for Moon Shadow1/7/2012 c2 A Darker Heaven and Hell
Oh my god! I just noticed your picture, and I love it! Crona is one of my favorite characters. Anyway, Greed realy needs to know self control, otherwise he'll just a get a knife to the forehead.
Oh my god! I just noticed your picture, and I love it! Crona is one of my favorite characters. Anyway, Greed realy needs to know self control, otherwise he'll just a get a knife to the forehead.
1/6/2012 c1 A Darker Heaven and Hell
I agree with you. Hughes and Greed and all the other awesome people shouldn't have diead, but Wrath shuld've diead in the first minute of the second episode. And this reminds me just how much Greed died to soon and we didn't get to see him that much.
I agree with you. Hughes and Greed and all the other awesome people shouldn't have diead, but Wrath shuld've diead in the first minute of the second episode. And this reminds me just how much Greed died to soon and we didn't get to see him that much.
12/29/2011 c3 
3Cata-nee
I love how Greed was sort of like, "GET OUT."
But Yue immediately gave him what he wanted promptly after that.
Sort of.
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The dream was very pleasant...until the image of an old hag killing a little fox came to mind. Thank you for the update.
3Cata-neeI love how Greed was sort of like, "GET OUT."
But Yue immediately gave him what he wanted promptly after that.
Sort of.
-
The dream was very pleasant...until the image of an old hag killing a little fox came to mind. Thank you for the update.
12/28/2011 c3 5StoneStrikeAlchemist
I like your story and the characters in it (yue). In the majority of the Greed stories I read, there really is only one problem. Everyone in Devils Nest must die. T.T
Please prolong this tragedy for a while longer. I like the Devils Nest characters. :)
Keep writing more!
-Risa out!
5StoneStrikeAlchemistI like your story and the characters in it (yue). In the majority of the Greed stories I read, there really is only one problem. Everyone in Devils Nest must die. T.T
Please prolong this tragedy for a while longer. I like the Devils Nest characters. :)
Keep writing more!
-Risa out!
12/28/2011 c3 6Certified Chocoholic
Yes, finally you updated~! Hip, hip, hooray~! I kind of like her desire, it's similar to mine.
Suggestion: I suggest you add more feelings into this, emotions. Let me feel the grief within her heart and her yearning to be free!
Well, that was..plain deep... Update?
SINcerely,
LR
6Certified ChocoholicYes, finally you updated~! Hip, hip, hooray~! I kind of like her desire, it's similar to mine.
Suggestion: I suggest you add more feelings into this, emotions. Let me feel the grief within her heart and her yearning to be free!
Well, that was..plain deep... Update?
SINcerely,
LR
12/27/2011 c3 7KHandFF7fanforever
...So, does that mean she someone's bodyguard...i'm confused...Argh, well duh! you would be confused ether way with that small of a hint...damnit now im arguing with myself.
7KHandFF7fanforever...So, does that mean she someone's bodyguard...i'm confused...Argh, well duh! you would be confused ether way with that small of a hint...damnit now im arguing with myself.
12/26/2011 c2 6Certified Chocoholic
I LOVE GREED~! But, he's a womanizer so...it's a giant NO-NO...
Anyways, do please UPDATE~! It's been two months, huh? Update fast or you'll regret it since I neglected my duties as a writer and when I updated my stories, no one reviewed...sigh...
BTW, UPDATE FAST~! Faster than a speeding bullet~! LOL~!
SINcerely,
LR
6Certified ChocoholicI LOVE GREED~! But, he's a womanizer so...it's a giant NO-NO...
Anyways, do please UPDATE~! It's been two months, huh? Update fast or you'll regret it since I neglected my duties as a writer and when I updated my stories, no one reviewed...sigh...
BTW, UPDATE FAST~! Faster than a speeding bullet~! LOL~!
SINcerely,
LR
12/26/2011 c1 Certified Chocoholic
Poor Greed.
Thank you very much for writing this~! I have started loving it~!
SINcerely,
LR
Poor Greed.
Thank you very much for writing this~! I have started loving it~!
SINcerely,
LR
12/5/2011 c2 6The Ever-Changing Alias
Hey~
This seems pretty awesome so far~
Finally a GreedxOCxLing! Both of them are freaking awesome~ And hot :3
Update soon~
6The Ever-Changing AliasHey~
This seems pretty awesome so far~
Finally a GreedxOCxLing! Both of them are freaking awesome~ And hot :3
Update soon~
11/4/2011 c2 3xXxNightIllusionsxXx
Yue sure does love her knives XD but this is a good story and non-mary sueish! I like it!
3xXxNightIllusionsxXxYue sure does love her knives XD but this is a good story and non-mary sueish! I like it!
11/1/2011 c2 7KHandFF7fanforever
*Laughs* That poor girl. always ending up by Greed, though she does a good job putting knife into him.
7KHandFF7fanforever*Laughs* That poor girl. always ending up by Greed, though she does a good job putting knife into him.