for Moon Shadow8/23/2011 c1 Capriicious
Interesting way of starting a story so far I must say. I don't think your rushing it at all. Infact it's interesting how you did start it. Your OC certianly is an interesting one. XD She acts a bit like Ling does.There isn't many stories with Greed and Ling then eventually Ling with Greed's power in him. I'm curious to as the title and also where's things are gonna end up. I think I'll stick around with this and see how things go.
Interesting way of starting a story so far I must say. I don't think your rushing it at all. Infact it's interesting how you did start it. Your OC certianly is an interesting one. XD She acts a bit like Ling does.There isn't many stories with Greed and Ling then eventually Ling with Greed's power in him. I'm curious to as the title and also where's things are gonna end up. I think I'll stick around with this and see how things go.
8/17/2011 c1 
7KHandFF7fanforever
I like it! And i have to agree with you about owning FMA. Too many assume characters die. I guess passing out from hungry is a Xing thing but seeing a girl like her eat 25 plates of food is amazing on its own. Oh, is she short or taller than Ed?
7KHandFF7fanforeverI like it! And i have to agree with you about owning FMA. Too many assume characters die. I guess passing out from hungry is a Xing thing but seeing a girl like her eat 25 plates of food is amazing on its own. Oh, is she short or taller than Ed?