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2/10 c8 32PrayerGirl
This was really sweet! I loved it!
8/2/2012 c8 lizziemagic
How sweet! I like the Mater/Holly pairing. Nice job! :)
7/4/2012 c2 POLSJ103
I only watched Cars 2 yesterday and now i love this pair just as much as Lightning/Sally
6/26/2012 c8 13LittleMissPanda84
Great Story! :) I just got done watching Cars 2 and then I read this and it's absolutely adorable! :D Put it in faves.
4/24/2012 c4 415 Lucca Hunter
Don't worry, it's not too fluffy yet. Just cute. :) When you write Mater's dialogue he sounds like Hagrid from Harry Potter. Except American, a tow truck, and with no wizardly powers whatsoever.

If you see what I mean...
1/31/2012 c8 24Funkywatermelon
Cute! Hey, check out my story Ian's story if ya want.
1/31/2012 c8 89Mighty ANT
Yay , bonus chapter! :D
1/31/2012 c8 4crashthecat88
This is what I am thinking, MY COMPUTER IS STUPID! Why? Because it is a slow poke at opening windows. Anyways, Awesome story!
1/30/2012 c7 5kericobarbossa
Awe, I liked this chapter! You really are wonderful at keeping them in character! SO cute! Can't wait for more!
1/29/2012 c7 11Firefly95
This story was too cute! You captured their personalities perfectly!
1/28/2012 c7 11Samantha Spanner
Aww! She kissed him! Go Holley, go Holley!

You wrote this excellently, and I think Mater's reactions were perfect. :-)
1/26/2012 c7 4crashthecat88
will there be a sequel?
1/26/2012 c7 37Gemini Artemis
I love this story. It's simple (I mean, they're just going on a date) yet heartwarming and super fun. Mater and Holley are absolutely adorable here. I think you really did a great job writing them and keeping them in-character. They just feel so real and believable. All their lines, their inner thoughts, their emotions... I could easily see it all happening in canon.

Oh, and you get extra points for including Otis. I think most people forget he exists, and as another reviewer before me said, it's really nice to see a nice lemon for a change. (Not that I don't love the evil lemons, too. XD)

I hope to see more Cars fics from you! ^^
1/26/2012 c7 20KeybladeChloeNerd
Awww cute chapter. Very cute even though I ship Holley/Finn and Lightning/Sally (of course. ;D). Aww is that it? D: :(. I loved this story and I'm glad they kissed. Soo cute!
1/26/2012 c7 89Mighty ANT
Very nice! And I absolutely LOVED the ending! It was pretty hard to contain my squeals of joy :D

How you wrote Mater and the entire scene was perfect, and I can't wait for your next fic, and the Mater/Holley you're going to put in :)
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