for Him With His Bow and Them With Their Lives8/9/2011 c1 
36xxHeadInTheStarsxx
I loved this. Seriously, I do. What interested me the most was probably your writing style. It flowed really well, and made me enjoy the story even more. Good job :)
36xxHeadInTheStarsxxI loved this. Seriously, I do. What interested me the most was probably your writing style. It flowed really well, and made me enjoy the story even more. Good job :)
8/6/2011 c1 1alexie212
Wow, I really love this poem, a ton! I see it as a poem, that's my view.
You should recite this with a beat in the background, I happened to read this when one was playing and it sounded perfect.
I feel for Artemis, even though she doesn't know what love is, he ruins it to her by the way he shows it but she's the only one that's close enough to him even though she hates him at times.
Awesome poem, keep writing!
1alexie212Wow, I really love this poem, a ton! I see it as a poem, that's my view.
You should recite this with a beat in the background, I happened to read this when one was playing and it sounded perfect.
I feel for Artemis, even though she doesn't know what love is, he ruins it to her by the way he shows it but she's the only one that's close enough to him even though she hates him at times.
Awesome poem, keep writing!