for Give into ME8/20/2011 c2
37KTxx
Great second chapter. I'm a tiny bit confused about what person this is written in because sometimes it says 'I' and over times it says 'he'. I really liked this chapter!
37KTxxGreat second chapter. I'm a tiny bit confused about what person this is written in because sometimes it says 'I' and over times it says 'he'. I really liked this chapter!
8/16/2011 c2 alwaysandforever08
CLIFFHANGER! Ah, you're killing me with the suspense! I hope Haley and Nathan get together. Great chapter!
CLIFFHANGER! Ah, you're killing me with the suspense! I hope Haley and Nathan get together. Great chapter!
8/14/2011 c2 hebewe
The first chapter was great but this was even better.
I hope Haley didn't mean it and goes back with Nathan.
It's always Naley - never Jaley.
Please continue with this story, I'd love to read more.
The first chapter was great but this was even better.
I hope Haley didn't mean it and goes back with Nathan.
It's always Naley - never Jaley.
Please continue with this story, I'd love to read more.
8/14/2011 c2
3cheydale4
This chapter was great! I love it! And I love this version of Nathan. I hope there's more. :) Can't wait for some Naley. I hope she says yes!
3cheydale4This chapter was great! I love it! And I love this version of Nathan. I hope there's more. :) Can't wait for some Naley. I hope she says yes!
8/14/2011 c2
2GottaluvNaley
wow love the songs
so Jake loves Haley ..thats nice but Haley belongs with Nathan
2GottaluvNaleywow love the songs
so Jake loves Haley ..thats nice but Haley belongs with Nathan
8/12/2011 c1
2noteasilybroken
awww i love it! BTW I love this song as well. I hope you ud this soon 3
2noteasilybrokenawww i love it! BTW I love this song as well. I hope you ud this soon 3
8/3/2011 c1
3cheydale4
I LOVE THIS STORY. And the song! And I totally think Naley should be together, sure he's an **. But, they can work it out, they're meant to be! I also like Jake so if you continue, I hope he's in the story. But, not as Haley's lover! Cause let's face it Jaley or Hake sounds stupid. :P
I hope you continue with this! :) byee.
3cheydale4I LOVE THIS STORY. And the song! And I totally think Naley should be together, sure he's an **. But, they can work it out, they're meant to be! I also like Jake so if you continue, I hope he's in the story. But, not as Haley's lover! Cause let's face it Jaley or Hake sounds stupid. :P
I hope you continue with this! :) byee.
7/30/2011 c1 alwaysandforever08
You should continue this story! I really like it, especially with Jake being included.
You should continue this story! I really like it, especially with Jake being included.
7/29/2011 c1
17AfricanChieftess
Me loves!
And I disagree with KTxx - Nathan, Nathan, Nathan!
Granted, he acted like an a$$ for not going after her but even so, Jake and Haley wouldn't be that good together. Their relationship would be out of 'desperation' and companionship, each of them thinking of the "what if"s with those they truly love...
I'm hoping there's another chapter...?
17AfricanChieftessMe loves!
And I disagree with KTxx - Nathan, Nathan, Nathan!
Granted, he acted like an a$$ for not going after her but even so, Jake and Haley wouldn't be that good together. Their relationship would be out of 'desperation' and companionship, each of them thinking of the "what if"s with those they truly love...
I'm hoping there's another chapter...?
7/29/2011 c1
37KTxx
Jake! Jake! Jake!
I ship Haley with anyone, so she should choose Jake who's stood by her instead of Nathan who started the stupid fight and didn't come after her when she left.
I liked this (I listened to the song at the same time too), but Haley definitely needs to let go of Nathan. I understand why he was rude, because she left, again. But I don't know.. it doesn't seem right with them after she gave up so easily.
So, Jake! Jake! Jake!
Great OneShot!
37KTxxJake! Jake! Jake!
I ship Haley with anyone, so she should choose Jake who's stood by her instead of Nathan who started the stupid fight and didn't come after her when she left.
I liked this (I listened to the song at the same time too), but Haley definitely needs to let go of Nathan. I understand why he was rude, because she left, again. But I don't know.. it doesn't seem right with them after she gave up so easily.
So, Jake! Jake! Jake!
Great OneShot!
