for So You Think You Can Play Me?8/7/2012 c13 LoudNProud
plz update ASAP, thanks! I'm loving the story!
plz update ASAP, thanks! I'm loving the story!
8/6/2012 c13 iLoOoVeOrAnGe
Aww cmon Fang...give Max a chance!
I totally understand if you can't upload soon. I don't really wanna go into it but yeah I undrstand..
Update soon! :)
Aww cmon Fang...give Max a chance!
I totally understand if you can't upload soon. I don't really wanna go into it but yeah I undrstand..
Update soon! :)
8/6/2012 c13 
3Serenaisbestezrq387
I feel bad for fang. It must suck not being able to buy your sister stuff when she wants it.
but if you do put it on hold, I shall be sad but I won't kill you or anything.
3Serenaisbestezrq387I feel bad for fang. It must suck not being able to buy your sister stuff when she wants it.
but if you do put it on hold, I shall be sad but I won't kill you or anything.
7/16/2012 c12 3Serenaisbestezrq387
I love in Texas! I you pm me we can talk and see if we might go to the same school! No intention of being a creeper!
3Serenaisbestezrq387I love in Texas! I you pm me we can talk and see if we might go to the same school! No intention of being a creeper!
7/15/2012 c11 Ann
Soooooo adorable kids!
Soooooo adorable kids!
6/27/2012 c11 1xXxAronoelExXx
Hiya! :) Have I reviewed to this before? I have no idea. But I've been following it for sometime I assure you! :D
All in all I completely L. O. V. E. it so far!
Hm.. Well other than what I said above I don't have anything to say! I'm here to read the story not exactly criticize it!
Update soon! Please.. *bambi eyes*
FlyOn,
-Jess ;)
1xXxAronoelExXxHiya! :) Have I reviewed to this before? I have no idea. But I've been following it for sometime I assure you! :D
All in all I completely L. O. V. E. it so far!
Hm.. Well other than what I said above I don't have anything to say! I'm here to read the story not exactly criticize it!
Update soon! Please.. *bambi eyes*
FlyOn,
-Jess ;)
6/23/2012 c11 3Serenaisbestezrq387
That's so sad! Fang! Come back! But it is sad that fang overreacted because he can't pay.
3Serenaisbestezrq387That's so sad! Fang! Come back! But it is sad that fang overreacted because he can't pay.
6/10/2012 c10 6torchwoodmoreliketorture
I dunno if I've mentioned this, but... I am an Olympian, so, I count as, I think, five reviews... So I would LOVE another chapter. XD
6torchwoodmoreliketortureI dunno if I've mentioned this, but... I am an Olympian, so, I count as, I think, five reviews... So I would LOVE another chapter. XD
6/9/2012 c10 Anon13
Interesting... Nice cliff.
Interesting... Nice cliff.
6/9/2012 c2 Anon13
Jsyk, it's 'bawling,' not 'balling.'
Jsyk, it's 'bawling,' not 'balling.'
6/9/2012 c10 5blindedbylife
This is a great story. I read your author notes about bad grammar and I think it would help if you re-read the chapter before you published it so you are able to correct any spelling errors or incomplete words. Also you should try to add commas where they are needed because I noticed a few run-on sentences. Keep up the great work and update soon.
-blindedbylife
5blindedbylifeThis is a great story. I read your author notes about bad grammar and I think it would help if you re-read the chapter before you published it so you are able to correct any spelling errors or incomplete words. Also you should try to add commas where they are needed because I noticed a few run-on sentences. Keep up the great work and update soon.
-blindedbylife