1/8 c1 Natzkie12x
This is so amazing! Really well written and creative, a beautiful story. I just listened to the song and it could not have been more perfect for the scene. Going to read the sequel now :)

10/22/2012 c17 Alea Laufeyson
First of all, I'm sorry that you wont be able to respond to me, but it dosn't matter. Second of all, This is one of the best Fanfictions about Loki, or anything i have ever read. You are an amazing author. Third of all, when i left for school this morning i cried, because i really thought that Loki had died. Thanks alot xD.
Forth of all, I am sooo freakin happy Loki is alive! So, Continue your stories, I look forward to reading them! :D

7/29/2012 c14 Yukihikari-chan
I can totally see Nick Fury losing his eye to a cat XD
Great chapter, ending is very suspenseful :)

5/29/2012 c22 On.my.tippy-toes
aghhhhh :I I was supposed to review this just after it came out, but never got to it. Look at how late it is nowww D: anyway, i LOVED reading this story, and you managed to make a pretty wrapped-up ending, but original too :] Even though I wanted to write a story of my own, I won't have time because of school, but I'm glad I got to read yours! Just found out you're making a sequel to this, so I'm definitely gonna read that!

2/7/2012 c22 ThE PlAGiArIST
You KNOW SOMETHING,your like the tenth girl who made a fine loki/ fanfic...seriously,is tom hiddleston that hot that nseveral girls are willing to write stories about the characther hes potraying in?

but no offense, i love tom hiddleston..

great story,keep it up with sequel.

12/30/2011 c22 13redpinkandwhite
Ahhh! Sofia! That was amazing! Awesome! Splendifierous! I don't even think that is a word! But I don't care, because that was just so AWESOME. :)

And, I have to say, you were so right! Thank you, thank you, thank you for making it so romantic. That has just made my week so much better!

My favorite part was when she asked if she was going to fall, and Loki's like: "No, don't worry. I'll always catch you." One of the best romantic lines ever invented! :)

But, on the other hand, no more writing, at least for this story. That does put a small damper on my happiness. At least, until next time, right? (I am all in support of a continuation, if you are feeling up to it.) But, that means less writing for you, huh? Less stress... I guess there is always a good side to the bad, right?

Now, I would love to critique this last chapter of the story. (Trust me.) However, in commemoration of this momentous occasion, there shall be no critique! So, no more listening to me rant to you, then trying to apply it with my inadequate explanation. But, the best part of the epilogue is looking back! Try rereading your story. See how much you've improved, and maybe where you haven't. See where you can change things, and what you can keep the same. Learn from your mistakes! This is the great(-ish) part of writing. (It still sucks to look over it and see your flaws, but it's all good in the face of helping yourself, right? Right?)

So, girlie, I have one thing (or a lot of things) to say, so I'll just keep this semi-short. You are an amazing, wonderful, inspiring, charming, resplendent, and creative person. I am very glad that you are my friend, and that you took all of my horribly harsh but helpful comments without complaint and deeply to heart. I'm sad that this story will come to a close, but, as with everything, there will be something great waiting around the corner. I can't wait to see what you cook up next! And, don't worry, I'll be there, critiques in hand, and romantic hopes abound, just waiting for you to dazzle me with something greater than I imagined.

Let's get cooking, then.

-Redpinkandwhite (Anika, if you please. :) )

(Oh, and sorry I'm. Late. Two weeks without internet can really kill you!)

12/22/2011 c22 4Silverwinds1313
Aaiiee! I don't think I commented on the last chapter- Bad Silver! - so I'll put both of them in this one.

The meeting between Ande and Athena: I really liked it. It completely makes sence, the way Athena put it. I guess there was a reason I couldn't hate her, eh? It fix so perfectly when Athena fixed (and improved) Ande's sandals. Of course, I can't brag on my knowledge of Greek mythology, but it would make sence if Athena had made the boots. (Hephaestus could have also made them, but in my mind he works more on metals than cloth...)

The meeting between Ande and Loki: Wow, just wow. Most people who read these fics look for romance straight out, but I think it's just so much sweeter - and realistic - if it takes a long time. I loved this to no end!

I guess I'm glad to see the end of this one. It's nice and a little depressing every time I get to the end of a story. There are a few loose ends I would mind seeing tied up, but if they aren't, it won't change the quality of the story. If it comes to votes, I'd vote in favor of another sequel.