3/20/2012 c4 4lucy heartfilia2457
keep on writing, u cant imagine how excited i am about this story xx

2/14/2012 c1 Chocolate-Tama
here is my character!

Name : Leanne

Age: 15

Gender: female

Civillian: no

Pirate

rank: you pick

Fruit user: a devil fruit that has yet to be identified, power: can bring a person back from the dead(humans, devil fruit users, animals, etc), can go through a person body and can take their soul.

personality: She is like another luffy but is a girl, and tomboyish.

other: she has a monkey tail but hides it.

appearance: Black messy hair, Black eyes, tan skin, 5.0, has skull tattoo under left eye.

2/12/2012 c3 4lucy heartfilia2457
yay! new chapter! please carry on updating, love both shows xx

My character-

Name:Valkyrie Ravenscroft

Age:18

Gender:Female

Civillian:Yes

Marine or pirate:Pirate

Crew's name(or rank):left her crew a little while ago, was first mate of Chitan pirate crew.

Fruit user:Yes, fruit that lets your voice control any person of choice around you

Personality:laid back girl with a crazy attitude but never get on the wrong side off her

Other:gets annoyed when people waste her time and holds grudges well

Appearance:black and red laced bodice, red leggings, skull and cross bones patterned skirt, quite a bit of jewelery on her wrists and around neck.

she is my character i have not gotten round to writting a story to, if u add her some where, have fun, thanks xx

1/1/2012 c2 Karasu-archer
I am really liking this so far! (I get why you had to have everyone so OOC in Fairy Tail too. Why else would Lucy leave right?) I hope you keep writing it and updating! I'm looking forward to it!

Thank you for your hard work!

11/28/2011 c2 4lucy heartfilia2457
in really into this story!

i love lucy and one piece!

please carry on the story!

9/2/2011 c2 1the Original Anonymous
It's a bit longer. Could be longer still, but I won't say any more. Just for a quick update, which keys does Lucy have at the moment? Lastly, please don't make Luffy the dragon stellar spirit. I really think that would be a bad plot device. Other than that, nice chapter.

8/27/2011 c1 1the Original Anonymous
This fix is horrifyingly short. However, that's not a big whoop in my book. Unfortunately, I do have a severe ** fit to throw about few small things. The characters are exceedingly OOC. I can understand a little difference from the cannon, but it's a bit much. For example, I'm pretty sure Erza would sooner cut her other eye out before she acted like that, especially to Lucy. Gray is another good example. In the cannon, Lucy is a wuss, not an annoyance. There's a difference, and I don't think you're portraying that well. Secondly, the story is a little weak. It needs more development than that. (you know, longer chapters could help a little with that) Anyway, that wasn't too bad, right? You do have a good thing going, so don't get depressed. I'm just prone to roving ** moments. Your grasp on the English language makes me feel all cuddly inside, so you're already better off than about half of the authors on the website. Please update.