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UPDATE!
UPDATE!
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2rosepetal21
Were are you? You last updated over a year ago. I want to read more of the story :) It really good :)
2rosepetal21Were are you? You last updated over a year ago. I want to read more of the story :) It really good :)
2/20/2012 c4 14nequam-tenshi
A wonderful story! Will you update soon?
Is Dani going to fight or will he stay on the sidelines?
14nequam-tenshiA wonderful story! Will you update soon?
Is Dani going to fight or will he stay on the sidelines?
1/10/2012 c4 4ChristinCC
This is such a cute story though you may want to check your writing before you post it. Update soon please!-CC
4ChristinCCThis is such a cute story though you may want to check your writing before you post it. Update soon please!-CC
12/30/2011 c4 Jess
Good story will you continue you it ? Please
Good story will you continue you it ? Please
12/2/2011 c4 2Zii Raevyn
Have Danny help with ravens' emotion control make it a twist so that Dan left an 'echo' (basically a very week form of duplication needing a host to stay grounded to our plain of reality or it's almost like overshadowing without the body posession) that merged with his Darker emotions, Dark Dan Phantom is the equivalent of Trigon(Rage) in Danny's mind
Also his emotions are directly linked to his powers (example: when danny got weather control powers and everytime he was upset he'd cause a storm.
Control (at least some more than she has now)
2Zii RaevynHave Danny help with ravens' emotion control make it a twist so that Dan left an 'echo' (basically a very week form of duplication needing a host to stay grounded to our plain of reality or it's almost like overshadowing without the body posession) that merged with his Darker emotions, Dark Dan Phantom is the equivalent of Trigon(Rage) in Danny's mind
Also his emotions are directly linked to his powers (example: when danny got weather control powers and everytime he was upset he'd cause a storm.
Control (at least some more than she has now)
11/23/2011 c3 None
Dude, I can't read this. You need to space it out!
Dude, I can't read this. You need to space it out!
11/23/2011 c3 daragon10
Aw. Gotta love danny and dani bonding, whether it's as siblings or as father daughter. Update again soon please.
Aw. Gotta love danny and dani bonding, whether it's as siblings or as father daughter. Update again soon please.
8/29/2011 c1 hypersreak
I like it and can't wait for the next chapter:) But did both groups get sucked into the portal or just one group? Please update soon..
I like it and can't wait for the next chapter:) But did both groups get sucked into the portal or just one group? Please update soon..
8/16/2011 c1 iamnuff
spellcheck your title
there can be nothing worse than a fic with a misspelt title, it says that you dont care about your story at all,
also, your discription is full of typos too,
spellcheck your title
there can be nothing worse than a fic with a misspelt title, it says that you dont care about your story at all,
also, your discription is full of typos too,