for All Out Brawl2/15 c4 Patrick O'Loughlin
Hey man, when are we gonna more of this story coming? I love reading it :)
Hey man, when are we gonna more of this story coming? I love reading it :)
9/8/2012 c4 I like this stor
DUDE please continue the story it"s so awesome I considered this as my favorite hahaha this story is AWESOME please continue it
DUDE please continue the story it"s so awesome I considered this as my favorite hahaha this story is AWESOME please continue it
4/20/2012 c4 
14ChibiSoulReader
I wonder how goku's hair stays point like while flying lol but anyways, so far this is awesome. If this was a movie I'd buy it. I love how all the characters meet up, and then the epic fight sceens were a major bonus. I love all of these charcaters and can not wait for the next chapter~
[CSR]
14ChibiSoulReaderI wonder how goku's hair stays point like while flying lol but anyways, so far this is awesome. If this was a movie I'd buy it. I love how all the characters meet up, and then the epic fight sceens were a major bonus. I love all of these charcaters and can not wait for the next chapter~
[CSR]
4/8/2012 c1 Patrick O'Loughlin
Hey mate, this is pure awesomeness. I'd really like to see what happens next, please keep the updates coming for this story :)
Hey mate, this is pure awesomeness. I'd really like to see what happens next, please keep the updates coming for this story :)
12/2/2011 c4 26BrenRome
WOW! Have you READ this chapter? Even if it IS short, it still never fails to impress me! I especially can't wait to see what villian pops up next and who's really pulling the string around here! Keep up the good work, bro!
26BrenRomeWOW! Have you READ this chapter? Even if it IS short, it still never fails to impress me! I especially can't wait to see what villian pops up next and who's really pulling the string around here! Keep up the good work, bro!
9/10/2011 c3 BrenRome
VERY NICE CHAPTER UPDATE. I really loved how you pointed out the similarities between Superman and Goku. I only watched a couple episodes of DragonBall when I was a kid, but I never got interested enough to learn the backstory. Until now that is.
The only complaint I really have was that I was expecting Willow to mistake Superman for being Chris Reeves and having him say something like "I'm sorry, Miss. You must have me mistaken for someone else." Oh well, maybe that will be in the next chapter.
Otherwise, PLEASE, PLEASE continue, and I hope to see more of these heroes enemies in upcoming chapters like Marjin Buu, Dark Willow, and maybe if we're lucky; my ultimate favorite Superman Villian of all time next to Lex Luthor and Darkseid; Metallo! Here's to hoping for some of these guys making an appearance later!
VERY NICE CHAPTER UPDATE. I really loved how you pointed out the similarities between Superman and Goku. I only watched a couple episodes of DragonBall when I was a kid, but I never got interested enough to learn the backstory. Until now that is.
The only complaint I really have was that I was expecting Willow to mistake Superman for being Chris Reeves and having him say something like "I'm sorry, Miss. You must have me mistaken for someone else." Oh well, maybe that will be in the next chapter.
Otherwise, PLEASE, PLEASE continue, and I hope to see more of these heroes enemies in upcoming chapters like Marjin Buu, Dark Willow, and maybe if we're lucky; my ultimate favorite Superman Villian of all time next to Lex Luthor and Darkseid; Metallo! Here's to hoping for some of these guys making an appearance later!
7/31/2011 c2 BrenRome
Sorry I never got to reviewing this in a while, but y'know, I've got a new girlfriend, who's on the site, in fact, but I finally got to a point where I can give you my thoughts in just two simple words: "***ing. Awesome." Great job with this, and I can't wait to see the heroes working together more, not to mention what Darksied had to do with all that.
Sorry I never got to reviewing this in a while, but y'know, I've got a new girlfriend, who's on the site, in fact, but I finally got to a point where I can give you my thoughts in just two simple words: "***ing. Awesome." Great job with this, and I can't wait to see the heroes working together more, not to mention what Darksied had to do with all that.
7/17/2011 c1 37LJ1983
Hey Thomas. Great stuff! I can't wait to read more. This is gonna be epic. Yes, I'm back. Just got my laptop back. Speak to you again. Take care, Laura xxx
37LJ1983Hey Thomas. Great stuff! I can't wait to read more. This is gonna be epic. Yes, I'm back. Just got my laptop back. Speak to you again. Take care, Laura xxx
7/15/2011 c1 26BrenRome
Hey, Thomas! Great story! I loved the interactions with all the characters and can't WAIT to see what happens next! BTW, on a side note, I have a similar story up now to this, although rather than it being about the STRONGEST heroes in the Multi-verse, it's actually a love note to all of my favorite childhood heroes. If you have the chance, check it out, it's pretty good. Otherwise, again; GREAT, GREAT WORK, and I can't wait to see more.
26BrenRomeHey, Thomas! Great story! I loved the interactions with all the characters and can't WAIT to see what happens next! BTW, on a side note, I have a similar story up now to this, although rather than it being about the STRONGEST heroes in the Multi-verse, it's actually a love note to all of my favorite childhood heroes. If you have the chance, check it out, it's pretty good. Otherwise, again; GREAT, GREAT WORK, and I can't wait to see more.