for A New Life8/10/2012 c6 Guest
YOU NEED MORE
YOU NEED MORE
8/10/2012 c3 Guest
Great Chapter
Great Chapter
11/29/2011 c5 
2teiboi
Great story, loved this softer side of Baird, still can be an asswhole but with a more gentler side. I don't like the 100 percent Baird he sometimes can be really nasty anyhoo hope u update soon.
2teiboiGreat story, loved this softer side of Baird, still can be an asswhole but with a more gentler side. I don't like the 100 percent Baird he sometimes can be really nasty anyhoo hope u update soon.
11/25/2011 c5 1MissHLJ
Really good! You really got into the head of Baird and got his character right, also, nice plot line :)
Keep writing, because I cant wait to read what happens next!
1MissHLJReally good! You really got into the head of Baird and got his character right, also, nice plot line :)
Keep writing, because I cant wait to read what happens next!
10/10/2011 c4 Yelena P
Lol Baird and Bernie are so funny together :D But I want to see where this suspicion with William is leading... :O There's a lot going on in this story, so I'm glad you're continuing :)
Lol Baird and Bernie are so funny together :D But I want to see where this suspicion with William is leading... :O There's a lot going on in this story, so I'm glad you're continuing :)
10/2/2011 c4 2Emy-022
i love this so far! it's very well written and very nice plot :D Baird just needs to get some love lol :)
Just being a critical editor ( it comes out sometimes :D ), but make sure before you post, look at the text and content and make sure everything's grammatically correct and you're not using the same words all the time.. i've seen this a couple times and just wanna make sure you're aware of it..
Otherwise very nice and keep going! :)
~Emy~
2Emy-022i love this so far! it's very well written and very nice plot :D Baird just needs to get some love lol :)
Just being a critical editor ( it comes out sometimes :D ), but make sure before you post, look at the text and content and make sure everything's grammatically correct and you're not using the same words all the time.. i've seen this a couple times and just wanna make sure you're aware of it..
Otherwise very nice and keep going! :)
~Emy~
9/28/2011 c4 GirlieYeah Tite
continue no matter what ill brodcast srtoy on my account juz 2 lazie 2 sign in rite now.
continue no matter what ill brodcast srtoy on my account juz 2 lazie 2 sign in rite now.
9/28/2011 c4 9My Wunderwaffle iz missin
Upon looking on this story, I just love it. The lack of reviews makes me think this is under-appreciated.
I absolutely love how Baird "adopted" kids. I really hope you continue this.
9My Wunderwaffle iz missinUpon looking on this story, I just love it. The lack of reviews makes me think this is under-appreciated.
I absolutely love how Baird "adopted" kids. I really hope you continue this.
9/28/2011 c4 teradanielle
You really should have more feedback from us, lol. Anyway, I always dig post-war stories for the guys, but have you thought about getting a beta? There's a lot you can do with the story and it wouldn't hurt to have someone read over it to check for spelling/grammer. It takes me out of the story when I read the word "and" when I'm pretty sure it should be "any". Other than that, keep writing, maybe look into getting someone to proof read and bounce ideas around with.
I'm looking forward the next chapter!
You really should have more feedback from us, lol. Anyway, I always dig post-war stories for the guys, but have you thought about getting a beta? There's a lot you can do with the story and it wouldn't hurt to have someone read over it to check for spelling/grammer. It takes me out of the story when I read the word "and" when I'm pretty sure it should be "any". Other than that, keep writing, maybe look into getting someone to proof read and bounce ideas around with.
I'm looking forward the next chapter!
8/28/2011 c3 Guest
nice work man. so love where you're going with this. can't wait to see what happens next and find out who she is and who the intruder is. definitely got my curiosity... haven't read any fanfiction on after the war is over, so this is quite refreshing. thanks for the great read!
nice work man. so love where you're going with this. can't wait to see what happens next and find out who she is and who the intruder is. definitely got my curiosity... haven't read any fanfiction on after the war is over, so this is quite refreshing. thanks for the great read!
8/15/2011 c3 Yelena P
I really like where you're going with the story so pleaseeee continue! Its original to me :)
I really like where you're going with the story so pleaseeee continue! Its original to me :)
8/5/2011 c2 melinda
hey i think it is a really good story keep going. what was the scream about
hey i think it is a really good story keep going. what was the scream about