for Organisation REI6/14 c34 
3Seeker of the Skies
You're probably not going to like this but I think you reallly could of wriiten the last two chapters better. Rei is a really good story but the writing is not always up to scratch. You need to give it more love. A good mood to have is that until you publish it, a chapter will always be a draft, so even if it's bad once you've firstly wrote it there's nothing stopping you from turning it around and making it great.
Plus I think Lenne needed's hug, don't you agree.
3Seeker of the SkiesYou're probably not going to like this but I think you reallly could of wriiten the last two chapters better. Rei is a really good story but the writing is not always up to scratch. You need to give it more love. A good mood to have is that until you publish it, a chapter will always be a draft, so even if it's bad once you've firstly wrote it there's nothing stopping you from turning it around and making it great.
Plus I think Lenne needed's hug, don't you agree.
5/30 c32 0erbayunFang
Too many 'nyans,' Kupo...I almost wrote 'cupcakes there :P
Good chapter, really didn't see Lenne's pregnancy coming. Maybe I should've, she did get raped, and you're not supposed to have too much caffeine when you're pregnant, apparently...
I really do like this story, it's one of my favorites, so please don't stop it :)
See ya at school Serah!
0yF
Too many 'nyans,' Kupo...I almost wrote 'cupcakes there :P
Good chapter, really didn't see Lenne's pregnancy coming. Maybe I should've, she did get raped, and you're not supposed to have too much caffeine when you're pregnant, apparently...
I really do like this story, it's one of my favorites, so please don't stop it :)
See ya at school Serah!
0yF
3/10 c30 0erbayunFang
REVIEW! Ya know, like I keep telling you at school, reviews aren't everything. Some people might just be too busy to review, or they don't have the time that we do. Be calm, darling Moon Child, be calm :P
Update soon, Moon Child!
0yF
REVIEW! Ya know, like I keep telling you at school, reviews aren't everything. Some people might just be too busy to review, or they don't have the time that we do. Be calm, darling Moon Child, be calm :P
Update soon, Moon Child!
0yF
3/10 c29 0erbayunFang
REVIEW! I really loved the kiss, Serah, I didn't expect it AT ALL!
Onto the next chappie!
0yF
REVIEW! I really loved the kiss, Serah, I didn't expect it AT ALL!
Onto the next chappie!
0yF
2/6 c28 3Seeker of the Skies
I forgot how funny he's a lesbian sounded until I read it just then.
This was a good chapter, you've been writing REI alot better lately.
3Seeker of the SkiesI forgot how funny he's a lesbian sounded until I read it just then.
This was a good chapter, you've been writing REI alot better lately.
2/6 c27 Seeker of the Skies
I just lost my stylist for a moment there, turn's out I was sitting on it.
Good chapter, that little bit at the end with paine made me want to rip that women's face clean off.
I just lost my stylist for a moment there, turn's out I was sitting on it.
Good chapter, that little bit at the end with paine made me want to rip that women's face clean off.
10/12/2012 c26 3Seeker of the Skies
That was really good reira-chan, written greatly. It probably isn't good that darker themes to come to you so easily, it makes me feel sorry for your characters, but that's being very hypocritical of me to say looking at my stories.
3Seeker of the SkiesThat was really good reira-chan, written greatly. It probably isn't good that darker themes to come to you so easily, it makes me feel sorry for your characters, but that's being very hypocritical of me to say looking at my stories.
10/7/2012 c26 12PoeticNonsenseNinjaStyle
Well that was sad. I hate that kind of abuse. It's sick and gross. Oh well, it was a good chapter, I just didn't like it very much. Sorry.
I like Inuyasha! I like the InuKag pairing. People who like InuKik pairing should go die in Hades. (I'm reading Percy Jackson stuff lately _)
12PoeticNonsenseNinjaStyleWell that was sad. I hate that kind of abuse. It's sick and gross. Oh well, it was a good chapter, I just didn't like it very much. Sorry.
I like Inuyasha! I like the InuKag pairing. People who like InuKik pairing should go die in Hades. (I'm reading Percy Jackson stuff lately _)
10/5/2012 c25 3Seeker of the Skies
Nice to know what you think of my readers. Though not all of them are assholes, but the ones reading ignorance are being very inconsiderate right now. People review ET casually and they are nice reviews too so I like the people reading that story but no one has reviewed Ignorance for the past three chapters no matter how much I've begged them too. So I'm getting very pissed off with them. If no one reviews the next chapter I'm going to be out for blood.
And I just wrote all that without saying anything about your chapter, Probably should have said something by now. Nice chapter.
3Seeker of the SkiesNice to know what you think of my readers. Though not all of them are assholes, but the ones reading ignorance are being very inconsiderate right now. People review ET casually and they are nice reviews too so I like the people reading that story but no one has reviewed Ignorance for the past three chapters no matter how much I've begged them too. So I'm getting very pissed off with them. If no one reviews the next chapter I'm going to be out for blood.
And I just wrote all that without saying anything about your chapter, Probably should have said something by now. Nice chapter.
10/4/2012 c25 12PoeticNonsenseNinjaStyle
Am I one of those two reviewers? If not, I'm sorry. I'll review better from now on. Anyway, good chapter. I really don't like Seymour; he scares me.
12PoeticNonsenseNinjaStyleAm I one of those two reviewers? If not, I'm sorry. I'll review better from now on. Anyway, good chapter. I really don't like Seymour; he scares me.
9/3/2012 c24 3Seeker of the Skies
Nathan used to be my favourite player but now Luke is, I couldn't believe he could be just that blatantly rude to us like that. And what mum said was more closer to "their so close we could kidnap them and hold them for ransom" but both have the same meaning in the end.
And that is what you get for asking if I wrote a football review for the last chapter.
3Seeker of the SkiesNathan used to be my favourite player but now Luke is, I couldn't believe he could be just that blatantly rude to us like that. And what mum said was more closer to "their so close we could kidnap them and hold them for ransom" but both have the same meaning in the end.
And that is what you get for asking if I wrote a football review for the last chapter.
9/3/2012 c23 Seeker of the Skies
Blue birds playing as I'm writing whatever the hell this is and your walking circles in my room. Why are you walking in circles in my room reira-chan?
Blue birds playing as I'm writing whatever the hell this is and your walking circles in my room. Why are you walking in circles in my room reira-chan?