for Summon Bloodline5/2/2012 c10 Jostanos
YOU PASS!
FLAWLESS VICTORY!
Guys.. Please... Continue Summon Bloodline!
I, Jostanos, may be reached on Gaia (Jostanos), Facebook (pm Jostanos , my RL name is my SN there), Live Journal (bubbac2). Deviant Art (Jostanos is only part of my SN there), and Youtube (Jostanos).
If you would like some help with story ideas or if you would like to role play scenes I am available.
I have experience not only as a reader/reviewer, but also as a beta and as an inspirational person for those that require help with their respective fan fictions.
I have enjoyed reading every chapter up to this point and would like to read more chapters when they become available.
Thank you for writing Summon Bloodline, guys. ^_^
YOU PASS!
FLAWLESS VICTORY!
Guys.. Please... Continue Summon Bloodline!
I, Jostanos, may be reached on Gaia (Jostanos), Facebook (pm Jostanos , my RL name is my SN there), Live Journal (bubbac2). Deviant Art (Jostanos is only part of my SN there), and Youtube (Jostanos).
If you would like some help with story ideas or if you would like to role play scenes I am available.
I have experience not only as a reader/reviewer, but also as a beta and as an inspirational person for those that require help with their respective fan fictions.
I have enjoyed reading every chapter up to this point and would like to read more chapters when they become available.
Thank you for writing Summon Bloodline, guys. ^_^
11/14/2011 c9 Jostanos
YOU PASS!
However due to some vocabulary errors your victory isn't flawless. :)
*shrugs* Oh well.. At least you still wrote an excellent chapter, Aorta Heartless, and I enjoyed reading every bit of it. ^_^
Here's an Omake based on the Youtube video "Real Ninjas":
*Our favorite orange clad ninja walks in and creates a couple Kage Bushin who now look like both Kabuto and Oruchimaru. The Oruchimaru Clone leans against an imaginary wall while Clone Kabuto stands there waiting for his cue*
Naruto: *coughs* Real Ninjas... Real Ninjas are Intelligent.
Kabuto: *bows his head with a smile, pushes up his glasses* Yodel eh Dee Eee
Oruchimaru: *BURP*
*The trio Bows and leaves the scene*
^_^ I love that vid. It's funny. :)
I wonder what new Jutsus and Summons Naruto and his team may learn.
And what of the impending invasion by Suna and Oto?
hmm.. Things may not go as Oruchimaru (and Danzo?) Planned.
YOU PASS!
However due to some vocabulary errors your victory isn't flawless. :)
*shrugs* Oh well.. At least you still wrote an excellent chapter, Aorta Heartless, and I enjoyed reading every bit of it. ^_^
Here's an Omake based on the Youtube video "Real Ninjas":
*Our favorite orange clad ninja walks in and creates a couple Kage Bushin who now look like both Kabuto and Oruchimaru. The Oruchimaru Clone leans against an imaginary wall while Clone Kabuto stands there waiting for his cue*
Naruto: *coughs* Real Ninjas... Real Ninjas are Intelligent.
Kabuto: *bows his head with a smile, pushes up his glasses* Yodel eh Dee Eee
Oruchimaru: *BURP*
*The trio Bows and leaves the scene*
^_^ I love that vid. It's funny. :)
I wonder what new Jutsus and Summons Naruto and his team may learn.
And what of the impending invasion by Suna and Oto?
hmm.. Things may not go as Oruchimaru (and Danzo?) Planned.
10/31/2011 c9 
1Wal Otter
Nice chapter. Ideas for plot, use if you want. Kakashi decendant of edge, because of looks silvergray hair thats defies gravity and facemask. aslo is there any possibility for you to use other abilities (class or jobs as said in final fantasy) like black mage, geomancer, dancer, singer/bard and etc. Naruto is an summoner. Sakura is an ?, Sasuke is an ? you catch my drift?
Keep up good work.
1Wal OtterNice chapter. Ideas for plot, use if you want. Kakashi decendant of edge, because of looks silvergray hair thats defies gravity and facemask. aslo is there any possibility for you to use other abilities (class or jobs as said in final fantasy) like black mage, geomancer, dancer, singer/bard and etc. Naruto is an summoner. Sakura is an ?, Sasuke is an ? you catch my drift?
Keep up good work.
10/29/2011 c9 3Adele365
Fun fic! I enjoyed this one, though not as much as I did Through the Looking Glass(that one would be really hard to beat, IMHO.)... Still good enough that i look forward to more! On another note, this makes four or five of your stories on my favorites list, so welcome to my favorite authors list! Yay! Have fun with NaNoWriMo!
3Adele365Fun fic! I enjoyed this one, though not as much as I did Through the Looking Glass(that one would be really hard to beat, IMHO.)... Still good enough that i look forward to more! On another note, this makes four or five of your stories on my favorites list, so welcome to my favorite authors list! Yay! Have fun with NaNoWriMo!
10/21/2011 c9 37brown phantom
Not sure what to say other than it's nice that the genin are progressing and seeing Anko humble Sasuke a bit.
37brown phantomNot sure what to say other than it's nice that the genin are progressing and seeing Anko humble Sasuke a bit.
10/21/2011 c9 Beygon
uhm... i don't knowe if you have noticed this, but you have updated with the wrong chapter. this is 'summoning bloodline', not 'through the looking glass
uhm... i don't knowe if you have noticed this, but you have updated with the wrong chapter. this is 'summoning bloodline', not 'through the looking glass
9/21/2011 c8 1Wal Otter
Wait, what? "My fangirl"? didnt expect that. oh you forgot to mention from orochimaru's description: looks little boys as if they're piece of meat. Drama was good i liked part when sasuke got bitch slapped by naruto, i also liked that they start to bond as a team.
1Wal OtterWait, what? "My fangirl"? didnt expect that. oh you forgot to mention from orochimaru's description: looks little boys as if they're piece of meat. Drama was good i liked part when sasuke got bitch slapped by naruto, i also liked that they start to bond as a team.
9/19/2011 c8 37brown phantom
I'm not sure what's weirder, the fact that Sasuke seemed concerned for Sakura, or the lack of preliminaries.
37brown phantomI'm not sure what's weirder, the fact that Sasuke seemed concerned for Sakura, or the lack of preliminaries.
9/17/2011 c7 1Wal Otter
I completly forget Whit/Arashi can help with cheating, how stupid of me.
Nice guestions and reverences, Matrix and the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy. was there other reverences?
Was it that he cant write toad contract or any other summoning contract since naruto bonded with With? Aww jirayas gona be sad, well Naruto can try to summnon something that look at least similiar to toad... sadly there is not one that even looks like a frog. Tonberry is more of a lizard than toad and Typhon is odd pink blob... I guess jiraya has to settle for Shiva.
1Wal OtterI completly forget Whit/Arashi can help with cheating, how stupid of me.
Nice guestions and reverences, Matrix and the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy. was there other reverences?
Was it that he cant write toad contract or any other summoning contract since naruto bonded with With? Aww jirayas gona be sad, well Naruto can try to summnon something that look at least similiar to toad... sadly there is not one that even looks like a frog. Tonberry is more of a lizard than toad and Typhon is odd pink blob... I guess jiraya has to settle for Shiva.
9/17/2011 c7 Dragon2234
The seventh ch as kind of rushed but its a very entertaning story.
But i dont get what the whit is sposed to do except fight akamaru in the third part prelims.
The seventh ch as kind of rushed but its a very entertaning story.
But i dont get what the whit is sposed to do except fight akamaru in the third part prelims.
9/17/2011 c7 37brown phantom
This Sakura needs professional help. Maybe quarantined in a Sasuke-free environment for a time.
Weird test, but you get points for originality at least on being one of the very few fics that actually tell readers what the questions on this test are. I've seen only one other do that.
37brown phantomThis Sakura needs professional help. Maybe quarantined in a Sasuke-free environment for a time.
Weird test, but you get points for originality at least on being one of the very few fics that actually tell readers what the questions on this test are. I've seen only one other do that.
9/13/2011 c6 1Wal Otter
Suggestion for story line. you know how Rydia summmoned titan when she was mad for cecil and kain (even tough she only know how to summon chocobo at beginin). Point is Naruto should pull the same thing (not neceserily Titan, personally i vough for Mist Dragon) when fightin Orochimaru in forest of death.
Keep up good work.
1Wal OtterSuggestion for story line. you know how Rydia summmoned titan when she was mad for cecil and kain (even tough she only know how to summon chocobo at beginin). Point is Naruto should pull the same thing (not neceserily Titan, personally i vough for Mist Dragon) when fightin Orochimaru in forest of death.
Keep up good work.