for Of Saviors and Soulmates1/30 c1 
1dead feather
This was pretty good. But the story ju,ped around and hinted at things tat shouldnt be left unexplained. Logic was also missing at points.
Like how did the insults escalate with draco? If they did, why did harry walk away so calmly with him? Why didnt harry show any animosity towards draco? At the end they seem friendly, when did this happen?
And what was the deal with ron? He isnt mentioned in the story by name before this sudden appearance at the foot of the stairs. And what about dumbledore, the second major antagonist here.
1dead featherThis was pretty good. But the story ju,ped around and hinted at things tat shouldnt be left unexplained. Logic was also missing at points.
Like how did the insults escalate with draco? If they did, why did harry walk away so calmly with him? Why didnt harry show any animosity towards draco? At the end they seem friendly, when did this happen?
And what was the deal with ron? He isnt mentioned in the story by name before this sudden appearance at the foot of the stairs. And what about dumbledore, the second major antagonist here.
10/24/2012 c1 lulu
i love this story, but just to let you know it's spelled congratulations, not congradulations. other then that this is a fantastic story. your a great writer.
i love this story, but just to let you know it's spelled congratulations, not congradulations. other then that this is a fantastic story. your a great writer.
3/19/2012 c1 domsijohn
this was a good story i really liked it i was hope luc destroyed the dursleys and albus
this was a good story i really liked it i was hope luc destroyed the dursleys and albus
8/6/2011 c1 bgcasper
Nice story. Seemed a little rushed at the end but it had a good plot and was well written. Keep up the good work.
Nice story. Seemed a little rushed at the end but it had a good plot and was well written. Keep up the good work.