for Elves Among Us4/10/2012 c17 
26CrackinAndProudOfIt
Wow, I really loved the dialogue between Fëanor and Galadriel, especially this line: "You killed that girl." Chilling! You portray the tension in the family very well; it makes me wonder how the war in the First Age would have been different had Fëanor lived. And do I see a wedding in the future? :D
-Crackers
26CrackinAndProudOfItWow, I really loved the dialogue between Fëanor and Galadriel, especially this line: "You killed that girl." Chilling! You portray the tension in the family very well; it makes me wonder how the war in the First Age would have been different had Fëanor lived. And do I see a wedding in the future? :D
-Crackers
4/10/2012 c17 A Reader
Ergh. Galadriel seems slightly immature, even though I can understand that she's furious. Feanor... I felt like saying, is that the best you can do? He seems slightly... powerless, lame even. But Brianna and Maedhros... how sweet! I can't wait for her response!
And, despite my criticism, this was an excellent chapter, and I can't wait for more.
I do have a major thing against Galadriel, which is why I tend to be really unjust with her, in case you wanted to know. It's a fault of mine that I'm working on.
Cheerio!
Ergh. Galadriel seems slightly immature, even though I can understand that she's furious. Feanor... I felt like saying, is that the best you can do? He seems slightly... powerless, lame even. But Brianna and Maedhros... how sweet! I can't wait for her response!
And, despite my criticism, this was an excellent chapter, and I can't wait for more.
I do have a major thing against Galadriel, which is why I tend to be really unjust with her, in case you wanted to know. It's a fault of mine that I'm working on.
Cheerio!
12/26/2011 c16 26CrackinAndProudOfIt
That was very beautifully and powerfully written! You captured her emotions really well! :) I can't wait for more!
-Crackers
26CrackinAndProudOfItThat was very beautifully and powerfully written! You captured her emotions really well! :) I can't wait for more!
-Crackers
12/11/2011 c15 CrackinAndProudOfIt
This story continues to get more and more intriguing and exciting as you introduce new characters! I loved the description of the hotel, as well: such amazing detail! Keep up the great work!
-Crackers :)
This story continues to get more and more intriguing and exciting as you introduce new characters! I loved the description of the hotel, as well: such amazing detail! Keep up the great work!
-Crackers :)
11/30/2011 c14 CrackinAndProudOfIt
Why did Fingon and Co. have to come back right at that moment? *sniffles* I love the romance element, and everyone continues to be so in-character! :D Awesome! I can't wait for more!
-Crackers
Why did Fingon and Co. have to come back right at that moment? *sniffles* I love the romance element, and everyone continues to be so in-character! :D Awesome! I can't wait for more!
-Crackers
11/22/2011 c13 CrackinAndProudOfIt
Aww, thanks for the shout-out! :) I loved this new chapter! You painted her confused train of thought and fearful emotions beautifully. I hope she regains her memories soon! :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Crackers
Aww, thanks for the shout-out! :) I loved this new chapter! You painted her confused train of thought and fearful emotions beautifully. I hope she regains her memories soon! :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Crackers
11/12/2011 c12 CrackinAndProudOfIt
I continue to love this story! You keep it so interesting and exciting! I'm glad you provided a bit of an explanation of their situation in this chapter, since I haven't (yet!) read the original story. Update soon! :)
-Crackers
I continue to love this story! You keep it so interesting and exciting! I'm glad you provided a bit of an explanation of their situation in this chapter, since I haven't (yet!) read the original story. Update soon! :)
-Crackers
11/6/2011 c11 CrackinAndProudOfIt
That was amazing! I loved your characterization of Feanor; your descriptions of him both in looks and actions were spot-on! It's so interesting to hear what the elves think about The Silmarillion, too, the book that seals their fates. Great work, and I hope for more soon! :)
That was amazing! I loved your characterization of Feanor; your descriptions of him both in looks and actions were spot-on! It's so interesting to hear what the elves think about The Silmarillion, too, the book that seals their fates. Great work, and I hope for more soon! :)
10/30/2011 c10 CrackinAndProudOfIt
Whoa! I was so surprised when Thuringwethil showed up! I CANNOT wait to see what happens next! Post more soon! :)
-Crackers
Whoa! I was so surprised when Thuringwethil showed up! I CANNOT wait to see what happens next! Post more soon! :)
-Crackers
10/16/2011 c8 CrackinAndProudOfIt
Oh, wow, this is really good! Though it's very strange, the idea of the Silm's characters in modern times is very intriguing and fun to read about. I love all of the drama that's going on, with all of these three different characters at once. I'm especially excited to see what's going to happen with the book, and also about who the mysterious stranger with James was (I have a guess, though!), and about Sauron, and...oh, I'm excited for all of it! Update soon! :)
-Crackers
Oh, wow, this is really good! Though it's very strange, the idea of the Silm's characters in modern times is very intriguing and fun to read about. I love all of the drama that's going on, with all of these three different characters at once. I'm especially excited to see what's going to happen with the book, and also about who the mysterious stranger with James was (I have a guess, though!), and about Sauron, and...oh, I'm excited for all of it! Update soon! :)
-Crackers
10/15/2011 c9 12Tiara d' Cullen
Oh wow! James you dolt head. He is a great character, I really like him! This chapter is really great.
12Tiara d' CullenOh wow! James you dolt head. He is a great character, I really like him! This chapter is really great.
9/14/2011 c7 Tiara d' Cullen
Oh my gosh! Why, I hate that Sauron can change his form... ugh, he sends shivers up my back.
I am officially for Lizzie, she is awesome!
Oh my gosh! Why, I hate that Sauron can change his form... ugh, he sends shivers up my back.
I am officially for Lizzie, she is awesome!