for A Troubled Past and A New Beginning12/3/2011 c15 Lauren
I liked this story very much! Please continue writing. I read this story and couldn't stop reading! I look forward to the sequel.
I liked this story very much! Please continue writing. I read this story and couldn't stop reading! I look forward to the sequel.
8/21/2011 c15 
4GreyxLadyx
hey, I'm really glad that you decided to finish the story anyway :)
I just don't see the point of reviewing every chapter when the story is already completed, so i usually review on the end. But, I myself didn't write any story on my own and I don't know the real importance of reviews...
4GreyxLadyxhey, I'm really glad that you decided to finish the story anyway :)
I just don't see the point of reviewing every chapter when the story is already completed, so i usually review on the end. But, I myself didn't write any story on my own and I don't know the real importance of reviews...
8/11/2011 c1 Anonymous
This is great! :)) I love it. Just a few grammar mistakes but otherwise it's a very interesting story!
This is great! :)) I love it. Just a few grammar mistakes but otherwise it's a very interesting story!
8/10/2011 c1 4mrs.justenbeeebir123
omg does that mean draco and hermione were in love and now there children are doin the same thing? good storyyy!
4mrs.justenbeeebir123omg does that mean draco and hermione were in love and now there children are doin the same thing? good storyyy!
8/9/2011 c13 Lingo10
lol cute!.. But 7 kids,haha madness but its all love. Draco and Hermione sure knows how to get it done. 3
lol cute!.. But 7 kids,haha madness but its all love. Draco and Hermione sure knows how to get it done. 3
8/7/2011 c10 ILoveSnape
I love this story and this chapter so much!
Wonderful job! :D
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks! :)
I love this story and this chapter so much!
Wonderful job! :D
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks! :)
8/6/2011 c10 Lingo10
:D I love the whole family dynamic coming together! I love this story. 3 Please continue for me!
:D I love the whole family dynamic coming together! I love this story. 3 Please continue for me!
8/3/2011 c6 9BlondeGinger711
Ohh...Come on! Cliff hanger! Update soon i can't wait to find out if she's his daughter. Or just PM me the answer.LOL
9BlondeGinger711Ohh...Come on! Cliff hanger! Update soon i can't wait to find out if she's his daughter. Or just PM me the answer.LOL
8/3/2011 c2 BlondeGinger711
I like it...No scratch that. I love it so far. I liked the flashback, it was really well written.
I like it...No scratch that. I love it so far. I liked the flashback, it was really well written.
8/3/2011 c1 BlondeGinger711
I like the plot; it's really original so far. You should just skip lines a bit more so it wouldn't be hard to read. And your grammar is really good. I only noticed one mistake. (When Hermione tells Rose to stay away from Scorpius, there's no H in the were) Other than that you should add more detail to your story...but look whose taking. LOL (Me) I barley add any detail to my stories. I'm looking forward to reading more and basically like your story a lot so far. =*)
I like the plot; it's really original so far. You should just skip lines a bit more so it wouldn't be hard to read. And your grammar is really good. I only noticed one mistake. (When Hermione tells Rose to stay away from Scorpius, there's no H in the were) Other than that you should add more detail to your story...but look whose taking. LOL (Me) I barley add any detail to my stories. I'm looking forward to reading more and basically like your story a lot so far. =*)
7/31/2011 c6 ricky
What great anticipation. We all know who it is but it would be better to hear it from you. Please continue on!
What great anticipation. We all know who it is but it would be better to hear it from you. Please continue on!