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7/22/2011 c1 LMBB
I want to know what happens when the zombies come! That was fun. I really liked it and I can't believe you wrote it in 30 minutes. Any chance you'll continue?
7/22/2011 c1 Mell C
I confess that I let.my story alert mssg sit in my inbox when I saw the word zombies in the title. I do not like zombies. But I do adore sleepyvalentina. So I read. And I liked.
7/21/2011 c1 2NKubie
If he wasn't so hot that line would never work. LOL
7/21/2011 c1 2Capricorn75
Oh my gosh, that is the best pickup line ever!
7/21/2011 c1 tree111
Just too cute! The pickup line cracks me up. You're so awesome. It's wonder that you can write a story is 30 minutes. Amazeme!

thank you!
7/21/2011 c1 blueeyes11354
It's very impressive what you can accomplish in 30 minutes.

Bella losing her stuff to her ex reminded me of this song called The Hardest Part of Breaking Up (is Getting Back Your Stuff) by this satirical boy band called 2Ge+her. Ah memories... :)
7/21/2011 c1 coryoplayer
S.V.

Me likey! Thanks!

Cory
7/21/2011 c1 mimimgr
cute, nice pick up line. :)
7/21/2011 c1 16Picklewinkle
Definitely one of the best pick up lines ever! I was already marvelling at your creativity when I got to it, but after reading it, I'm done being surprised. You're just awesome; no two ways about it! Thanks for sharing your hard work with us.
7/21/2011 c1 4CandyCanesFly
Cute. Nice pick up line!
7/21/2011 c1 KazM77
Cute story with plenty of potential :)
7/21/2011 c1 6Rossie'Pooh
Loved it (:
7/21/2011 c1 CdrIvanova
ROFL! Sweet stuff.
7/21/2011 c1 islandgirl7718
Cute story...

But I missed my Edward...description was to vague for me...
7/21/2011 c1 LBJoy
Great pick up line...

Thanks for sharing!
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