for Friendship Amongst the Flames8/30/2011 c7 
12ForIHaveOvercomeTheWorld
Oooh. Mean cliffhanger. Thanks for updating so soon. I like the banter between Arthur and Merlin, "The shock of it might kill me!" That was funny. Update again soon.
12ForIHaveOvercomeTheWorldOooh. Mean cliffhanger. Thanks for updating so soon. I like the banter between Arthur and Merlin, "The shock of it might kill me!" That was funny. Update again soon.
8/29/2011 c6 ForIHaveOvercomeTheWorld
I really liked this chapter, Arthur escaping in order to help Merlin to escape was good. Please update soon!
I really liked this chapter, Arthur escaping in order to help Merlin to escape was good. Please update soon!
8/24/2011 c3 ForIHaveOvercomeTheWorld
Good story. It's not super high quality in writing, but then again; very few fanfics are. I think for a first fic it's very good. Some long time writers aren't this good. I was surprised to see that no one had reviewed; I think a story like this deserves plenty of reviews. Maybe people aren't reading or reviewing because of the summary, it wasn't too bad as they go but maybe others might read if it was a bit different. I mean no offense by anything that i have said and am only trying to help you. I am currently writing my own first fanfic and have already gotten several reviews, so i see no reason why yours should get them as well. Keep up the good work!
Good story. It's not super high quality in writing, but then again; very few fanfics are. I think for a first fic it's very good. Some long time writers aren't this good. I was surprised to see that no one had reviewed; I think a story like this deserves plenty of reviews. Maybe people aren't reading or reviewing because of the summary, it wasn't too bad as they go but maybe others might read if it was a bit different. I mean no offense by anything that i have said and am only trying to help you. I am currently writing my own first fanfic and have already gotten several reviews, so i see no reason why yours should get them as well. Keep up the good work!