for Right Back Atcha4/6 c1 annieathome1
Quite coincidental that! loved the line: my world burst into frightening technicolor with a side order of white noise! it was sweet how Decan knew about his da and Steven, kind of gave his blessing and chided him - how could anyone not know!
Quite coincidental that! loved the line: my world burst into frightening technicolor with a side order of white noise! it was sweet how Decan knew about his da and Steven, kind of gave his blessing and chided him - how could anyone not know!
8/5/2012 c1 
6grieving-pln
Hi there, Toast.
I thought I'd pop in and check out your decor as well. ;)
Although I'm not familiar with this particular television show, I have to say, I absolutely LOVE your writing style. It's crisp and clean and clear and direct; you paint a vivid picture with very few words. Something I very much admire and strive to do myself.
I feel right there in that kitchen with these two gentlemen. I can smell the coffee, less so the herbal tea, being more of a coffee drinker myself. ;) Your writing is so descriptive and evocative, you make me want to look up an episode of this show just so I can see the two characters I just read about. That's some pretty powerful writing in a mere 300 words.
It's a privilege to have met you on this site. I look forward to reading more of your work. :)
A
6grieving-plnHi there, Toast.
I thought I'd pop in and check out your decor as well. ;)
Although I'm not familiar with this particular television show, I have to say, I absolutely LOVE your writing style. It's crisp and clean and clear and direct; you paint a vivid picture with very few words. Something I very much admire and strive to do myself.
I feel right there in that kitchen with these two gentlemen. I can smell the coffee, less so the herbal tea, being more of a coffee drinker myself. ;) Your writing is so descriptive and evocative, you make me want to look up an episode of this show just so I can see the two characters I just read about. That's some pretty powerful writing in a mere 300 words.
It's a privilege to have met you on this site. I look forward to reading more of your work. :)
A
8/10/2011 c1 23WriterOnAMission
hahaha "I know he's your friieend," xD
Classic
This was really great, brilliant brilliant BRILLIANT
Maybe you could write a sequel with how Brendan reacts further? Just thought, stands well as it is though :D
write more of something anyway love your writing
x
23WriterOnAMissionhahaha "I know he's your friieend," xD
Classic
This was really great, brilliant brilliant BRILLIANT
Maybe you could write a sequel with how Brendan reacts further? Just thought, stands well as it is though :D
write more of something anyway love your writing
x
8/10/2011 c1 2HollyoaksBitchh
i like it, its quite short but still seems gr8. very well written and good luck to any future fics :) x
2HollyoaksBitchhi like it, its quite short but still seems gr8. very well written and good luck to any future fics :) x
8/10/2011 c1 17GirlWednesday
Omg I can just sense the awkwardness between the two its a great story that is also quite funny
17GirlWednesdayOmg I can just sense the awkwardness between the two its a great story that is also quite funny