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1/11 c3 4darkangelwitch
somebody realy needed to slap that **
9/26/2012 c3 TheButterflyCurse996
This Marc-Cindy. This CINDY girl is creepy obsessive. *Sighs* If only she knew...

Awesome story, keep it up!
8/27/2012 c3 5Lyzzybelle
I wonder if Cindy has a twin named Becky? lol great ending.
8/12/2012 c3 KillerButterfly1
Cindy annoys the crap out of me. Great writing and story line.
6/6/2012 c3 20AlElizabeth
Wow. What a stupid **. Good story. I really liked it. I liked how it kinda gave an outsider's point of view of Sam. Poor guy though, having people think there's something wrong with him. Kinda left it at a cliffhanger, eh? Maybe enough for a sequel? If not that's okay too. I still enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
4/6/2012 c3 25Von
That girl is crazy. The kind of crazy that results in murder. :S

Hardly needs to be said, I guess. :D

"Sammy needs a car like the Impala. She knows him. I can trust him with her: my baby would never let my brother get hurt. Or even let him get backache from having to fold himself into a space too small for him."

This was the most adorable thing I've read all year.
2/23/2012 c3 Amalgamoose
...Cindy's little obsession was taken to such ridiculous extremes it made the chapter slightly unreadable. I mean, /Becky/ is more able to acknowledge reality than this. Somewhere between the blindfold and the gun, anyone with even a touch of sanity would have recategorized him as a completely crazy person...

In fact, I think /hallucinating Sam/ would have ticked the 'crazy Dean' box around the time he showed up with yesterday's blonde chick to force her to apologize for being nasty.

Nice fic otherwise, though. Poor Sam.
11/28/2011 c3 96PutMoneyInThyPurse
"You made Sammy think he was weak. You have no idea what my brother's been through. The things they did to him – and I'm all he's got. Do you understand that? When it gets really bad, I'm the only one he'll talk to. And you made him think he couldn't ask for my help."

Oh... Oh, my... I just...

Your work is so good, so wonderfully put together, that I can't find words to say how wonderful it is. I just... You...

*headshake*
9/30/2011 c3 amberwaves49
That Marcia is one crazy lady... loved to fic! :) Do I smell a sequel?
9/13/2011 c3 7godsdaughter77
Great story! ;) I love seeing Dean take care of Sam. As always, I love the asides you add (especially all the brother radar stuff). Thanks for sharing!
9/13/2011 c3 TinTin11
Wow, that is one messed up chick! Loved Dean's reaction to the whole thing! So Dean! Great job with this story! Makes me sooo excited for season 7! Which is getting so close now! :D
9/7/2011 c3 26CeCe Away
Whoa, Cindy/Marsha is way delusional. Nice story and I love how even half out of his head, Sam is ba enough to take on a black dog with a penknife.
9/7/2011 c3 dulcinea54
Great! Thanks for sharing!
9/6/2011 c3 5Cornish Rhapsody
Awww - this was totally adorable. It was typical Sam wanting to give Dean some alone time and feeling guilty for being so needy. And loved how caring and awesome Dean was. It was also really cleverly written and swapping perspectives was great and allowed you to really get inside the characters' heads. Thanks for sharing!
9/5/2011 c3 casammy
It is a **, dean have should to have made suffer more as well as she I upset and it hurt our sweet sammy
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