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4Berserker
Good story so far, can't wait for the rest.
You may want to amend the end of this chapter, because Dawn's underage and therefore cannot be legally questioned by anyone without a parent or legal guardian, which is Buffy, present.
4BerserkerGood story so far, can't wait for the rest.
You may want to amend the end of this chapter, because Dawn's underage and therefore cannot be legally questioned by anyone without a parent or legal guardian, which is Buffy, present.
10/23/2011 c11 enderverse
That was funny but its chapter 11 and buffy still hasn't fought a dinosaur.
That was funny but its chapter 11 and buffy still hasn't fought a dinosaur.
10/22/2011 c11 10Wonderbee31
Oh lordy, can imagine drunken Spike and a seething Xander getting cabin fever before long, that and Angel asking about the car LOL, and Cordy with her usual concern and caring attitude.
10Wonderbee31Oh lordy, can imagine drunken Spike and a seething Xander getting cabin fever before long, that and Angel asking about the car LOL, and Cordy with her usual concern and caring attitude.
10/11/2011 c10 10Wonderbee31
Very nice meet there, and just cool moment of small talk and getting to know one another, as well as it appearing to be a Sonya who's not the greed head she's made out to be at times, and would like to connect with her sisters children.
10Wonderbee31Very nice meet there, and just cool moment of small talk and getting to know one another, as well as it appearing to be a Sonya who's not the greed head she's made out to be at times, and would like to connect with her sisters children.
10/10/2011 c9 Wonderbee31
Well, never thought of Ethan popping in like he did, but with all the chaos being caused by the dinos, it'd be perfect for him, and with Glory on the way as well, makes me wonder if the island might end up sinking into the ocean.
Well, never thought of Ethan popping in like he did, but with all the chaos being caused by the dinos, it'd be perfect for him, and with Glory on the way as well, makes me wonder if the island might end up sinking into the ocean.
10/10/2011 c9 3dreameralways
The first meeting of Buffy and "Paul" should be interesting. Actually kind of hope the JP people actually get to see it.
3dreameralwaysThe first meeting of Buffy and "Paul" should be interesting. Actually kind of hope the JP people actually get to see it.
10/9/2011 c8 DHB-Spike
This has the potential to be really good. I actually hope that was foreshaowing Glory get into a fight with a T-rex, raptor, or an allosaurus if you work in Site B (JP II).
This has the potential to be really good. I actually hope that was foreshaowing Glory get into a fight with a T-rex, raptor, or an allosaurus if you work in Site B (JP II).