for Deadly Promise7/28/2012 c1 theasianwonder
Woah I just had a thought! Maybe may just got possessed by sapphire or kidnapped! Either way drew run! Or fly! May should already know that she is gonna die and can't put faith in drew to save her, therefore she is not may at least in this chapter. I sound whack right now...but those are my thoughts.
theasianwonder
Woah I just had a thought! Maybe may just got possessed by sapphire or kidnapped! Either way drew run! Or fly! May should already know that she is gonna die and can't put faith in drew to save her, therefore she is not may at least in this chapter. I sound whack right now...but those are my thoughts.
theasianwonder
7/28/2012 c13 
4leafxrose1312
i think may and sapphire changed people somehow like after drew kissed her :o good job - i love the original story and the sequel im so happy you arent like some authors that completely rip off the original book because the sequel sucks, your sequel is awesome! but i really dont like cliffys. please update soon!
4leafxrose1312i think may and sapphire changed people somehow like after drew kissed her :o good job - i love the original story and the sequel im so happy you arent like some authors that completely rip off the original book because the sequel sucks, your sequel is awesome! but i really dont like cliffys. please update soon!
7/27/2012 c13 7Steelrush
Here I am with my review:
I liked the disclaimer, and the beginning...I didn't think Lyra would be scared of May. That wasn't expected...
Short chapter, but I liked it. And the end, that makes my skin tingle.
I take it that May doesn't like Drew...like, at all, now?
Update when possible-
7SteelrushHere I am with my review:
I liked the disclaimer, and the beginning...I didn't think Lyra would be scared of May. That wasn't expected...
Short chapter, but I liked it. And the end, that makes my skin tingle.
I take it that May doesn't like Drew...like, at all, now?
Update when possible-
7/27/2012 c13 3MortalHeartImmortalSoul
I'm willing to bet it's Sapphire. Somehow. Don't question my motives! *flails*
I decided that, instead of spamming your review page, I'd just review at the end. This is a very good story. (As was it's precedor, by the way.) It's a different concept than I've seen previously. I hope you update soon. :D
3MortalHeartImmortalSoulI'm willing to bet it's Sapphire. Somehow. Don't question my motives! *flails*
I decided that, instead of spamming your review page, I'd just review at the end. This is a very good story. (As was it's precedor, by the way.) It's a different concept than I've seen previously. I hope you update soon. :D
7/27/2012 c13 theasianwonder
Good god! Is it sapphire? Holy freaking lord drew if you kissed sapphire-man I don't know just get out if there!
Theasianwonder
Good god! Is it sapphire? Holy freaking lord drew if you kissed sapphire-man I don't know just get out if there!
Theasianwonder
7/27/2012 c13 41Featherain
...
WHUT
WHUT
WHUTTTT
WHAT'S GOING ON
INCEPTIONNNN
Anyways, a few grammar mistakes, but I could barely notice them. I'm just happy you updated! Don't disappear for another half a year now, you!
41Featherain...
WHUT
WHUT
WHUTTTT
WHAT'S GOING ON
INCEPTIONNNN
Anyways, a few grammar mistakes, but I could barely notice them. I'm just happy you updated! Don't disappear for another half a year now, you!
7/15/2012 c12 Guest
Yeess you finally updated i'v been waiting forever for this im so happy you didnt abandon your story .
Yeess you finally updated i'v been waiting forever for this im so happy you didnt abandon your story .
7/11/2012 c12 7Steelrush
Ah, man, I've been waiting so long for this! But it was way worth it!
The darkness always wins...? That's not true!
So, May and Drew share yet another kiss, but not short enough, it was.
Anticipating the next chapter, I am! Update soon, please-
:D
7SteelrushAh, man, I've been waiting so long for this! But it was way worth it!
The darkness always wins...? That's not true!
So, May and Drew share yet another kiss, but not short enough, it was.
Anticipating the next chapter, I am! Update soon, please-
:D
7/11/2012 c12 berriesxcakes101
It's about time you came back! Good chapter and that's all I have to say. But I love this story so keep up the good work and update soon!
It's about time you came back! Good chapter and that's all I have to say. But I love this story so keep up the good work and update soon!
7/11/2012 c12 Effusive
I enjoyed your story! I think you should write more in each paragraph/line since they're really short. :]
I enjoyed your story! I think you should write more in each paragraph/line since they're really short. :]