for The Love of the Just King10/25/2012 c3 CookieDoughOrder
I'll review if you post. And since this is my review you MUST POST! more!
Well done by the way.
I'll review if you post. And since this is my review you MUST POST! more!
Well done by the way.
12/22/2011 c3 
6xLuvStruckIdiot
Oh my gosh,when I saw her name was Alexis Hart I squealed.I use to always use Alex Hart as my OC's name since my name's Alexis and when I saw it...
Great story anyways!
6xLuvStruckIdiotOh my gosh,when I saw her name was Alexis Hart I squealed.I use to always use Alex Hart as my OC's name since my name's Alexis and when I saw it...
Great story anyways!
11/26/2011 c3 9diggydawg
This is cool! Keep going. I like Alexis and the bond she shares with Edmund, like, how he'd grab her hand or play with her hair... Hehe... :)
9diggydawgThis is cool! Keep going. I like Alexis and the bond she shares with Edmund, like, how he'd grab her hand or play with her hair... Hehe... :)
9/28/2011 c3 Descent.Into.Chaos
Oh, nice little twist there! Can I expect an update soon?
Pretty please? :)
Mara
Oh, nice little twist there! Can I expect an update soon?
Pretty please? :)
Mara
9/28/2011 c2 Descent.Into.Chaos
And my favourite quote from THIS chapter has to be...
Lucy was at the age where she was starting to notice boys, but at that age, boys don't notice girls. I remember going through that stage. To be honest, when I realized that I was crushing on Edmund, I went back into that stage.
Good job!
Mara
And my favourite quote from THIS chapter has to be...
Lucy was at the age where she was starting to notice boys, but at that age, boys don't notice girls. I remember going through that stage. To be honest, when I realized that I was crushing on Edmund, I went back into that stage.
Good job!
Mara
9/28/2011 c1 Descent.Into.Chaos
"I am still here, you know." Eustace said, looking annoyed that he was being ignored.
"Don't remind us."
He he, VERY nice first chapter! Going to read on now...
Mara
"I am still here, you know." Eustace said, looking annoyed that he was being ignored.
"Don't remind us."
He he, VERY nice first chapter! Going to read on now...
Mara
7/25/2011 c3 12Meggie cronwall
Oh no he did not just call her girly. Well it was nice knowing you Caspian. Update soon please!
12Meggie cronwallOh no he did not just call her girly. Well it was nice knowing you Caspian. Update soon please!
7/24/2011 c3 12BeckyBoo12221
Hey, Oooooh we've got ourselves a duel, :P. Can't wait for the next chapter, having sooo much fun reading this, keep it up and have fun, Bye,
-Becky
12BeckyBoo12221Hey, Oooooh we've got ourselves a duel, :P. Can't wait for the next chapter, having sooo much fun reading this, keep it up and have fun, Bye,
-Becky