for Family Reunions12/26/2012 c3 ktprincess
Please please update! I love this story!
Please please update! I love this story!
9/6/2012 c3 Fox Loves Shinigami
Great fic, I can't wait to see how the G-boys being in the boys' lives will effect everything. Update soon _ Ja.
Great fic, I can't wait to see how the G-boys being in the boys' lives will effect everything. Update soon _ Ja.
8/21/2012 c3 yuuri-lissa
quite good..
you're gonna updated it right?
please don't abandon it
quite good..
you're gonna updated it right?
please don't abandon it
8/15/2012 c2
2lilyflower50
How did draco and harry find out they were twins to start with and who are there real parents please reply and update soon
2lilyflower50How did draco and harry find out they were twins to start with and who are there real parents please reply and update soon
8/9/2012 c3 Beth5572
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are grea too.
Thank you,
Terri
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are grea too.
Thank you,
Terri
7/31/2012 c3
8Sinopa Ariyana
Interesting. Draco and Harry as brothers is definitely a new twist I've never seen before. The characters are a little OOC but considering that Harry and Draco are siblings it makes sense oddly enough. Though wouldn't that make Draco either a muggleborn or half-blood? Since obviously neither the Malfoy's or the Potters are their biological parents. Unless the three's parents were pure-bloods which would then make Draco, Harry and Duo pure-bloods. Hmmm. Now THAT would be different. Also just HOW did they find out that they were twins? How did Draco sneak away from the Malfoy's and Harry away from the Dursley's? How did they know they had an older brother? YOu state the boys are thirteen so is this set AFTER third Year or BEFORE third year? Why did you decide to use the Harry Potter timeline instead of the Gundam Wing one? Wouldn't it have made more sense to use AC instead? What about the Gundams and the Wars that the boys participated in? Obviously they are Preventers considering Une was there and she is the Head of the Preventers. Yes I do have a lot of questions. Why did you decide to change what both Harry AND Draco looked like? I mean I could understand needing to in some ways so that there is at least some family resemblance but the changes were pretty major. Also if this is set AFTER third year than what about Remus and Sirius? Wouldn't they have known something was off? Or were they part of some scheme concocted by Dumbledore? What about the Weasley's? Are they going to be in on whatever scheme may have been concocted? What about James and Lily? Were they in on it? And Lucius and Narcissa? Was it more of Dumbledore's scheming or maybe Voldemort? Why in the hell would Voldemort have gone after the Potters in the first place? What about Severus? Does he know or maybe did he know about Draco and Harry being siblings? There are quite a few questions that need answered in some way because plot holes can develop rather quickly if they aren't/ It's why I had to re-write one of my fics because one plot hole grew into a multitude of plot holes. Interesting fic otherwise. Hope you update soon cause it is a different spin what with Draco and Harry being twins.
Ja
Sinopa
8Sinopa AriyanaInteresting. Draco and Harry as brothers is definitely a new twist I've never seen before. The characters are a little OOC but considering that Harry and Draco are siblings it makes sense oddly enough. Though wouldn't that make Draco either a muggleborn or half-blood? Since obviously neither the Malfoy's or the Potters are their biological parents. Unless the three's parents were pure-bloods which would then make Draco, Harry and Duo pure-bloods. Hmmm. Now THAT would be different. Also just HOW did they find out that they were twins? How did Draco sneak away from the Malfoy's and Harry away from the Dursley's? How did they know they had an older brother? YOu state the boys are thirteen so is this set AFTER third Year or BEFORE third year? Why did you decide to use the Harry Potter timeline instead of the Gundam Wing one? Wouldn't it have made more sense to use AC instead? What about the Gundams and the Wars that the boys participated in? Obviously they are Preventers considering Une was there and she is the Head of the Preventers. Yes I do have a lot of questions. Why did you decide to change what both Harry AND Draco looked like? I mean I could understand needing to in some ways so that there is at least some family resemblance but the changes were pretty major. Also if this is set AFTER third year than what about Remus and Sirius? Wouldn't they have known something was off? Or were they part of some scheme concocted by Dumbledore? What about the Weasley's? Are they going to be in on whatever scheme may have been concocted? What about James and Lily? Were they in on it? And Lucius and Narcissa? Was it more of Dumbledore's scheming or maybe Voldemort? Why in the hell would Voldemort have gone after the Potters in the first place? What about Severus? Does he know or maybe did he know about Draco and Harry being siblings? There are quite a few questions that need answered in some way because plot holes can develop rather quickly if they aren't/ It's why I had to re-write one of my fics because one plot hole grew into a multitude of plot holes. Interesting fic otherwise. Hope you update soon cause it is a different spin what with Draco and Harry being twins.
Ja
Sinopa
7/23/2012 c3
1KTPrincess
This is amazing! I love it! Please continue, I love how Draco and Harry are twins and how Harry has all the physical and emotional showings of how he was raised. I think you have the great makings of a wonderful story here. Update soon!
1KTPrincessThis is amazing! I love it! Please continue, I love how Draco and Harry are twins and how Harry has all the physical and emotional showings of how he was raised. I think you have the great makings of a wonderful story here. Update soon!
7/22/2012 c3
14nequam-tenshi
Harry is the younger twin right?
Aside from not capitalizing the beginning of the quotes, you have a good story.
14nequam-tenshiHarry is the younger twin right?
Aside from not capitalizing the beginning of the quotes, you have a good story.
