for Ritual of Roses3/31 c6 kissesRbeauty
ummm... ur so weird :) melodramatic and overthinking things.. beautiful ur just like me! :) this chapter really just opened up a new window of opportunities that are possible to occur ohhh I cant wait!
ummm... ur so weird :) melodramatic and overthinking things.. beautiful ur just like me! :) this chapter really just opened up a new window of opportunities that are possible to occur ohhh I cant wait!
12/22/2012 c5 Jaiden.M
UnsymmetricalDeath the Kid rampage! D:
UnsymmetricalDeath the Kid rampage! D:
12/4/2012 c8 Guest
This is all very nice, though I think it'd be nice to have duck turn into princess tutu and fight kreahe (a.k.a Rue) and have things happen with the host club and all dat jazz . Minito
This is all very nice, though I think it'd be nice to have duck turn into princess tutu and fight kreahe (a.k.a Rue) and have things happen with the host club and all dat jazz . Minito
10/6/2012 c8
13Ai Sakamoto
Can you make Duck turn in to Princess Tutu? I love it how she does. It's so beautiful. Make something tragic happen so Duck will have to turn in to Princess Tutu. I want to see their faces once they see Princess Tutu in action. I can just see it now. They see Princess Tutu jumping and their mouths are open. They are speechless at her beauty and grace. Please! I miss Princess Tutu. How she says after she transforms in to Princess Tutu" Please, come dance with me." and she reaches out her hand, and the other person takes it, and they dance together. So pretty. _ So beautiful.
13Ai SakamotoCan you make Duck turn in to Princess Tutu? I love it how she does. It's so beautiful. Make something tragic happen so Duck will have to turn in to Princess Tutu. I want to see their faces once they see Princess Tutu in action. I can just see it now. They see Princess Tutu jumping and their mouths are open. They are speechless at her beauty and grace. Please! I miss Princess Tutu. How she says after she transforms in to Princess Tutu" Please, come dance with me." and she reaches out her hand, and the other person takes it, and they dance together. So pretty. _ So beautiful.
8/14/2012 c8
1Otaku-Lord-Bubbles
Omg, I love this fanfic! It's one of the best I've read, (certainly the best OHSHC I've read) and I think it's really funny!
1Otaku-Lord-BubblesOmg, I love this fanfic! It's one of the best I've read, (certainly the best OHSHC I've read) and I think it's really funny!
7/5/2012 c7 Guest
Kyaaaa! Kawaii! Yatto Ahiru-chan to Fakia kisu shitanda! Yatta! Sugi no chaputa wo tanoshimi ni shite imasu!
Soralover94*
Kyaaaa! Kawaii! Yatto Ahiru-chan to Fakia kisu shitanda! Yatta! Sugi no chaputa wo tanoshimi ni shite imasu!
Soralover94*
6/29/2012 c7 Guest
You have amazing skill, I love this story sooooooooooooo much! You also just get an extra 500 points for writing Fakiru, because I am utterly obbsessed with it. I can't wait for more! Also SQUEE! Kiss scene! x3
You have amazing skill, I love this story sooooooooooooo much! You also just get an extra 500 points for writing Fakiru, because I am utterly obbsessed with it. I can't wait for more! Also SQUEE! Kiss scene! x3
6/26/2012 c7
6Fahiru
YAY! Chapter 7!
Sorry that it took me so long to get around to reading the latest chapter, especially since, as you promised, it was very satisfying.
I have to say, I was almost squealing when Fakia and Ahiru went for a walk outside. Ahiru definitely does seem to always have a soothing effect on Fakia in the anime(post season one finale of course), so that was good. Their chemistry is just all around very nice, they're so compatible! But I think it's mostly because of all that they've been through together that they understand each other so well. I was blushing throughout that whole scene that you had and I was VERY drunk on happiness. Their is no other romance in this entire world of fandom that can make me happier than Fakia/Ahiru.
Tamaki's reaction to Haruhi's disappearance was SO GREAT! Oh, my gosh, it was so funny! I can't get over it. X'D
Now, don't get me wrong, I'm a Haruhi/Tamaki fan, but I can't help but be a major fanatic of Haruhi/Kyoya as well... How come I can't choose sides? Okay, I'd definitely have to keep Tamaki with her, but Kyoya is my favorite from Ouran, so I always want to pair him with the main character as well. So I have to say, I was blushing pretty badly when they hugged in Ahiru's dorm room as well...I guess it doesn't take much to make me happy, huh? FANSERVICE Oh, the slap was a very nice touch by the way! Is that sadistic for me to say? :{
YES! You made them WALTZ! Just as you promised! I was so happy Fakia and Ahiru dancing together The thought gives me goosebumps, I get so excited. Now I have completely succeeded in making myself sound really creepy... But I was really happy, so thank you so much!
! Okay, yeah, when Fakia carried Ahiru back to the dorms, and, and then he tells her THAT, and...DAAAAAAHHHHHHH! Yeah. I was really happy. to say the least. :3 w
I love reading Author's notes at the ends of chapters That is a seriously looooooong fan fiction. I hope that I can get a story that adds up to that much someday... I'll try my best!
Thank you so much for everything, I'm very satisfied with the wonderful fan-service. For the most part it is very tastefully inserted. C:
-Fahiru :3
6FahiruYAY! Chapter 7!
Sorry that it took me so long to get around to reading the latest chapter, especially since, as you promised, it was very satisfying.
I have to say, I was almost squealing when Fakia and Ahiru went for a walk outside. Ahiru definitely does seem to always have a soothing effect on Fakia in the anime(post season one finale of course), so that was good. Their chemistry is just all around very nice, they're so compatible! But I think it's mostly because of all that they've been through together that they understand each other so well. I was blushing throughout that whole scene that you had and I was VERY drunk on happiness. Their is no other romance in this entire world of fandom that can make me happier than Fakia/Ahiru.
Tamaki's reaction to Haruhi's disappearance was SO GREAT! Oh, my gosh, it was so funny! I can't get over it. X'D
Now, don't get me wrong, I'm a Haruhi/Tamaki fan, but I can't help but be a major fanatic of Haruhi/Kyoya as well... How come I can't choose sides? Okay, I'd definitely have to keep Tamaki with her, but Kyoya is my favorite from Ouran, so I always want to pair him with the main character as well. So I have to say, I was blushing pretty badly when they hugged in Ahiru's dorm room as well...I guess it doesn't take much to make me happy, huh? FANSERVICE Oh, the slap was a very nice touch by the way! Is that sadistic for me to say? :{
YES! You made them WALTZ! Just as you promised! I was so happy Fakia and Ahiru dancing together The thought gives me goosebumps, I get so excited. Now I have completely succeeded in making myself sound really creepy... But I was really happy, so thank you so much!
! Okay, yeah, when Fakia carried Ahiru back to the dorms, and, and then he tells her THAT, and...DAAAAAAHHHHHHH! Yeah. I was really happy. to say the least. :3 w
I love reading Author's notes at the ends of chapters That is a seriously looooooong fan fiction. I hope that I can get a story that adds up to that much someday... I'll try my best!
Thank you so much for everything, I'm very satisfied with the wonderful fan-service. For the most part it is very tastefully inserted. C:
-Fahiru :3
6/22/2012 c7
37QueenyLeAcH
Fantastic chapter. Only a few grammatical errors that I could see. And, this might be my wicked fast eyes, but it felt almost fast paced.
37QueenyLeAcHFantastic chapter. Only a few grammatical errors that I could see. And, this might be my wicked fast eyes, but it felt almost fast paced.
6/13/2012 c6
6Fahiru
Interesting.
I don't know much about ballet(which sucks, because I'm writing a Tutu fan fic and I want to be as accurate as possible) so I felt really dumb not knowing much about the details of dance for this.
Kyoya is my favorite Ouran character, so I really like having a lot of the story center around him. It reminds me of the episode in the show about when he met Tamaki, I LOVE THAT EPISODE THE MOST.
As much as I love Kyoya being the main focus, I'm not sure how well he pulls off dancing. Don't get me wrong, I KNOW that ballet is super hard core and about as intense as it gets, but most of that is hidden behind the grace and beauty of it. As much as I love Kyoya, I think Fakia makes it seem manlier to be a ballerin...o. Why did I drag Fakia into this? Because Fakia applies to everything. Not really. Well, to ME he does.
I know it's a cross over, so don't take my laments to hard. I know that this was a focus on the host club chapter but...TT I always love to have a lot of Ahiru and Fakia. Plenty of room for that in the next chapter though, right? They could waltz AH! That sounds so romantic!
Anyway, non-related-fahiru-rants aside, I liked it quite a bit. Neko-sensei is really sweet, and I like seeing all the side characters. My one last complaint is that Hermia is in the dance division, not visual arts. Sorry! I can't help being so picky.
I LOVE AUTHOR'S NOTES THE MOST! You make me laugh with your complex reason why we should not crush all your hopes and dreams. Hopefully I have only trampled them a bit, I like to sleep at night without interruption. -
Thanks for that chapter, I hope you add more soon!...I hope you have TIME to add more soon! I know it's stressful, so please don't feel pressured. A forced story isn't as good as a carefully revised and proof read one.
Good luck!
-Fahiru
6FahiruInteresting.
I don't know much about ballet(which sucks, because I'm writing a Tutu fan fic and I want to be as accurate as possible) so I felt really dumb not knowing much about the details of dance for this.
Kyoya is my favorite Ouran character, so I really like having a lot of the story center around him. It reminds me of the episode in the show about when he met Tamaki, I LOVE THAT EPISODE THE MOST.
As much as I love Kyoya being the main focus, I'm not sure how well he pulls off dancing. Don't get me wrong, I KNOW that ballet is super hard core and about as intense as it gets, but most of that is hidden behind the grace and beauty of it. As much as I love Kyoya, I think Fakia makes it seem manlier to be a ballerin...o. Why did I drag Fakia into this? Because Fakia applies to everything. Not really. Well, to ME he does.
I know it's a cross over, so don't take my laments to hard. I know that this was a focus on the host club chapter but...TT I always love to have a lot of Ahiru and Fakia. Plenty of room for that in the next chapter though, right? They could waltz AH! That sounds so romantic!
Anyway, non-related-fahiru-rants aside, I liked it quite a bit. Neko-sensei is really sweet, and I like seeing all the side characters. My one last complaint is that Hermia is in the dance division, not visual arts. Sorry! I can't help being so picky.
I LOVE AUTHOR'S NOTES THE MOST! You make me laugh with your complex reason why we should not crush all your hopes and dreams. Hopefully I have only trampled them a bit, I like to sleep at night without interruption. -
Thanks for that chapter, I hope you add more soon!...I hope you have TIME to add more soon! I know it's stressful, so please don't feel pressured. A forced story isn't as good as a carefully revised and proof read one.
Good luck!
-Fahiru
