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10/21/2012 c1 27mandaree1
awesome fanfic!
9/12/2012 c1 3SabastianScott
I loved this! I read it a while back, and when I stumbled apon this again I had to add it to my favorites!
8/22/2012 c13 Heidilynn08
I really appreciate you taking the time to write this story but im confused.

I figured this would be really exciting with events happening to mai and a long process getting rid of the ghost. The ghost barely had anything to do with the story it seemed. And then in chapter 12 she dies in seconds. It just seemed a lot about dancing with a bit of Ghost Hunt thrown in.

This isnt a flame. Everyone has their opinions. Again, thank you for taking the time to write and complete this story. Im sure many people enjoyed it.
8/8/2012 c8 sumi
very good
7/7/2012 c13 12Treelow955
I'm really sad this ended!

It was really good!
7/7/2012 c12 Treelow955
Ooh, Naru's mean!

He's gonna get a shock if he sees Mai dance!

This was really good again!
7/7/2012 c11 Treelow955
Whoah, awesome cliffhanger!

This is so good!
7/7/2012 c10 Treelow955
This was amazing again!

GO NARU!

I really liked the bit where Mai was waking up and was guessing who was in the room!

Yasu's too gay to be gay, love it! Giggle!
7/7/2012 c9 Treelow955
Ooh, this is getting intriguing!

I'm really liking this story!
7/7/2012 c8 Treelow955
Wow, this was awesome again!

I swear I believed Tony was possessed by Gene for a while! Maybe I still do, I'm not sure on that!

Really good nonetheless though!
7/7/2012 c7 Treelow955
THIS WAS SUCH AN AWESOMELY AMAZING CHAPTER!

GO GENE!

GO NARU!

WHOO YEAH!
7/7/2012 c6 Treelow955
Again this was really good even if I still don't understand the dance moves!

Well done!

Bad idea to tell Madoka, she'd gossip anyway!
7/7/2012 c5 Treelow955
Ooh, GO GENE! YEAAH!

Sorry, just had to say that! So, Gene's involved now huh? Cool!

He's right that would be weird and scary! Totally funny nonetheless though!

This was awesome! (Because Gene was in it!)
7/7/2012 c4 Treelow955
This was yet another brilliant chapter!

A cliffhanger, cool! So, the danger magnet is starting to attract stuff!

I don't understand any of that ballet stuff even when you explained it but it was still cool sounding!
7/7/2012 c2 Treelow955
Ooh, I hope Naru does figure her out!

This was another excellent chapter!

I found the first mention of her Mum a little confusing, but you cleared it right up toward the end so I get it now!

This was great!
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