for The Second Warrior4/4 c16 Guest
we are past the end of March, please update.
we are past the end of March, please update.
4/1 c16 Guest
Man are you gonna get Gregor to the unde rland because its been 16 chapters
Man are you gonna get Gregor to the unde rland because its been 16 chapters
3/10 c16 Guest
write faster, or no chocolate. lol cant wait for the next chapter good work!
write faster, or no chocolate. lol cant wait for the next chapter good work!
2/26 c16 Noname
What are flames and I will eat your roosted kitty on a knife... If you don't update quicker
What are flames and I will eat your roosted kitty on a knife... If you don't update quicker
2/26 c16 Jedi1
Well I am not suprised that she snuck along. This was a good chapter but I do hope they start to tie together soon. "Write faster, or not chocolate"
Well I am not suprised that she snuck along. This was a good chapter but I do hope they start to tie together soon. "Write faster, or not chocolate"
2/25 c1 
1Zachabobo
Good chapter, I'm too lazy. After all, it's 2 am and I'm not even supposed to be on da computer. (Whoops if anyone asks, I forgot.)
1ZachaboboGood chapter, I'm too lazy. After all, it's 2 am and I'm not even supposed to be on da computer. (Whoops if anyone asks, I forgot.)
2/23 c16 Guest
I've checked for an update every single day for, like... FOREVER! It's been a long time! Update update update update update update update update
I've checked for an update every single day for, like... FOREVER! It's been a long time! Update update update update update update update update
2/23 c16 UCFan
Write slower, and get chocolate. LOL, just kidding. Write faster, or no chocolate.
Write slower, and get chocolate. LOL, just kidding. Write faster, or no chocolate.
2/21 c11 Guest
ooh gregors in love... twice
ooh gregors in love... twice
2/21 c7 Guest
it was pretty cool
it was pretty cool
2/19 c16 Shanic
Please update and finish this story because i am sick of reading storys that are finished. If you read this Thank You.
P.S. make the chapters longer.
Please update and finish this story because i am sick of reading storys that are finished. If you read this Thank You.
P.S. make the chapters longer.
2/18 c16 c'estmoi
You truly are a master of torture to make us wait so long for an update, and now even longer for answers! That said, I absolutelylove this story; you are an amazing writer. Something i think you might like is the book The Trickster's Choice by Tamora Pierce... I don't know if you've heard of it but Niovi reminds me of the main character. You should look it up :) keep writing! I can't wait for more!
You truly are a master of torture to make us wait so long for an update, and now even longer for answers! That said, I absolutelylove this story; you are an amazing writer. Something i think you might like is the book The Trickster's Choice by Tamora Pierce... I don't know if you've heard of it but Niovi reminds me of the main character. You should look it up :) keep writing! I can't wait for more!
2/18 c9 7BookDevourer52
Why did you switch from Luxa and Gregor to these mystery people and who are they?
7BookDevourer52Why did you switch from Luxa and Gregor to these mystery people and who are they?
2/18 c16 1Zachabobo
Write faster, or no chocolate! Or pizza, or pancakes, or cookies, or milk, or hot dogs, or burgers, or sandwiches, or gummi bears, or sour candy worms, or bubble gum, or pasta, or coffee, or Coke/Pepsi or milkshakes, or ice cream, or candy hearts, or lollipops, or mentos, or toast, or roast kitten on a knife, or reviews!
1ZachaboboWrite faster, or no chocolate! Or pizza, or pancakes, or cookies, or milk, or hot dogs, or burgers, or sandwiches, or gummi bears, or sour candy worms, or bubble gum, or pasta, or coffee, or Coke/Pepsi or milkshakes, or ice cream, or candy hearts, or lollipops, or mentos, or toast, or roast kitten on a knife, or reviews!