for Exposé9/24/2011 c2 Spider's Claw
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Finally another Yugioh Stargate crossover!
And with Marik too!
I look forward to the next chapter!
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Finally another Yugioh Stargate crossover!
And with Marik too!
I look forward to the next chapter!
9/18/2011 c2 
9Toki Mirage
*pouts*
*scowls*
*sulks*
No more? After all that? *le sigh*
Hope to see more soon!
9Toki Mirage*pouts*
*scowls*
*sulks*
No more? After all that? *le sigh*
Hope to see more soon!
9/17/2011 c2 11Senna Sylvan
I love your Marik. I think he's great. He's really the whole reason I'm on the edge of my seat wishing for the next chapter. Can't wait for the next update.
11Senna SylvanI love your Marik. I think he's great. He's really the whole reason I'm on the edge of my seat wishing for the next chapter. Can't wait for the next update.
9/2/2011 c2 sas
Love it that Marik is the main character, he is well written. Please continu with this one.
Love it that Marik is the main character, he is well written. Please continu with this one.
8/25/2011 c2 1The elusive shadow
Marik was really cool in this story. I really like the way how he knows just as much as SG1 and also know how to keep his secrets. It balances out the power.
I also love to suspens, that he isn't spilling all his secrets. He is an ancient tombkeeper after all, and the secrets he guards is dangerous.
I hope you keep Marik as mysterious as possible.
1The elusive shadowMarik was really cool in this story. I really like the way how he knows just as much as SG1 and also know how to keep his secrets. It balances out the power.
I also love to suspens, that he isn't spilling all his secrets. He is an ancient tombkeeper after all, and the secrets he guards is dangerous.
I hope you keep Marik as mysterious as possible.
8/24/2011 c2 Ooooh
So. I kind of really like this story. Yeah. I adore crossovers that even attempt to make sense, and this one certainly does more that that.
I like how your Marik is turning out, and I always love Daniel. :)
I hope you continue with this wonderful story- So, until next chapter!
So. I kind of really like this story. Yeah. I adore crossovers that even attempt to make sense, and this one certainly does more that that.
I like how your Marik is turning out, and I always love Daniel. :)
I hope you continue with this wonderful story- So, until next chapter!
8/22/2011 c2 Elspeth
My knowledge of Yu-Gi-Oh is very sketchy but this story really works for me anyway. The SG-1 characters ring true and Marik is intriguing. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
My knowledge of Yu-Gi-Oh is very sketchy but this story really works for me anyway. The SG-1 characters ring true and Marik is intriguing. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
8/8/2011 c2 110m3ga's Z3r0
I reviewed-do you feel better? :D So, even though this was hard to write, I still liked the chapter! Marik is so great. :3 Speaking of which, do the rest of SG1 even know what he looks like? I kinda want to see their reactions to his appearance. Marik in a suit, ehh? Hmm... ^^ Well, I still love the fic, and I hope you made the grades! Can't wait for the update~~.
110m3ga's Z3r0I reviewed-do you feel better? :D So, even though this was hard to write, I still liked the chapter! Marik is so great. :3 Speaking of which, do the rest of SG1 even know what he looks like? I kinda want to see their reactions to his appearance. Marik in a suit, ehh? Hmm... ^^ Well, I still love the fic, and I hope you made the grades! Can't wait for the update~~.
8/8/2011 c2 9PathKeeper
great chapter, good story so far. like the direction you going. I wish there was more yu-gi-oh stargate crossovers they mesh very timeline wise, 5000 years ago the pharaoh defeats a evil, and 5000 years ago Ra is driven off earth. but anyway great chapter look forward to more
9PathKeepergreat chapter, good story so far. like the direction you going. I wish there was more yu-gi-oh stargate crossovers they mesh very timeline wise, 5000 years ago the pharaoh defeats a evil, and 5000 years ago Ra is driven off earth. but anyway great chapter look forward to more
8/8/2011 c2 1secret-sorrow
the meeting was just the right kind of awkward for Daniel
keep the chapters coming! :)
1secret-sorrowthe meeting was just the right kind of awkward for Daniel
keep the chapters coming! :)
8/8/2011 c2 xDarklightx
I really like it. I can't wait to read how the meeting goes. Update as soon as you can.
I really like it. I can't wait to read how the meeting goes. Update as soon as you can.
8/7/2011 c1 secret-sorrow
The story shows. It's been sometime since YGH/SG1 fanfics have been updated so I was very happy when I saw this one.
I look forward to reading the new chapters :) Keep it up ^_^
The story shows. It's been sometime since YGH/SG1 fanfics have been updated so I was very happy when I saw this one.
I look forward to reading the new chapters :) Keep it up ^_^
8/4/2011 c1 xDarklightx
I really like it so far. I can't wait to read more. Update as soon as you can.
I really like it so far. I can't wait to read more. Update as soon as you can.