for Pointless4/26/2012 c9 
2Avardsin
Thanks for story. Lmao lying and sneaky backstabbing... thats ironic. they are the terms I would fit with Octivian :p Go Artemis or Diana POW-WOW.. hope for update soon :D
2AvardsinThanks for story. Lmao lying and sneaky backstabbing... thats ironic. they are the terms I would fit with Octivian :p Go Artemis or Diana POW-WOW.. hope for update soon :D
4/25/2012 c8 2mrpuppy
So, wait, let me get this, John and Artemis? Clearly, Percy is still awesome but John gets me confused too. I hope it's Percy 3 Artemis
2mrpuppySo, wait, let me get this, John and Artemis? Clearly, Percy is still awesome but John gets me confused too. I hope it's Percy 3 Artemis
11/12/2011 c5 I.Tripped.Over.Reality
Whoa well written! I don't think SoN was out when you wrote this chapter but it sounds quite similar to the SoN end so awesome :D
Whoa well written! I don't think SoN was out when you wrote this chapter but it sounds quite similar to the SoN end so awesome :D
11/12/2011 c2 I.Tripped.Over.Reality
Love it :D I'd review longer but I wanna read the next chapter! You write awesomely :D
Love it :D I'd review longer but I wanna read the next chapter! You write awesomely :D
7/14/2011 c3 2thaliagrace21
Excellent grammar. The time is confusing though.. Percy was in the war?.. Eh no but keep writing!
2thaliagrace21Excellent grammar. The time is confusing though.. Percy was in the war?.. Eh no but keep writing!
7/13/2011 c3 3L3G3NDARYNICK
Still love it! And why you hatin phoenix? Like you could write that well! LOL. But anyway, the only CC would be too help fill us in on whats happening a little more.
I was kinda confused. But it was really good, I'm hoping for another update soon!
3L3G3NDARYNICKStill love it! And why you hatin phoenix? Like you could write that well! LOL. But anyway, the only CC would be too help fill us in on whats happening a little more.
I was kinda confused. But it was really good, I'm hoping for another update soon!
7/13/2011 c2 L3G3NDARYNICK
I am impressed. It is very good. It isnt far enough into it to know what's going on, but I like that. LOL i sound like an old guy! Idk i take writing very seriously :P But anyways, I like it so far. Keep writing :)
I am impressed. It is very good. It isnt far enough into it to know what's going on, but I like that. LOL i sound like an old guy! Idk i take writing very seriously :P But anyways, I like it so far. Keep writing :)
7/13/2011 c1 L3G3NDARYNICK
A story you can add onto. I like it. Grammatically correct and good writing, even when it's like a flashback/Prolougue. Very good, keep it up.
From the coolest kid in the city, Nick
A story you can add onto. I like it. Grammatically correct and good writing, even when it's like a flashback/Prolougue. Very good, keep it up.
From the coolest kid in the city, Nick