for Little Dancer9/12/2012 c1
3SabastianScott
I loved this! I read it a while back, and when I stumbled apon this again I had to add it to my favorites!
3SabastianScottI loved this! I read it a while back, and when I stumbled apon this again I had to add it to my favorites!
8/22/2012 c13 Heidilynn08
I really appreciate you taking the time to write this story but im confused.
I figured this would be really exciting with events happening to mai and a long process getting rid of the ghost. The ghost barely had anything to do with the story it seemed. And then in chapter 12 she dies in seconds. It just seemed a lot about dancing with a bit of Ghost Hunt thrown in.
This isnt a flame. Everyone has their opinions. Again, thank you for taking the time to write and complete this story. Im sure many people enjoyed it.
I really appreciate you taking the time to write this story but im confused.
I figured this would be really exciting with events happening to mai and a long process getting rid of the ghost. The ghost barely had anything to do with the story it seemed. And then in chapter 12 she dies in seconds. It just seemed a lot about dancing with a bit of Ghost Hunt thrown in.
This isnt a flame. Everyone has their opinions. Again, thank you for taking the time to write and complete this story. Im sure many people enjoyed it.
8/8/2012 c8 sumi
very good
very good
7/7/2012 c12 Treelow955
Ooh, Naru's mean!
He's gonna get a shock if he sees Mai dance!
This was really good again!
Ooh, Naru's mean!
He's gonna get a shock if he sees Mai dance!
This was really good again!
7/7/2012 c10 Treelow955
This was amazing again!
GO NARU!
I really liked the bit where Mai was waking up and was guessing who was in the room!
Yasu's too gay to be gay, love it! Giggle!
This was amazing again!
GO NARU!
I really liked the bit where Mai was waking up and was guessing who was in the room!
Yasu's too gay to be gay, love it! Giggle!
7/7/2012 c8 Treelow955
Wow, this was awesome again!
I swear I believed Tony was possessed by Gene for a while! Maybe I still do, I'm not sure on that!
Really good nonetheless though!
Wow, this was awesome again!
I swear I believed Tony was possessed by Gene for a while! Maybe I still do, I'm not sure on that!
Really good nonetheless though!
7/7/2012 c6 Treelow955
Again this was really good even if I still don't understand the dance moves!
Well done!
Bad idea to tell Madoka, she'd gossip anyway!
Again this was really good even if I still don't understand the dance moves!
Well done!
Bad idea to tell Madoka, she'd gossip anyway!
7/7/2012 c5 Treelow955
Ooh, GO GENE! YEAAH!
Sorry, just had to say that! So, Gene's involved now huh? Cool!
He's right that would be weird and scary! Totally funny nonetheless though!
This was awesome! (Because Gene was in it!)
Ooh, GO GENE! YEAAH!
Sorry, just had to say that! So, Gene's involved now huh? Cool!
He's right that would be weird and scary! Totally funny nonetheless though!
This was awesome! (Because Gene was in it!)
7/7/2012 c4 Treelow955
This was yet another brilliant chapter!
A cliffhanger, cool! So, the danger magnet is starting to attract stuff!
I don't understand any of that ballet stuff even when you explained it but it was still cool sounding!
This was yet another brilliant chapter!
A cliffhanger, cool! So, the danger magnet is starting to attract stuff!
I don't understand any of that ballet stuff even when you explained it but it was still cool sounding!
7/7/2012 c2 Treelow955
Ooh, I hope Naru does figure her out!
This was another excellent chapter!
I found the first mention of her Mum a little confusing, but you cleared it right up toward the end so I get it now!
This was great!
Ooh, I hope Naru does figure her out!
This was another excellent chapter!
I found the first mention of her Mum a little confusing, but you cleared it right up toward the end so I get it now!
This was great!
