for Chase the Sun5/13 c14 Lovekyoko
As always, I love your writing. I love how you portrayed Maria here. One time I saw Ren became OOC (when he flushed when Maria asked him to wait for her), but all in all they are IC. This is an exciting read! And I'm looking for more to come! Thanks and I wish success in your activities and hope you'll find the time, energy and passion to write the continuation of this story!
As always, I love your writing. I love how you portrayed Maria here. One time I saw Ren became OOC (when he flushed when Maria asked him to wait for her), but all in all they are IC. This is an exciting read! And I'm looking for more to come! Thanks and I wish success in your activities and hope you'll find the time, energy and passion to write the continuation of this story!
4/8 c14 Guest
Please continue! I LOVE this story and am waiting (sometimes patiently) for the update.
Please continue! I LOVE this story and am waiting (sometimes patiently) for the update.
1/31 c14 Lebanna
Though I normally don't like alternative worlds, I thought I would give it a try, I'm glad I did! Now, update quickly, haha, I've catched up. (Just joking, but I would appreciate it anyway though)
Though I normally don't like alternative worlds, I thought I would give it a try, I'm glad I did! Now, update quickly, haha, I've catched up. (Just joking, but I would appreciate it anyway though)
1/26 c14 
3Srylanna
I can't wait to read more of this Old West Challenge. To tell you the truth, I've already read AlitaBlake's Old West Story and I've been looking for something similar for quite some time.
3SrylannaI can't wait to read more of this Old West Challenge. To tell you the truth, I've already read AlitaBlake's Old West Story and I've been looking for something similar for quite some time.
1/24 c14 Sumi031885
Just reread this a second time and still love this story. please update soon cuz the suspense is killing me
Just reread this a second time and still love this story. please update soon cuz the suspense is killing me
12/27/2012 c1 Guest
when will you're going to continue this? I love this story so much, it's different with your other stories good luck with your newest story as well..
when will you're going to continue this? I love this story so much, it's different with your other stories good luck with your newest story as well..
11/2/2012 c1 1TwinkleMae1991
I'm not a huge western fan in fact I hate it, but your writing captured my interest and I will read it. I just read the new chapter of skip beat available to me and I also started watching the drama and I really enjoy how you portray these characters in your stories
1TwinkleMae1991I'm not a huge western fan in fact I hate it, but your writing captured my interest and I will read it. I just read the new chapter of skip beat available to me and I also started watching the drama and I really enjoy how you portray these characters in your stories
10/23/2012 c14 Guest
:( cliff hanger! Love the story! Hope real life let's you get back to it soon!
:( cliff hanger! Love the story! Hope real life let's you get back to it soon!
10/5/2012 c14 4Haruno Asahi
Well, I see I'm not the only one who's eagerly waiting for the next chapter to come out, so this review is probably pointless. Just wanted to say that unless I drop dead I'll be looking forward to the next chapter of this story! meanwhile I'll be enjoying the next installment of "Dear Senpai" that recently came out XD
Asahi
4Haruno AsahiWell, I see I'm not the only one who's eagerly waiting for the next chapter to come out, so this review is probably pointless. Just wanted to say that unless I drop dead I'll be looking forward to the next chapter of this story! meanwhile I'll be enjoying the next installment of "Dear Senpai" that recently came out XD
Asahi
9/12/2012 c14 Guest
I love the way you've written this story, and even the research you've put into it is very impressive. I can't wait for the next chapter!
I love the way you've written this story, and even the research you've put into it is very impressive. I can't wait for the next chapter!
7/30/2012 c14 LunaBianca
The story is shaping up to be quite exciting with romantic triangles (squares?) and violence on the horizon. Looking forward to the chaos of next chapter!
I appreciate the progression of emotion and awareness for the characters. Kyoko and Sho are still denying what they really feel for Ren and Kyoko, respectively. Ren is becoming bolder in displaying affection to Kyoko. Todd grapples with what kind of relationship he wants and what can/should be expected with River Song, and Buffalo Knife steps up his courtship of Kyoko. Even Kanae is mulling over relationship dynamics and struggling with jealousy.
And there's a dark anticipation surrounding Reino and his obsession with Kyoko; I want to know if someone will rescue Kyoko or if she'll save herself. Either way, it'll be exciting.
Thanks for writing, LFU!
The story is shaping up to be quite exciting with romantic triangles (squares?) and violence on the horizon. Looking forward to the chaos of next chapter!
I appreciate the progression of emotion and awareness for the characters. Kyoko and Sho are still denying what they really feel for Ren and Kyoko, respectively. Ren is becoming bolder in displaying affection to Kyoko. Todd grapples with what kind of relationship he wants and what can/should be expected with River Song, and Buffalo Knife steps up his courtship of Kyoko. Even Kanae is mulling over relationship dynamics and struggling with jealousy.
And there's a dark anticipation surrounding Reino and his obsession with Kyoko; I want to know if someone will rescue Kyoko or if she'll save herself. Either way, it'll be exciting.
Thanks for writing, LFU!