for Biggest Fear7/11/2012 c2 
19kage kitsune 14
Don't know 'bout you but I'm vanished."
Sorry but it should be famished not vanished.
Good story so far...
19kage kitsune 14Don't know 'bout you but I'm vanished."
Sorry but it should be famished not vanished.
Good story so far...
1/14/2012 c2 26AspergianStoryteller
If Alex comes to NZ, I recommend bungy jumping. I haven't been yet - he can go with me.
26AspergianStorytellerIf Alex comes to NZ, I recommend bungy jumping. I haven't been yet - he can go with me.
11/6/2011 c1 SHIA
You need a beta because the standard of English needs improvement. Otherwise, rather funny and nice plot!
You need a beta because the standard of English needs improvement. Otherwise, rather funny and nice plot!
10/29/2011 c7 1serenityselena
interesting ending for this story...
looking forward to reading the sequel ^_^
1serenityselenainteresting ending for this story...
looking forward to reading the sequel ^_^
10/29/2011 c7 13CHiKa-RoXy
Oh yeah, i reviewed! Now it's your turn to keep part of the deal and write!
13CHiKa-RoXyOh yeah, i reviewed! Now it's your turn to keep part of the deal and write!
10/29/2011 c7 2WelcometoDystopia
I LOVED this;)
Favourite moment: When Eagle almost kills Alex by hugging:3 So cute.
Favourite line:'We dyed his hair the same colour as mine the week before I left 'coz we got bored'. Ahaha, poor Harry...a bored Alex and Skye is never good XD
Like I said, loved this chapter! Can't wait till you start the new story! ;)
2WelcometoDystopiaI LOVED this;)
Favourite moment: When Eagle almost kills Alex by hugging:3 So cute.
Favourite line:'We dyed his hair the same colour as mine the week before I left 'coz we got bored'. Ahaha, poor Harry...a bored Alex and Skye is never good XD
Like I said, loved this chapter! Can't wait till you start the new story! ;)
10/19/2011 c6 3Leather Dragon
cool story!
um i don't mean to pick on you but... dose is not spelt like that. it it spelt like this: Does.
I love your story! please update when you can.
-LD
3Leather Dragoncool story!
um i don't mean to pick on you but... dose is not spelt like that. it it spelt like this: Does.
I love your story! please update when you can.
-LD
10/10/2011 c1 guess who
hi. nice story telling ^u^ i like the attitude from Alex ;) CAN YOU PUT ME IN YOUR STORIES AND MAKE ALEX FALL IN LOVE WITH ME? xD haha
hi. nice story telling ^u^ i like the attitude from Alex ;) CAN YOU PUT ME IN YOUR STORIES AND MAKE ALEX FALL IN LOVE WITH ME? xD haha
9/25/2011 c6 Jester
Really good story ease keep writing this story. It is really good and I had a couple of good laughs. Good luck!
Really good story ease keep writing this story. It is really good and I had a couple of good laughs. Good luck!
9/25/2011 c6 1serenityselena
interesting revelations...
Blunt is an old meddling codger who should get what he deserves for what he`s doing to Alex...
1serenityselenainteresting revelations...
Blunt is an old meddling codger who should get what he deserves for what he`s doing to Alex...
9/24/2011 c6 ilovebeingme4ever
What, Alex has a son? An Alx Rider mini? Haven't seen that before. Continue, it's very interesting!
What, Alex has a son? An Alx Rider mini? Haven't seen that before. Continue, it's very interesting!
9/24/2011 c6 MadHatter'xo
So I havent signed in for this review because I'm on my iPhone. I can't see what im writing at the moment because my little kitten is sat on my boobs, trying to lick my face and hitting my phone with his tail.
So I luuurrrved this chapter too much. I loved it when Wolf, Eagle and Snake thought Skyes little brother Harry was Alexs kid. Fuck I couldn't stop laughing. Oh, and at the end when they were like 'he looks like you' and Alex was like 'hmmm'. Ahaha, serves then right for trying to break into his phone! He could of had anything on that phone!
I'll be your beta!
So I havent signed in for this review because I'm on my iPhone. I can't see what im writing at the moment because my little kitten is sat on my boobs, trying to lick my face and hitting my phone with his tail.
So I luuurrrved this chapter too much. I loved it when Wolf, Eagle and Snake thought Skyes little brother Harry was Alexs kid. Fuck I couldn't stop laughing. Oh, and at the end when they were like 'he looks like you' and Alex was like 'hmmm'. Ahaha, serves then right for trying to break into his phone! He could of had anything on that phone!
I'll be your beta!