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7/6/2012 c1 66Couture Girl
I've never considered Dean/Hannah. More of a Dean/Padma fan, but this was so cute! And adorable! Your take on Dean was superb! And I liked your Hannah a lot. The uses of the colors and and his thoughts of her were really great and my favorite part had to be that she did taste like berries! You did wonderful!

Much love!

C.G.
11/14/2011 c1 74My Dear Professor McGonagall
Aww! I'm so surprised I haven't read this! :D I loved it! XD They're so sweet. I thoroughly enjoyed Hannah's Chocolate Frog obsession, that'd probably be my favorite candy, too...and Dean is such a sweetheart! I love him and his drawing! :D And the colors, all the colors made me smile. Beautiful story!

Lucy
9/24/2011 c1 9she defies gravity
I really, really love this! It's just so cute and the pairing is adorable. I had never really thought about the two together but you've wriiten it so well :) Great work!
8/12/2011 c1 26Dear. Dark. Destiny
Oh this was so sweet! I love fluffy stories and this was definitely one of them. It was lighthearted and romantic. :) I really enjoyed it.

So i couldn't really tell anything too wrong with it. You had a few grammar mistakes, and structural details, but that's really it.

Now i must grade you. You are graded on grammar, creativity/creative adj. use, technique/structure, and rules followed. You got 17/20. Marvelous job! :D

Happy writings

Caroline
8/8/2011 c1 1vancabreuniter
Oh, this is sweet! I've never really thought of Hannah & Dean together, but I now like it. I especially like the idea of them using the names of colors in conversations. Cute.
7/30/2011 c1 aasiya333
That was incredibly well written

Great job!

This was a great, yet different pairing...

Fantastic

xxx

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