for Losing It1/5/2012 c1 
28EggDropSoup
I really enjoyed this story. :) it totally makes sense too. Again, wonderfully done. I wish I could speak in Hisoka's voice as well as you do. :) I liked that you didn't make him overly cranky and you showed how thoughtful and smart he was.
28EggDropSoupI really enjoyed this story. :) it totally makes sense too. Again, wonderfully done. I wish I could speak in Hisoka's voice as well as you do. :) I liked that you didn't make him overly cranky and you showed how thoughtful and smart he was.
1/2/2012 c1 YullenLover33
Y U NO MAKE HAPPY STORY! D: That was depressing...
Y U NO MAKE HAPPY STORY! D: That was depressing...
8/16/2011 c1 CCC
you should continue it's a good story
btw
(you should tell him and see how he feels the worst he could do is say no good luck!)
you should continue it's a good story
btw
(you should tell him and see how he feels the worst he could do is say no good luck!)
7/17/2011 c1 3jantolover16026
I know what your feeling. Before I had my first boyfriend, I was like "man I really want to date!" but there was a guy that I really liked. But I dont think I could ever confess to him. Then on one of my class field trips a different guy asked me out. But just two three days ago we broke up. But I was glad we broke up. Cause after awhile he started to get annoying. We were only dating for about three months. But my friend asked me bout the guy I have a crush on still, so possibly I'll ask him.
Enough bout me.
This was really good! I would love to read more!
3jantolover16026I know what your feeling. Before I had my first boyfriend, I was like "man I really want to date!" but there was a guy that I really liked. But I dont think I could ever confess to him. Then on one of my class field trips a different guy asked me out. But just two three days ago we broke up. But I was glad we broke up. Cause after awhile he started to get annoying. We were only dating for about three months. But my friend asked me bout the guy I have a crush on still, so possibly I'll ask him.
Enough bout me.
This was really good! I would love to read more!
7/17/2011 c1 19laurose
A good Hisoka POV. You've picked the parts of yourself which fit Hisoka. Good rhythm, too.
(Btw, you've missed out the name of the third person who came in. But that's a very good touch!)
19lauroseA good Hisoka POV. You've picked the parts of yourself which fit Hisoka. Good rhythm, too.
(Btw, you've missed out the name of the third person who came in. But that's a very good touch!)
7/16/2011 c1 1KatsueFox
I really like this, the emotions and confusion you describe fit Hisoka so well. I must admit that I love stories where the author puts their own feelings into the characters and manages to make it work - it feels convincing, and oh-so familiar! =)
1KatsueFoxI really like this, the emotions and confusion you describe fit Hisoka so well. I must admit that I love stories where the author puts their own feelings into the characters and manages to make it work - it feels convincing, and oh-so familiar! =)
7/16/2011 c1 Guest
Oh I know the pain of loving someone and being scared to confess to them, great story by the way
Oh I know the pain of loving someone and being scared to confess to them, great story by the way