for Veritaserum Shots1/30 c9 Julia
Brilliant! Lovely story really.
Brilliant! Lovely story really.
1/12 c2 me
really good story, but i don't understand what happened in the end. why did she say "oh Merlin, I know" and leave really suddenly?
really good story, but i don't understand what happened in the end. why did she say "oh Merlin, I know" and leave really suddenly?
11/30/2012 c9 3
lily's patronus was always a doe. NEVER a stag.
lily's patronus was always a doe. NEVER a stag.
11/30/2012 c5 hp
james was a seeker
james was a seeker
11/18/2012 c2 Nourya
I love your story!
I love your story!
11/2/2012 c9 dreamergirl4eva
That was without a doubt one of the sweetest lily and james fanfics I have ever read! It was AMAZING!
That was without a doubt one of the sweetest lily and james fanfics I have ever read! It was AMAZING!
10/25/2012 c2 Guest
awesomeness! just too good
awesomeness! just too good
9/25/2012 c9 
1Pan's Box
Okay, so I didn't review each chapter, but I just thought I'd do an all-encompassing one at the end instead.
I really enjoyed this! Especially the little twist at the end - you need to give both yourself and Sirius a bit more credit, you two are a lot smarter than you make yourselves out to be!
I don't really have a favourite quote, anything vaguely Marauderesque will do!
I'm rambling; I really very much enjoyed this, and if there is a sequel (full of witty Jily and Marauder banter) I'm sure I'll enjoy reading that too. :)
Pan x
1Pan's BoxOkay, so I didn't review each chapter, but I just thought I'd do an all-encompassing one at the end instead.
I really enjoyed this! Especially the little twist at the end - you need to give both yourself and Sirius a bit more credit, you two are a lot smarter than you make yourselves out to be!
I don't really have a favourite quote, anything vaguely Marauderesque will do!
I'm rambling; I really very much enjoyed this, and if there is a sequel (full of witty Jily and Marauder banter) I'm sure I'll enjoy reading that too. :)
Pan x
8/29/2012 c9 Slytherin All The Way
I normally don't bother reviewing stories, but this one is just so brilliant, I couldn't ignore it! This is actually my favorite Lily and James story. It's just..perfect!
I can really imagine this story happening in an official Harry Potter book. hehe.
Oh, and my favorite part:
"You," James said very slowly, ignoring his words deftly. "will never play the hero again if I can help, yeah?"
Remus looked dumbfounded. "I-"
"And," James said shortly, cutting him off effectively. "you will always tell me if you're seeing someone. Merlin, even if you've thought about fancying someone."
A look of guilt flashed across the boy's face. "How did you-"
"Excellent." James said cheerfully, clapping his mate on the shoulder. "Nice talking to you. We'll catch up later, alright?"
I normally don't bother reviewing stories, but this one is just so brilliant, I couldn't ignore it! This is actually my favorite Lily and James story. It's just..perfect!
I can really imagine this story happening in an official Harry Potter book. hehe.
Oh, and my favorite part:
"You," James said very slowly, ignoring his words deftly. "will never play the hero again if I can help, yeah?"
Remus looked dumbfounded. "I-"
"And," James said shortly, cutting him off effectively. "you will always tell me if you're seeing someone. Merlin, even if you've thought about fancying someone."
A look of guilt flashed across the boy's face. "How did you-"
"Excellent." James said cheerfully, clapping his mate on the shoulder. "Nice talking to you. We'll catch up later, alright?"
8/2/2012 c9 5Anelya
Dear Writer,
You truely are magnificent. I mean, the way you write is so professional! It's not just cute, lovey dovey stuff, but a real story! Your chapters are long, your characters well-planned, your writing amazing, your plotline pure perfection... I think I might be in love with your writing. You really are a genius.
Now, I'm probably a bit famous amoung some HP, and a few other, writers that I give reviews for, for giving really long, kinda nice reviews. The problem with your story is: I don't know what else to say!
You see, I have this problem for one or two other writers. One of them is cuddlebear992, I think you know her. Another one is Emeraleyes. While writing a review for Cuddles, I wrote that she was my favorite, or second favorite, Author on this site. I thought it was true, only remembering a few of you. So, I decided to check my favorite Authors and see.
What a surprise I got when I remembered you! Then I saw CharmStone, with the Cinderella story which is awesome, Dranius, with the really weird but awesome stories, SkittlesAreAwesome, for her frankly hilarious stories, and Soapie7, for one of the two Hermione/Draco fanfics I read. I also saw some authors who weren't as good, but none who were better. I realised then, that I either have really good taste in authors, or I just happened to luck out and find all of you brilliant writers. You all deserve recomendations for being so amazing! I mean, whenever I write reviews for you guys I don't know what to say. I really don't know anymore, as there's not much more to be said.
Well, this has become a bit long, and I suspect you won't want to read the whole thing. I'm not sure if you even write anymore, or will check out these reviews. I sincerely hope you do.
Thanks for writing this story. Like I've already said, you're simply, bloody brilliant.
Keep writing,
Anelya
5AnelyaDear Writer,
You truely are magnificent. I mean, the way you write is so professional! It's not just cute, lovey dovey stuff, but a real story! Your chapters are long, your characters well-planned, your writing amazing, your plotline pure perfection... I think I might be in love with your writing. You really are a genius.
Now, I'm probably a bit famous amoung some HP, and a few other, writers that I give reviews for, for giving really long, kinda nice reviews. The problem with your story is: I don't know what else to say!
You see, I have this problem for one or two other writers. One of them is cuddlebear992, I think you know her. Another one is Emeraleyes. While writing a review for Cuddles, I wrote that she was my favorite, or second favorite, Author on this site. I thought it was true, only remembering a few of you. So, I decided to check my favorite Authors and see.
What a surprise I got when I remembered you! Then I saw CharmStone, with the Cinderella story which is awesome, Dranius, with the really weird but awesome stories, SkittlesAreAwesome, for her frankly hilarious stories, and Soapie7, for one of the two Hermione/Draco fanfics I read. I also saw some authors who weren't as good, but none who were better. I realised then, that I either have really good taste in authors, or I just happened to luck out and find all of you brilliant writers. You all deserve recomendations for being so amazing! I mean, whenever I write reviews for you guys I don't know what to say. I really don't know anymore, as there's not much more to be said.
Well, this has become a bit long, and I suspect you won't want to read the whole thing. I'm not sure if you even write anymore, or will check out these reviews. I sincerely hope you do.
Thanks for writing this story. Like I've already said, you're simply, bloody brilliant.
Keep writing,
Anelya
6/18/2012 c9 fkdksn
AMAZING story, great writing! I hope to read another of your fanfics soon! :) I dont usually read Lily/James fanfics but I am sooo glad I did!
xoxoxoxo
AMAZING story, great writing! I hope to read another of your fanfics soon! :) I dont usually read Lily/James fanfics but I am sooo glad I did!
xoxoxoxo