. Please update soon I love this story.