for Cell Phones Versus Zombies7/27/2011 c1 
15Babette12
You're a much better woman than me. You write with a broken hand, and I just bag it.
LOL at the pick up line! I loved that.
15Babette12You're a much better woman than me. You write with a broken hand, and I just bag it.
LOL at the pick up line! I loved that.
7/25/2011 c1 mbellaandedwardm
thhat was so cute! lol
i wish it were longer
until next time
mbellaandedwardm
thhat was so cute! lol
i wish it were longer
until next time
mbellaandedwardm
7/23/2011 c1 ss77
I love the term, "casual monogamy". I've never heard it explained like that, but I totally get what you're saying.
The pick-up line at the end was kinda brilliant. :)
I love the term, "casual monogamy". I've never heard it explained like that, but I totally get what you're saying.
The pick-up line at the end was kinda brilliant. :)
7/23/2011 c1 6nikkipattinson
I get that this is supposed to be a one-shot and that it's complete, but it has potential. You should expand it. Everything else you do is fantastic. I'm sure that you could expand this one-shot into something equally brilliant.
6nikkipattinsonI get that this is supposed to be a one-shot and that it's complete, but it has potential. You should expand it. Everything else you do is fantastic. I'm sure that you could expand this one-shot into something equally brilliant.
7/23/2011 c1 1fuzzyltlwingedthing
Very nice. I almost said cute, but its a bit warmer than cute but not quite hot. Me likey!
1fuzzyltlwingedthingVery nice. I almost said cute, but its a bit warmer than cute but not quite hot. Me likey!
7/23/2011 c1 3bumble bee90210
Holy crap! This Is AWESOME! Plz continue to make Bella's personality be this way. I've read alot of fanfic which always make/turn Bella to a sappy, clinche, romantic kind of girl. It was Horrify.
Anyway, update soon. Love your story:)
3bumble bee90210Holy crap! This Is AWESOME! Plz continue to make Bella's personality be this way. I've read alot of fanfic which always make/turn Bella to a sappy, clinche, romantic kind of girl. It was Horrify.
Anyway, update soon. Love your story:)
7/22/2011 c1 Sea4Me
Fun! An Edward who used 'lines;' that's a new look on you, lol. Can't comprehend *30* minutes. Awesome.
Fun! An Edward who used 'lines;' that's a new look on you, lol. Can't comprehend *30* minutes. Awesome.