for Meeting the Little Mermaid12/15/2012 c20 
5Cat O'Hara Butler
No! You can't leave the story there! I need to know if Ariel is alright, and if Eric swam to the surface or if he remained to make sure Ariel was alright. And if he did try to swim, how would he get so far while still weak and on one breath of stale air? Oh so many questions and no answers until you update!
5Cat O'Hara ButlerNo! You can't leave the story there! I need to know if Ariel is alright, and if Eric swam to the surface or if he remained to make sure Ariel was alright. And if he did try to swim, how would he get so far while still weak and on one breath of stale air? Oh so many questions and no answers until you update!
11/7/2012 c5 Jesse27
You know what? I apologise. I just realised that that was an attempt on creating an accent for Sebastian. In that case, I urge you to revise this chapter. The reason why I didn't get it the first time was because I caught some of those words in Eric's POV. I would like you to forget my first review if possible. It's a good story and I hope you continue writing.
You know what? I apologise. I just realised that that was an attempt on creating an accent for Sebastian. In that case, I urge you to revise this chapter. The reason why I didn't get it the first time was because I caught some of those words in Eric's POV. I would like you to forget my first review if possible. It's a good story and I hope you continue writing.
11/7/2012 c5 Jesse27
Well, I do like the plot, so I'll give you that. However, I was extremely put off by your texting language. In the middle of this chapter, words like 'dis', 'de', and 'dat', would appear. I was surprised, because you had seemed like a relatively okay author. Everything else from your sentence structure to your vocabulary was fine, and then words like that pop out, and I can't help but go 'ugh'. What a waste. Maybe you did improve after this, but sorry, I really can't stand to read more. Good luck though, many others seem to like it.
Well, I do like the plot, so I'll give you that. However, I was extremely put off by your texting language. In the middle of this chapter, words like 'dis', 'de', and 'dat', would appear. I was surprised, because you had seemed like a relatively okay author. Everything else from your sentence structure to your vocabulary was fine, and then words like that pop out, and I can't help but go 'ugh'. What a waste. Maybe you did improve after this, but sorry, I really can't stand to read more. Good luck though, many others seem to like it.
9/20/2012 c20 9mochiusagi
Sebastian is dead! *wails* I know he was a pain, but he really did care about Ariel, and died for it. Everyone is hurt, dying or dead, and Trition wonders if he's the monster. More please!
9mochiusagiSebastian is dead! *wails* I know he was a pain, but he really did care about Ariel, and died for it. Everyone is hurt, dying or dead, and Trition wonders if he's the monster. More please!
8/3/2012 c19 1norisclub
OH MY GOD! JUST WOW that was awesome did sebatian die who died! ahhhh update soon please i have to know! AWESOME FIC BY THE WAY!
offical mustache of approval :{D
1norisclubOH MY GOD! JUST WOW that was awesome did sebatian die who died! ahhhh update soon please i have to know! AWESOME FIC BY THE WAY!
offical mustache of approval :{D
8/1/2012 c19 9mochiusagi
Not another cliffie! Did Sebastian really sacrifice himself? I knew its always his duty to watch out for the princesses, espically Ariel tr troublemaker, but dying for his cause? Hmmm why do I have a feeling that Aquatta and Alease are the tragic lovers? More please!
9mochiusagiNot another cliffie! Did Sebastian really sacrifice himself? I knew its always his duty to watch out for the princesses, espically Ariel tr troublemaker, but dying for his cause? Hmmm why do I have a feeling that Aquatta and Alease are the tragic lovers? More please!