for Adopted7/17/2012 c1 EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen
why the hell you name Bella (Isabella Marie Swan) to Isabella Bianca Scott Swan ewww, I hate read story author change bella name damn it. please do favor check your spelling and grammars.
why the hell you name Bella (Isabella Marie Swan) to Isabella Bianca Scott Swan ewww, I hate read story author change bella name damn it. please do favor check your spelling and grammars.
4/27/2012 c2 
6Stray-89
Are you retarded or something? Ever heard of spellcheck... Or you know plot...
6Stray-89Are you retarded or something? Ever heard of spellcheck... Or you know plot...
1/12/2012 c2 Hi
I like this story but you should probably correct the spelling mistakes and make sure it makes sense before you post the chapter, but otherwise its great :D
I like this story but you should probably correct the spelling mistakes and make sure it makes sense before you post the chapter, but otherwise its great :D
7/21/2011 c1 2seethesunlight346
Hello I just wanted to give you some advise. I haven't read it yet because from the start I noticed all these spelling
Mistakes that you were making and it would definately be easier for readers if you could use spell checker and make sure the story make sense. When that happens, I will definitely give it a go : )
2seethesunlight346Hello I just wanted to give you some advise. I haven't read it yet because from the start I noticed all these spelling
Mistakes that you were making and it would definately be easier for readers if you could use spell checker and make sure the story make sense. When that happens, I will definitely give it a go : )