for Broken Heart6/19/2004 c1
34Marmalade Fever
It was a good story, but I'm not sure that I feel that Rika and her Mom actually acted as if they had been through something like that on the show. Wasn't her Mom kind of perky? I'm trying to remember what had happened to her dad. I know they explain it in one of the movies, or at least mention him, but of course those haven't been released to the U.S. Oh well. Good writing.
34Marmalade FeverIt was a good story, but I'm not sure that I feel that Rika and her Mom actually acted as if they had been through something like that on the show. Wasn't her Mom kind of perky? I'm trying to remember what had happened to her dad. I know they explain it in one of the movies, or at least mention him, but of course those haven't been released to the U.S. Oh well. Good writing.
4/19/2002 c1 PanDora
That's a good fic. I really like it.
That's a good fic. I really like it.
4/18/2002 c1
190DigiExpert
hmmm. interesting view of Rika's past. she was portrayed excellently. I have one suggestion though. It would be much easier to read if it were separated into paragraphs. Good fic anyways.
P.S. I have my own fic about Rika's past. It's called Someday. Could you please read it. I'd appreciate some more reviews!
190DigiExperthmmm. interesting view of Rika's past. she was portrayed excellently. I have one suggestion though. It would be much easier to read if it were separated into paragraphs. Good fic anyways.
P.S. I have my own fic about Rika's past. It's called Someday. Could you please read it. I'd appreciate some more reviews!
