for It Hurts Every Time8/7/2011 c1 
1Kaila-theMobianFoxGirl
Poor Protoman! Wahh! T.T
Is there another part to this?
It's very well-written.
1Kaila-theMobianFoxGirlPoor Protoman! Wahh! T.T
Is there another part to this?
It's very well-written.
8/6/2011 c1 11Teribane
Decided to hop along and read one of your stories, and so...
Okay. First of all, some bits are a bit cliched by now - such as the horrible living conditions for Wily bots thing. d:
On the other hand, I was randomly amused by the speculations on Megaman's armour color. XD And last few paragraphs with Protoman not being able to admit it are definitely good.
So overall I enjoyed. And now, off to stick you on alert.
11TeribaneDecided to hop along and read one of your stories, and so...
Okay. First of all, some bits are a bit cliched by now - such as the horrible living conditions for Wily bots thing. d:
On the other hand, I was randomly amused by the speculations on Megaman's armour color. XD And last few paragraphs with Protoman not being able to admit it are definitely good.
So overall I enjoyed. And now, off to stick you on alert.
8/2/2011 c1 2BlackRussian
Another good piece, your work is getting darker.
One thing that I would suggest is to take out the f-bombs. It's not that I'm offended by the use of strong language, its just that without the f-bombs, this story doesn't have any adult content, and if you re-categorize it as Teen it will show up on the default listing for Mega Man, making it more likely viewers will see it (by default, rated M works are hidden).
2BlackRussianAnother good piece, your work is getting darker.
One thing that I would suggest is to take out the f-bombs. It's not that I'm offended by the use of strong language, its just that without the f-bombs, this story doesn't have any adult content, and if you re-categorize it as Teen it will show up on the default listing for Mega Man, making it more likely viewers will see it (by default, rated M works are hidden).