for Vindicated12/22/2011 c22 
8hannahthewordsmith
*flailing*
PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL I'LL LOVE YOU MORE THAN I ALREADY DO IF YOU DO! *tackle hug*
For a second there, I was worried that something had happened. It sucks that this story is already over =(
8hannahthewordsmith*flailing*
PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL I'LL LOVE YOU MORE THAN I ALREADY DO IF YOU DO! *tackle hug*
For a second there, I was worried that something had happened. It sucks that this story is already over =(
12/22/2011 c22 24Ikuni Hattori
Ah, I love how you ended this. :) And yes, you left A LOT of loose ends. But what author doesn't? :D Keep writing, whether it be a sequel to this or a new story entirely. Because you have too much talent to waste in doing nothing. :)
24Ikuni HattoriAh, I love how you ended this. :) And yes, you left A LOT of loose ends. But what author doesn't? :D Keep writing, whether it be a sequel to this or a new story entirely. Because you have too much talent to waste in doing nothing. :)
12/19/2011 c21 8Chick With Brains
I really should have reviewed earlier, so sorry about that. But I loved this chapter! :D
I loved the scene with Ande and Athena. :] And after the part with Loki and Odin, I would reeeeaaaaaalllllly like to see a sequel. Of course it's all up to you and all that, but I'd love to see the story of Loki and Ande continued. :D
Can't wait for the epilogue! I just know it'll be awesome.
~CWB
8Chick With BrainsI really should have reviewed earlier, so sorry about that. But I loved this chapter! :D
I loved the scene with Ande and Athena. :] And after the part with Loki and Odin, I would reeeeaaaaaalllllly like to see a sequel. Of course it's all up to you and all that, but I'd love to see the story of Loki and Ande continued. :D
Can't wait for the epilogue! I just know it'll be awesome.
~CWB
12/12/2011 c21 16SighingWinter
Oooh. An interesting cliffy.
I hope you continue with this- as it is totallly awesome!
16SighingWinterOooh. An interesting cliffy.
I hope you continue with this- as it is totallly awesome!
12/9/2011 c21 13redpinkandwhite
So, what do I call you now? Do you have a nickname? Would it be tacky for me to still call you Loki's Little Helper?
I'm sorry. I don't mean to grill you, but I do want to know what it good to call you. :)
Ah... There's only two things I have to say. One: HAPPY UPDATING! It's like my birthday or Christmas all over again! I got an awesome present that just made me happy to read! It was awesome! Two: I cannot WAIT for the ending. The romance will all be tied together in the end... It's going to be one of the best things I have ever read, I promise you! I can't wait for it to come!
Critique:
You know, I should really stop putting that. I can't say much on your writing anymore...
Though, I have to say, I love the allusion you stuck into the story. When you mentioned Iduna, I couldn't help but squeal just a little bit. That's one of those things that I'm learning to use in my English course, and I'm so happy to see you using it as well! It only adds more depth and character to the story, so you are doing very good, my friend!
Everything else is about as pristine as ever. It's just... yes! Awesome!
I just have to say, I'm so pumped to see the romance! Happily ever after, yes? :D
-Redpinkandwhite
13redpinkandwhiteSo, what do I call you now? Do you have a nickname? Would it be tacky for me to still call you Loki's Little Helper?
I'm sorry. I don't mean to grill you, but I do want to know what it good to call you. :)
Ah... There's only two things I have to say. One: HAPPY UPDATING! It's like my birthday or Christmas all over again! I got an awesome present that just made me happy to read! It was awesome! Two: I cannot WAIT for the ending. The romance will all be tied together in the end... It's going to be one of the best things I have ever read, I promise you! I can't wait for it to come!
Critique:
You know, I should really stop putting that. I can't say much on your writing anymore...
Though, I have to say, I love the allusion you stuck into the story. When you mentioned Iduna, I couldn't help but squeal just a little bit. That's one of those things that I'm learning to use in my English course, and I'm so happy to see you using it as well! It only adds more depth and character to the story, so you are doing very good, my friend!
Everything else is about as pristine as ever. It's just... yes! Awesome!
I just have to say, I'm so pumped to see the romance! Happily ever after, yes? :D
-Redpinkandwhite
12/9/2011 c21 On.my.tippy-toes
another awesome chapter! (yes! Ande gets some motherly love :D ) I love how descriptive you are, and how you put so much work into the characters' personalities. The sudden thought loki has about becoming as emotionless as the gatekeeper tells us a lot about him! ugh I dont want it to end... But hey, its been great! :) It would be interesting to know what Loki is gonna do with those to years, I cant wait for the epilogue! _ I do have a question though: I've noticed you are very well informed, have you read the comics or just seen the movies? If you have only seen the movies, how do you know so much about it? Have you researched about norse mythology? ...sorry that was more than one question, I hope I'm not being a bother xD Anyway, I'm looking forward to the epilogue, great chapter!
another awesome chapter! (yes! Ande gets some motherly love :D ) I love how descriptive you are, and how you put so much work into the characters' personalities. The sudden thought loki has about becoming as emotionless as the gatekeeper tells us a lot about him! ugh I dont want it to end... But hey, its been great! :) It would be interesting to know what Loki is gonna do with those to years, I cant wait for the epilogue! _ I do have a question though: I've noticed you are very well informed, have you read the comics or just seen the movies? If you have only seen the movies, how do you know so much about it? Have you researched about norse mythology? ...sorry that was more than one question, I hope I'm not being a bother xD Anyway, I'm looking forward to the epilogue, great chapter!
12/8/2011 c21 Anonymous Loki Fangirl
YESSSSS!
NOOOOOOO!
Yes an update!
NO, THE END!
I love this story.
YESSSSS!
NOOOOOOO!
Yes an update!
NO, THE END!
I love this story.
12/8/2011 c21 12Chaos Of A Butterfly
Noooo! It can't end! Will there be another sequel, cause that would be awesome!
12Chaos Of A ButterflyNoooo! It can't end! Will there be another sequel, cause that would be awesome!
12/7/2011 c21 24Ikuni Hattori
What can I say? I loved the interaction between Ande and Athena (love the face that Ande's sandals got an upgrade :D ) and I like the penname change. I completely understand, because I changed mine about a year and a half ago because my old name didn't reflect my current life.
And was that clicking noise a camera, maybe? :3
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
24Ikuni HattoriWhat can I say? I loved the interaction between Ande and Athena (love the face that Ande's sandals got an upgrade :D ) and I like the penname change. I completely understand, because I changed mine about a year and a half ago because my old name didn't reflect my current life.
And was that clicking noise a camera, maybe? :3
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
12/2/2011 c20 On.my.tippy-toes
:) I could't sign in so I couldn't review your stories until now. I read both grounded and this story, and LOVED them! You really captured Thor and Loki's personality, and I really liked Ande. Plus, its a relief to find a good story that involves romance with Loki, you really pulled that off! They make a very good couple, and you made it so believable to :D Before reading these stories, I was thinking of writing a fanfic for the avengers, also involving an oc, that would befriend Loki. I wasn't sure wether to write it or not, but you inspired me, so its very probable that i will :] (Im not sure if it would be as good as this one though ^^")
and please continue Loki/Ande! You can make a pretty good ending here, but if you want to make a sequel, be sure i will read it :D
:) I could't sign in so I couldn't review your stories until now. I read both grounded and this story, and LOVED them! You really captured Thor and Loki's personality, and I really liked Ande. Plus, its a relief to find a good story that involves romance with Loki, you really pulled that off! They make a very good couple, and you made it so believable to :D Before reading these stories, I was thinking of writing a fanfic for the avengers, also involving an oc, that would befriend Loki. I wasn't sure wether to write it or not, but you inspired me, so its very probable that i will :] (Im not sure if it would be as good as this one though ^^")
and please continue Loki/Ande! You can make a pretty good ending here, but if you want to make a sequel, be sure i will read it :D
11/13/2011 c7 6Let's Start Rumors
Hey!
OHMIGOODNESS! I'm so sorry i'ts been so long since I read/reviewed! (this is for chapter 7 btw) I havent finished reading through what you have but OHMIGOODNESS i'm so excited :) You're an amazing author. True Genius. I just love how you're working all of these villains and heroes in. Cutos (in probably spelled that wrong) Srs Beans man. I know that for some people when they try to put so much in the story it turns out ...not so good, but this? WONDERFUL :D You're so grand and dont let anyone tell you other wise!
Oh, and I'm just making sense of this...Is Ande in the Avengers before Tony? THAT IS SO G!
Your The best!
-Let's Start Rumors
6Let's Start RumorsHey!
OHMIGOODNESS! I'm so sorry i'ts been so long since I read/reviewed! (this is for chapter 7 btw) I havent finished reading through what you have but OHMIGOODNESS i'm so excited :) You're an amazing author. True Genius. I just love how you're working all of these villains and heroes in. Cutos (in probably spelled that wrong) Srs Beans man. I know that for some people when they try to put so much in the story it turns out ...not so good, but this? WONDERFUL :D You're so grand and dont let anyone tell you other wise!
Oh, and I'm just making sense of this...Is Ande in the Avengers before Tony? THAT IS SO G!
Your The best!
-Let's Start Rumors
11/7/2011 c20 13redpinkandwhite
...
(Fangirl moment begin)
*SQUEEEE!* Kiss! Kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss...! *dies*
(Fangirl moment over)
Ahem. That was amazing! I'm so glad that they finally kissed. It took you long enough! XD And, Loki is going on trial! What is going to happen? Will he join the Avengers? Will he and Ande finally get married and end my misery?
Will there be a sequel for the family of Loki and Ande's family and Thor and Jane's? ;)
They kissed! *rolls around on the floor* I'm really pumped about this. You just made my day. Thank you for FINALLY letting this happen. :)
Before I have a fangirl attack, I need to critique...
Well, I feel like a lot has been accomplished. Good lord! You have improved so much. I can't even begin to describe. Your work is very good now. The next levels are only adding more voice to your characters, and the hard stuff. I have nothing more to say on characters, thoughts, sentence variance, sentence structure; You are just AWESOME at that. On description, you are doing stupendous. *clap*
Unfortunately, I don't think we are going to have enough tine to work on voice or the hard stuff on this story (though I would just wonder what would happen if you loaded it with symbolism, foreshadowing, and personification...) However, it stands alone all by itself. It is really coming along well!
Oh, and, one more thing.
"I bit my bottom lip and directed my gaze to the table, feeling a blush creep up my cheeks. I had been mentally berating myself for the past hour. Why had I kissed him? He probably thinks I'm some psychopath now." Though the thought is so short and precise, it fits so well. I can't even describe how it fits so well, but it just clicks. VERY good job on these sentences!
I think that's everything I have...
Thank you for the kiss! I seriously owe you one for that. It was so amazing!
Oh, and I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
-RP&W
13redpinkandwhite...
(Fangirl moment begin)
*SQUEEEE!* Kiss! Kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss...! *dies*
(Fangirl moment over)
Ahem. That was amazing! I'm so glad that they finally kissed. It took you long enough! XD And, Loki is going on trial! What is going to happen? Will he join the Avengers? Will he and Ande finally get married and end my misery?
Will there be a sequel for the family of Loki and Ande's family and Thor and Jane's? ;)
They kissed! *rolls around on the floor* I'm really pumped about this. You just made my day. Thank you for FINALLY letting this happen. :)
Before I have a fangirl attack, I need to critique...
Well, I feel like a lot has been accomplished. Good lord! You have improved so much. I can't even begin to describe. Your work is very good now. The next levels are only adding more voice to your characters, and the hard stuff. I have nothing more to say on characters, thoughts, sentence variance, sentence structure; You are just AWESOME at that. On description, you are doing stupendous. *clap*
Unfortunately, I don't think we are going to have enough tine to work on voice or the hard stuff on this story (though I would just wonder what would happen if you loaded it with symbolism, foreshadowing, and personification...) However, it stands alone all by itself. It is really coming along well!
Oh, and, one more thing.
"I bit my bottom lip and directed my gaze to the table, feeling a blush creep up my cheeks. I had been mentally berating myself for the past hour. Why had I kissed him? He probably thinks I'm some psychopath now." Though the thought is so short and precise, it fits so well. I can't even describe how it fits so well, but it just clicks. VERY good job on these sentences!
I think that's everything I have...
Thank you for the kiss! I seriously owe you one for that. It was so amazing!
Oh, and I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
-RP&W
11/5/2011 c20 4G.U.3.S.S
Okay. Now we're gettin' to the end of the line. You have no idea just how anxious I've been to finally see Ande's confrontation with Athena. I mean c'mon, she was given a dead line for Pete's sake and we have absolutely no idea as to what that entails. And to answer your question: obviously I would definitely appreciate a sequel. After such a long, arduous ride I NEED to see it come to fruition. And maybe...Loki's introduction to her mother and "extended family." Yeah, that'd be awesome.
So anyway, thanks for the update and junk. Until next time!
4G.U.3.S.SOkay. Now we're gettin' to the end of the line. You have no idea just how anxious I've been to finally see Ande's confrontation with Athena. I mean c'mon, she was given a dead line for Pete's sake and we have absolutely no idea as to what that entails. And to answer your question: obviously I would definitely appreciate a sequel. After such a long, arduous ride I NEED to see it come to fruition. And maybe...Loki's introduction to her mother and "extended family." Yeah, that'd be awesome.
So anyway, thanks for the update and junk. Until next time!
11/5/2011 c20 8hannahthewordsmith
As much as I love your writing, I believe that it is perfectly fine to just end the story here. I can't think of any ideas or a reason to start another sequel. I have a firm belief that you would be able to create a beautiful ending to this verse in the epilogue.
But that's just me ^_^
8hannahthewordsmithAs much as I love your writing, I believe that it is perfectly fine to just end the story here. I can't think of any ideas or a reason to start another sequel. I have a firm belief that you would be able to create a beautiful ending to this verse in the epilogue.
But that's just me ^_^