for Ichigo's new love8/19/2012 c1 
6Midnightkitten394
this was bad because it was so fast and short,there should be more chapters and edit this one.
6Midnightkitten394this was bad because it was so fast and short,there should be more chapters and edit this one.
10/18/2011 c1 KawaiiKoneko
No probs :D
No probs :D
10/18/2011 c1 princessmiddleseast
aww...thx kawaiikoneko!:) about and i gotten better about 2 weeks ago.
:)
aww...thx kawaiikoneko!:) about and i gotten better about 2 weeks ago.
:)
10/17/2011 c1 KawaiiKoneko
Don't feel bad Princess, it was only your 1st fanfic so don't worry, at least u tried.
Don't feel bad Princess, it was only your 1st fanfic so don't worry, at least u tried.
10/7/2011 c1 princessmidleast
Anonamas just you telling my story was terrible was very hurtful! :'(
You don't just read someone's fanfic and say it was horrible just because it was rushed!
It's not nice and it's very rude especially because i worked ** it and it's was one of my FIRST fanfics.
FIRST!FIRST!FIRST!
It's really hurtful just getting it's terrible!Do you know how much that really hurts right now especially right now since i'm already upset at something that happened at school and that review didn't help make me feel better at all!If you don't have nothing nice to say then please DON'T SAY IT AT ALL!
You could have put instead of that "That was terrible you don't just come out and say I love you you have to have something really romantic happen" you didn't leave a suggestion at all.You have to tell me what it is that i should fix not say it was terrible just because it was rush!
I'm right now crying because 2 things
1)Some thing happened at school between me and my friends
2)Your review which hurt my feelins even more.I can tell you now that i have made 8 fanfics right now and everyone doesn't just say to me it was terrible.none of them said the word terrible.Terrible means basicly nothing was written.That means that none of the charectors showed emotions.
I want you to know how much it upset me. :'(
Anonamas just you telling my story was terrible was very hurtful! :'(
You don't just read someone's fanfic and say it was horrible just because it was rushed!
It's not nice and it's very rude especially because i worked ** it and it's was one of my FIRST fanfics.
FIRST!FIRST!FIRST!
It's really hurtful just getting it's terrible!Do you know how much that really hurts right now especially right now since i'm already upset at something that happened at school and that review didn't help make me feel better at all!If you don't have nothing nice to say then please DON'T SAY IT AT ALL!
You could have put instead of that "That was terrible you don't just come out and say I love you you have to have something really romantic happen" you didn't leave a suggestion at all.You have to tell me what it is that i should fix not say it was terrible just because it was rush!
I'm right now crying because 2 things
1)Some thing happened at school between me and my friends
2)Your review which hurt my feelins even more.I can tell you now that i have made 8 fanfics right now and everyone doesn't just say to me it was terrible.none of them said the word terrible.Terrible means basicly nothing was written.That means that none of the charectors showed emotions.
I want you to know how much it upset me. :'(
10/6/2011 c1 Anonamas
That was terrible you don't just come out and say I love you you have to have something really romantic happen
That was terrible you don't just come out and say I love you you have to have something really romantic happen
9/17/2011 c1 9Angel Lovely Rose
hunnybunny look i'm sorry if it's rushed but it was like one of my first fanfics.and i'm sure that's not all you would want to hear about one of your first fanfics would u?I'm not angry just upset that you just put it seemed rush it would have been better if you left me with a suggestion...
And thanks so much kawaiiknocko and Mewpainappuru for always taking time to reveiew my stories you r my most loyal readers I had!:)
And thank you so much magicalgirl100591!i'm honored to have a fanfic written for me.I'll continue reading your story and reviewing. :)
9Angel Lovely Rosehunnybunny look i'm sorry if it's rushed but it was like one of my first fanfics.and i'm sure that's not all you would want to hear about one of your first fanfics would u?I'm not angry just upset that you just put it seemed rush it would have been better if you left me with a suggestion...
And thanks so much kawaiiknocko and Mewpainappuru for always taking time to reveiew my stories you r my most loyal readers I had!:)
And thank you so much magicalgirl100591!i'm honored to have a fanfic written for me.I'll continue reading your story and reviewing. :)
8/28/2011 c1 KawaiiKoneko
This story is a bit quick and rushed,you need some more description.And Ichigo wouldnt fall for Kisshu that easily,would she?You need to make it more interesting.Im not say saying it was bad,it was kinda cute...but just keep practicing!
This story is a bit quick and rushed,you need some more description.And Ichigo wouldnt fall for Kisshu that easily,would she?You need to make it more interesting.Im not say saying it was bad,it was kinda cute...but just keep practicing!
8/15/2011 c1 Fanfiction-DeleteThisAccount
Jesus Christ guys, LAY OFF! Yes, this WAS a bit quick but I thought it was quite cute.
Jesus Christ guys, LAY OFF! Yes, this WAS a bit quick but I thought it was quite cute.
8/1/2011 c1 hunnybunny
This seemed rushed.
This seemed rushed.
8/1/2011 c1 puffysugarpuffy
This story was very non-descriptive and the characters were very OOC. You need to explain why Masaya broke up with her, and Ichigo is not just going to automatically 'love' Kisshu. Ichigo is more stubborn than that and isn't just going to admit she loves him right away. She might not even know what this 'new feeling' is. Try to make your story more unique. There are to may stoies like this where Masaya breaks up with Ichigo for no real reason at all, and Ichigo automatically think she loves Kisshu. Make this story more original, more IC, more descriptve, and realistic, and you could have a pretty good fanfic, it depends on how you do it. Keep writing and practicing.
This story was very non-descriptive and the characters were very OOC. You need to explain why Masaya broke up with her, and Ichigo is not just going to automatically 'love' Kisshu. Ichigo is more stubborn than that and isn't just going to admit she loves him right away. She might not even know what this 'new feeling' is. Try to make your story more unique. There are to may stoies like this where Masaya breaks up with Ichigo for no real reason at all, and Ichigo automatically think she loves Kisshu. Make this story more original, more IC, more descriptve, and realistic, and you could have a pretty good fanfic, it depends on how you do it. Keep writing and practicing.