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2Vladimir Zhivanevskaya
Okay...so I forgot to metion this before, but this guy must either 1) age like an elf, or 2) be a time paradox. Apparently he knows aang from childhood, but he recognizes azula on sight. he also knows Iroh, but wasn't he supposed to have been frozen like aang was? and isn't that bone thing stolen off of that guy from naruto? and he also has seismic sense? oh, and he can walk through walls, control sound and gravity, and he's extremely good looking (every girl blushes around him except Katara, but we know she's got a thing for short bald guys, so her taste is questionable)...but I digress. Just pointing out a 4th dimensional anomaly (that's space-time for all you unscientifical folks).
2Vladimir ZhivanevskayaOkay...so I forgot to metion this before, but this guy must either 1) age like an elf, or 2) be a time paradox. Apparently he knows aang from childhood, but he recognizes azula on sight. he also knows Iroh, but wasn't he supposed to have been frozen like aang was? and isn't that bone thing stolen off of that guy from naruto? and he also has seismic sense? oh, and he can walk through walls, control sound and gravity, and he's extremely good looking (every girl blushes around him except Katara, but we know she's got a thing for short bald guys, so her taste is questionable)...but I digress. Just pointing out a 4th dimensional anomaly (that's space-time for all you unscientifical folks).
1/1 c5 Vladimir Zhivanevskaya
Sokka had a Nigga moment? Not enough of him shouting "Nyigaahhhh!" like stinkmeaner, but what the hell, I still laughed.
Sokka had a Nigga moment? Not enough of him shouting "Nyigaahhhh!" like stinkmeaner, but what the hell, I still laughed.
1/1 c4 Vladimir Zhivanevskaya
Mai has better luck facing off against him than Azula? Ah well, not my story, so not my logic.
Mai has better luck facing off against him than Azula? Ah well, not my story, so not my logic.
1/1 c3 Vladimir Zhivanevskaya
okay, so...props to your over-powered character, I guess. You do realize that Azula is one of the most powerful benders (fifth...sixth if you include avatar-state Aang) in the avatarverse, and your shadowbender kicked her ass into next week with little effort. Apparently he is even better than Aang and Katara in both of their respective elements, fights like Ty Lee, and even has his own specialty element, which of course he is a master in as well. Who is this guy? The super-avatar? Well, ranting aside, the story isn't too bad, and your writing style is decent.
okay, so...props to your over-powered character, I guess. You do realize that Azula is one of the most powerful benders (fifth...sixth if you include avatar-state Aang) in the avatarverse, and your shadowbender kicked her ass into next week with little effort. Apparently he is even better than Aang and Katara in both of their respective elements, fights like Ty Lee, and even has his own specialty element, which of course he is a master in as well. Who is this guy? The super-avatar? Well, ranting aside, the story isn't too bad, and your writing style is decent.
9/12/2012 c10 14shadowrose6x
Another great chapter :) good job dude, the humor, action/violence, and bits of romance in your story works out well. Keep up with this.
14shadowrose6xAnother great chapter :) good job dude, the humor, action/violence, and bits of romance in your story works out well. Keep up with this.
8/4/2012 c1 4Jex the Jagged
I love your Story. I, too, am writing a fanfic called 'The Shadowbender'. Coincidence? Maybe. A friend of mine on here showed me your story. Personally, I love it. It's a great story. My character, Kuseron, and Loki might get along smoothly. All depending of course...
Adieu!
JtJ
4Jex the JaggedI love your Story. I, too, am writing a fanfic called 'The Shadowbender'. Coincidence? Maybe. A friend of mine on here showed me your story. Personally, I love it. It's a great story. My character, Kuseron, and Loki might get along smoothly. All depending of course...
Adieu!
JtJ
4/7/2012 c9 1Ryuichi17
this is an interesting story so far. As much as I like Loki, you kinda made him a little to unstoppable in the fight scenes in the earlier chapter.
but Loki is still friking awesome. please continue :)
1Ryuichi17this is an interesting story so far. As much as I like Loki, you kinda made him a little to unstoppable in the fight scenes in the earlier chapter.
but Loki is still friking awesome. please continue :)
3/5/2012 c9 14shadowrose6x
I'll make this short and sweet :] mucho bueno lol keep up with your stories since you do write a lot but don't exactly update very often even though I'm not one to speak... but you are good with action/adventure stories and portraying whatever gruesome or violent thoughts come into your mind while writing.
14shadowrose6xI'll make this short and sweet :] mucho bueno lol keep up with your stories since you do write a lot but don't exactly update very often even though I'm not one to speak... but you are good with action/adventure stories and portraying whatever gruesome or violent thoughts come into your mind while writing.
2/25/2012 c9 24AVP5
Cool I hope the next chapter won't take long to come out and poor toph and loki. Loki to go through that kind of pain and toph hearing all of it. But I did like the ending its a nice ending for the chapter. I wonder if we'll learn more on why this happened to loki. Update when you have time please.
24AVP5Cool I hope the next chapter won't take long to come out and poor toph and loki. Loki to go through that kind of pain and toph hearing all of it. But I did like the ending its a nice ending for the chapter. I wonder if we'll learn more on why this happened to loki. Update when you have time please.
11/28/2011 c8 14shadowrose6x
I've been told to review, so review I shall, the story has made a lot of progress and i cant wait for more :] keep going and finish it up so you can get started on your other un-named stories. As of now this story is great and update soon yo!
14shadowrose6xI've been told to review, so review I shall, the story has made a lot of progress and i cant wait for more :] keep going and finish it up so you can get started on your other un-named stories. As of now this story is great and update soon yo!
11/27/2011 c8 24AVP5
Its been a long time since I read this, thanks for continuing and awwwwww what an ending good job update when you can please.
24AVP5Its been a long time since I read this, thanks for continuing and awwwwww what an ending good job update when you can please.
11/27/2011 c8 30General Herbison
Note to self. Hunt down Sandbenders and kill them.
Second note, find that library, books are cool!
Third note, update soon!
30General HerbisonNote to self. Hunt down Sandbenders and kill them.
Second note, find that library, books are cool!
Third note, update soon!