for Meet Moonbeam4/18 c17 AllSpark Princess
So Luna's hunch is right. Deecee's a Decepticon all along. I just hope the Autobots found out before it's too late. Hope you update this soon.
So Luna's hunch is right. Deecee's a Decepticon all along. I just hope the Autobots found out before it's too late. Hope you update this soon.
10/5/2012 c5 ShadowLDrago
f you starscream but, you were supposed to be offline permanatly as your spark chamber is empty and you don't have a piece of the allspark in you anymore
f you starscream but, you were supposed to be offline permanatly as your spark chamber is empty and you don't have a piece of the allspark in you anymore
10/5/2012 c3 ShadowLDrago
Moonbeam was scared by a grumpy old docbot whose only weapons are electromagnets and an EMP, OF COURSE SHE WILL BE SCARED BY A GIGANTIC ROBOT HWO IS RIDDLED WITH WEAPONS!
Moonbeam was scared by a grumpy old docbot whose only weapons are electromagnets and an EMP, OF COURSE SHE WILL BE SCARED BY A GIGANTIC ROBOT HWO IS RIDDLED WITH WEAPONS!
8/9/2012 c9 AllSpark Princess
I knew that shadow figure is Prowl's ghost. I wonder who's responsible for Luna's kidnapping, because it sounds like someone's trying to capture her. Hope you update this soon.
I knew that shadow figure is Prowl's ghost. I wonder who's responsible for Luna's kidnapping, because it sounds like someone's trying to capture her. Hope you update this soon.
3/22/2012 c8 AllSpark Princess
I'm glad Luna's happy now that she has a home and a family. Hope you update this really soon.
I'm glad Luna's happy now that she has a home and a family. Hope you update this really soon.
1/5/2012 c1 firesidesong
"Confused Jazz transformed and drove after the blur, he could only assume it was the car he'd just seen, and he drove after it, his thoughts turned him to believe it had transformed, explaining how it 'stood up' so he drove quicker, within a few minutes he spotted the blur heading in the direction of the bridge, it was rather large , but it moved too fast to figure out what it was, quickly he went into full throttle and took a short cut, he drove right into the path of the blur, quickly he transformed and pulled out his nun chucks, the blur approached him then flew over him, but what he saw wasn't a car, it was a femme!"
Ummmm... that was ONE setence. Please watch out for run-ons in the future!
"Confused Jazz transformed and drove after the blur, he could only assume it was the car he'd just seen, and he drove after it, his thoughts turned him to believe it had transformed, explaining how it 'stood up' so he drove quicker, within a few minutes he spotted the blur heading in the direction of the bridge, it was rather large , but it moved too fast to figure out what it was, quickly he went into full throttle and took a short cut, he drove right into the path of the blur, quickly he transformed and pulled out his nun chucks, the blur approached him then flew over him, but what he saw wasn't a car, it was a femme!"
Ummmm... that was ONE setence. Please watch out for run-ons in the future!
9/30/2011 c6 
8Dark Maiden95
Very good story so far. I hope we'll see more of Starscream and the other 'Cons soon. :)
8Dark Maiden95Very good story so far. I hope we'll see more of Starscream and the other 'Cons soon. :)
9/28/2011 c4 Sailor Shinzo
That silhouette that Moonbeam saw, could that be Prowl?
That silhouette that Moonbeam saw, could that be Prowl?