for Illusion8/20/2011 c2 
22Scribble2Much
I enjoyed this story. I love how you gave the boys’ POV. You really gave them very unique voices and they were both hilarious in completely different ways.
My absolute favourite moment:
“Sam had that look on his face – the look he had when he took down a dragon with half a sword.
It's his, "You tried to take my big brother away," look.”
Great job ... as usual.
22Scribble2MuchI enjoyed this story. I love how you gave the boys’ POV. You really gave them very unique voices and they were both hilarious in completely different ways.
My absolute favourite moment:
“Sam had that look on his face – the look he had when he took down a dragon with half a sword.
It's his, "You tried to take my big brother away," look.”
Great job ... as usual.
8/19/2011 c2 casammy
Advance of season 7! It is hard for sammy who confuses the reality with everything bad that I spend in the hell but to overcome all that this dean, who with taste returns makes his work to 100 %, take care of sammy and I like that dean is even more overprotective than before
Advance of season 7! It is hard for sammy who confuses the reality with everything bad that I spend in the hell but to overcome all that this dean, who with taste returns makes his work to 100 %, take care of sammy and I like that dean is even more overprotective than before
8/18/2011 c2 cookjar
Awesome job girlfriend. I just loved Dean's point of view in this. You just keep getting better and better with these stories. On a roll so keep it going. And on a side note, so in the mood for some amulet fix it. Bring it on. :)
Awesome job girlfriend. I just loved Dean's point of view in this. You just keep getting better and better with these stories. On a roll so keep it going. And on a side note, so in the mood for some amulet fix it. Bring it on. :)
8/18/2011 c2 35Sauterelle
It's great to write this second chapter in Dean's POV. It was really nice to read.
35SauterelleIt's great to write this second chapter in Dean's POV. It was really nice to read.
8/17/2011 c2 3SandyDee84
So, I am pouting a little that Dean didn't set Cindy straight (next chapter, Yay!), but loved how Dean knew exactly how to help his little brother. And kudos to Elizabeth for not being a clueless, annoying, orange Mary Sue about the whole situation.
3SandyDee84So, I am pouting a little that Dean didn't set Cindy straight (next chapter, Yay!), but loved how Dean knew exactly how to help his little brother. And kudos to Elizabeth for not being a clueless, annoying, orange Mary Sue about the whole situation.
8/17/2011 c2 BranchSuper
Sam may be having some problems, but when Dean's threatened he's as good at protecting him as he ever was. Good chapter.
Sam may be having some problems, but when Dean's threatened he's as good at protecting him as he ever was. Good chapter.
8/17/2011 c2 twomoms
Loved this first two chapters and I'm so glad we're getting an epilogue! You had both boys voices down in each POV which was so appreciated. Thanks so much for this.
Loved this first two chapters and I'm so glad we're getting an epilogue! You had both boys voices down in each POV which was so appreciated. Thanks so much for this.
8/17/2011 c2 SPN Mum
Poor Sam. Even when he's out of it, he's awesome and doesn't even realize it. Elizabeth was great! Too bad Sam's not at a place where he can appreciate just how great she is. Maybe some day. Dean is doing an awesome job, being there for Sam. He handles him pretty good most of the time. It was good that they had this experience though, because now Dean can pont out that just because something's real, doesn't make it true, cause I'm sure he will hear things like Cindy said again. Dean needs to be sure that Sam understands that really clear. Looking forward to the epilogue!
The upcoming stuff sounds wonderful. I can't wait to read those too. I love your stuff! :D
Poor Sam. Even when he's out of it, he's awesome and doesn't even realize it. Elizabeth was great! Too bad Sam's not at a place where he can appreciate just how great she is. Maybe some day. Dean is doing an awesome job, being there for Sam. He handles him pretty good most of the time. It was good that they had this experience though, because now Dean can pont out that just because something's real, doesn't make it true, cause I'm sure he will hear things like Cindy said again. Dean needs to be sure that Sam understands that really clear. Looking forward to the epilogue!
The upcoming stuff sounds wonderful. I can't wait to read those too. I love your stuff! :D
8/17/2011 c2 2MysteryMadchen
Ok so a GREAT CHAPTER. I'm not usually a first person story reader but you sure know how to make them a pleasure to read. I loved Dean's snarkey inner mono-logs they were the best and made me laugh, thanks for the great update, can't wait for the epi, Nicole. :)
2MysteryMadchenOk so a GREAT CHAPTER. I'm not usually a first person story reader but you sure know how to make them a pleasure to read. I loved Dean's snarkey inner mono-logs they were the best and made me laugh, thanks for the great update, can't wait for the epi, Nicole. :)
8/17/2011 c2 34crazybeagle
I like this girl very much. Congratulations for coming up with a decent and believable OC in a Supernatural fic- I tend to shy away from it because I'm afraid I'll do it wrong.
Anyway- excellent equal parts badass and damanged Sam here. And my heart broke a little when Dean was telling Elizabeth that Sam had been a marine and a prisoner of war when it was so infinitely worse than that and nobody can ever know. :(
Can't wait for more.
34crazybeagleI like this girl very much. Congratulations for coming up with a decent and believable OC in a Supernatural fic- I tend to shy away from it because I'm afraid I'll do it wrong.
Anyway- excellent equal parts badass and damanged Sam here. And my heart broke a little when Dean was telling Elizabeth that Sam had been a marine and a prisoner of war when it was so infinitely worse than that and nobody can ever know. :(
Can't wait for more.
8/17/2011 c2 23Eavis
YES, Dean, Sammy is awesome. And so are you, for being only the most awesome big brother in the world. There's a reason he trusts you, man.
Can I just say that the first couple paragraphs were pretty much the best ever? I love Dean's (sadly, mostly true) take over, saying that Sammy'd "just go all emo and list all the fifty-three stupid reasons he has for why his existence is a curse to me" and then his complete dissing of Sam's way of coping with what Cindy said. Of course, in his defense, he wasn't completely lucid at the moment. (Just remember that, huh Dean?)
So I am looking forward to the epilogue very muchly indeed.
God be with thee,
Eavis
23EavisYES, Dean, Sammy is awesome. And so are you, for being only the most awesome big brother in the world. There's a reason he trusts you, man.
Can I just say that the first couple paragraphs were pretty much the best ever? I love Dean's (sadly, mostly true) take over, saying that Sammy'd "just go all emo and list all the fifty-three stupid reasons he has for why his existence is a curse to me" and then his complete dissing of Sam's way of coping with what Cindy said. Of course, in his defense, he wasn't completely lucid at the moment. (Just remember that, huh Dean?)
So I am looking forward to the epilogue very muchly indeed.
God be with thee,
Eavis
8/17/2011 c2 61criminally charmed
Awesome.
I tell ya, Kripke had better not drop the ball on this one or I know a few viewers who will happily go after another set of...
Well - you get it.
61criminally charmedAwesome.
I tell ya, Kripke had better not drop the ball on this one or I know a few viewers who will happily go after another set of...
Well - you get it.